礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Говорите более уверенно и кратко. Уберите повторы и заполнители (umm, you know) и дайте чёткое основное предложение, затем одно-два уточняющих предложения с конкретным примером. Также избегайте разговорных фраз вроде «being honest» — лучше «To be honest».

範例: To be honest, I'm not very good at choosing gifts. I often struggle to think of original ideas, so I usually ask AI or look for inspiration online. For example, last month I used a gift guide to pick a book for my friend.

建議: Сформулируйте ответ в два-три чётких предложения, используйте связку и конкретику (e.g. 'mostly on birthdays' + пример). Уберите лишние слова и грамматические ошибки (e.g. 'certificates' лучше уточнить: 'gift cards' или 'vouchers').

範例: I usually give gifts on birthdays, which are the most common occasions. Often I buy gift cards or vouchers so recipients can choose what they want. I also give small presents at New Year, like sweets or small gadgets.

建議: Дайте чёткое вступительное предложение и конкретизируйте критерии выбора: интересы, потребности, бюджет. Используйте связки (for example, also) и избегайте прерываний и неопределённостей в речи.

範例: I consider the recipient's interests and needs when choosing a gift. For example, if someone likes cooking I might buy a special kitchen tool; if they enjoy reading I choose a book. I also keep my budget in mind.

建議: Избегайте эмоционально окрашенных фраз без объяснения и нецензурной лексики; говорите прямо почему вы не делаете ручные подарки и добавьте одну конкретную деталь или пример. Стройте ответ в два предложения и завершайте мысль.

範例: No, I have never given a handmade gift because I find crafting difficult and time-consuming. I usually buy gifts from shops, although sometimes I make simple cards for close friends.

建議: Будьте яснее и короче: выразите своё мнение в первом предложении, затем объясните причину с конкретным примером. Избегайте повторов и нечетких фраз ('we have the same position that works' непонятно).

範例: No, I don't think expensive gifts are better at expressing feelings. My friends and I prefer modest, thoughtful presents because money is limited, and a small personalised gift often means more than something costly.

× Umm, being honest, I, I'm not a big, I'm, I'm not really good at giving gifts as I'm, I always have lack of ideas when I have to choose something for my friends and family.

✓ To be honest, I'm not really good at giving gifts because I always lack ideas when I have to choose something for my friends and family.

The original uses awkward pronoun and idiom phrases ('being honest' and 'I always have lack of ideas'). Use 'To be honest' and the verb 'lack' without 'have'. Also remove unnecessary repeated pronouns to make the sentence natural. Suggested improvement: Use concise subjects and correct collocations (e.g., 'lack ideas') and avoid repetition of 'I'.

× So basically the most popular celebration is birthday of my friends or family.

✓ So basically the most common celebration is a friend's or family member's birthday.

Missing articles and possessive structure: 'birthday of my friends or family' is unnatural in English. Use 'a friend's or family member's birthday' or 'friends' and 'family's birthdays' depending on meaning. Use 'common' rather than 'popular' in this context.

× I used to give some certificates that usually provide all they need for their birthdays and umm sometimes I have small presents for a new year as a new year gift for. It.

✓ I usually give gift certificates that provide what they need for their birthdays, and sometimes I give small presents for the New Year.

Original contains awkward tense ('used to' implies past habit), incorrect word order and punctuation, and a stray 'for. It'. Replace 'used to' with 'usually' to indicate current habit, use 'gift certificates', and correct 'New Year' capitalization and phrase order.

× Oh, that's a complicated one, because usually I pay attention to some interests of a human who I'm going to spend gift for.

✓ Oh, that's a complicated one, because usually I pay attention to the interests of the person I'm going to buy a gift for.

Use 'the person' instead of 'a human' and correct verb phrase 'buy a gift for' instead of 'spend gift for'. Also change word order to place 'for' at the end of the clause familiar in spoken English.

× Umm, I'm. I'm really interested in finding something suitable for every person, but it's.

✓ I'm really interested in finding something suitable for each person, but it's difficult.

Original is fragmented and ends abruptly with 'it's.' Complete the thought by adding 'difficult' (or similar) to explain why it's complicated. Use 'each person' for clarity.

× I have never given a handmade gift as I feel down in the dumps when I have to do some **** *** some hand souvenirs by myself.

✓ I have never given a handmade gift because I feel down in the dumps when I have to make handmade souvenirs by myself.

Replace 'as' with 'because' for clearer causal connection, use present perfect 'have never given' is correct, change 'do some **** *** some hand souvenirs' to 'make handmade souvenirs'. Use consistent verb 'make' for creating items.

× I'm used to giving presents from shop markets.

✓ I'm used to buying presents at markets or shops.

'Giving presents from shop markets' is awkward. Use 'buying presents at markets or shops' or 'buying presents from shops'. 'Used to' is fine to indicate habit.

× Sometimes I can make a.

✓ Sometimes I can make one myself.

Original is an incomplete sentence ending with 'a.' Complete it by specifying 'one' (a handmade gift) and adding 'myself' to convey that the speaker can sometimes make gifts.

× Not really as we have, as we all my friends have the same position that works.

✓ Not really, because all my friends and I work in similar positions.

Original word order and phrasing are confusing. Use 'because' for reason, 'all my friends and I' for subject order, and 'work in similar positions' for clarity.

× So we don't have really, really, really brilliant amount of money.

✓ So we don't have a large amount of money.

'Brilliant amount of money' is incorrect collocation. Use 'a large amount of money' or 'much money'. Remove repetitive 'really' for conciseness.

× So we spend our gifts to be so we prefer.

✓ So we prefer to spend less on gifts.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Rephrase to 'we prefer to spend less on gifts' to express that they do not buy expensive gifts.