礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答を簡潔にし、主題文で直接答えた後に1〜2文の理由をつけてください。文法（時制、冠詞、前置詞）と語順の誤りを直し、冗長な語（例："I don't so sorry Sir"）を避けましょう。より自然な表現を使い、語彙は文脈に適した単語（"trendy"や"original ideas"）を選んでください。具体的には：主語＋動詞の基本文を保ち、短い付加情報を接続詞（"because", "so"）でつなぎます。

範例: No, I'm not very good at choosing gifts. I like to give original, handmade items because I don't follow trends, so I often worry what the recipient will like.

建議: 質問に直接答えた後、具体例を1〜2つ挙げて理由を説明しましょう。文を簡潔にし、不要な語順の誤りを直します。例えば、祝日や特別な機会（誕生日、クリスマス、記念日）を挙げ、贈る物の具体例と理由を付け加えてください。接続詞（"for example", "because"）を使うと自然です。

範例: I usually give gifts on birthdays and at Christmas. For example, I often give hand cream or a handkerchief because they are practical and easy to choose.

建議: 主題に直接答え、考慮する点を明確に列挙してください（例：予算、相手の好み、関係性）。表現はシンプルにし、曖昧な語（"kind of rude"の説明）を明確に説明します。また比較や理由をつなぐ接続詞を使いましょう。

範例: I usually consider my budget and the recipient's preferences when choosing a gift. If someone gives me a present, I sometimes match the price roughly because I want to be fair, although I know that can seem a bit awkward.

建議: 良い内容ですが文法（時制と代名詞）と語順を整え、文を自然に接続してください。過去の習慣は過去形で、現在の習慣は現在形で述べます。人を指す代名詞（her → my friend/sister）を明確にし、"because I couldn't afford store-bought gifts"のように理由を自然に表現しましょう。

範例: Yes. When I was a child I often made handmade gifts because my family couldn't afford expensive presents. I used to bake a cake for my friend's birthday every year. Nowadays I bake a chocolate cake for my sister and I plan to make a cheesecake for my mother's birthday.

建議: 意見は述べられていますが、表現を明確にし、語彙ミス（"upwardly rate"や"20°"）を直しましょう。比較と理由を論理的に接続し、具体例（家族に手紙を渡す習慣とその理由）を短く整理してください。また金額の比較は明瞭に書くこと。

範例: I think expensive gifts can be appreciated by some friends who like luxury items, but for my family I prefer to give a heartfelt letter. I give letters every year because it feels unfair to buy very different-priced gifts for siblings.

× No I'm not.

✓ No, I'm not good at giving gifts.

The original sentence is short and lacks clarity; adding the full response with correct pronoun use clarifies meaning and completes the idea. Use a comma after 'No' and include the predicate 'good at giving gifts' to match the question context.

× I always think about what should I give to my give birthday present for my friend.

✓ I always think about what I should give my friend for his or her birthday.

The original word order is incorrect for an indirect question; use 'what I should give' not 'what should I give'. Remove the duplicated 'give' and place 'for his or her birthday' at the end. Ensure pronoun agrees with possessor.

× I have so many original type.

✓ I have many original ideas/types of gifts.

'Original type' is ungrammatical; use 'original ideas' or 'types of gifts'. 'So many' can be 'many' depending on tone; plural noun required. This corrects noun choice and plurality.

× I'm don't like trend and I don't know what is trend.

✓ I don't like trends and I don't know what is trendy.

Use 'don't' not 'I'm don't'. Plural 'trends' fits general dislike. 'What is trend' should be 'what is trendy' or 'what the trends are'; fix word order for indirect question.

× I don't so sorry Sir.

✓ I'm sorry, Sir, but I'm not good at following trends.

Original mixes negatives and 'sorry' incorrectly. Provide a polite apology and clarify meaning. Use commas for vocative 'Sir'.

× Ioffer you give gift to people in birthday or Christmas?

✓ Do you offer/give gifts to people on birthdays or at Christmas?

'Ioffer you' is garbled; likely intended question 'Do you give gifts...'. Use 'on birthdays' and 'at Christmas' and proper question structure starting with 'Do'.

× I really don't know what should I give them to.

✓ I really don't know what I should give them.

Indirect question word order: use 'what I should give' not 'what should I give'. Remove redundant 'to' at end.

× I always give hand cream or handkerchief.

✓ I always give hand cream or a handkerchief.

Add article 'a' before singular countable noun 'handkerchief'. For mass noun 'hand cream' can remain without article or use 'a tube of hand cream'.

× Umm I consider the price if someone give if the person give me birthday present.

✓ I consider the price if someone gives me a birthday present.

Use third person singular 'gives' for 'someone/ the person'. Remove duplicated 'if' and simplify phrase to correct tense and subject-verb agreement.

× So I know it's not it's kind of rude but I check price and I give them same price of present.

✓ I know it's kind of rude, but I check the price and give them a present of the same value.

Fix contractions and punctuation; use 'the price' and 'a present of the same value' for natural phrasing. Add comma before 'but'.

× When I was a child I often made handmade gift because of I didn't have enough money.

✓ When I was a child I often made handmade gifts because I didn't have enough money.

Use plural 'gifts' for repeated action and correct word order: 'because I didn't have' not 'because of I didn't'.

× I bake cake for her birthday every year.

✓ I bake a cake for her birthday every year.

Add article 'a' before 'cake' for singular countable noun. Present simple 'bake' is fine for habitual action.

× These days I bake chocolate cake for my sister and I'll bake cheesecake for my mom birthday.

✓ These days I bake a chocolate cake for my sister, and I'll bake a cheesecake for my mom's birthday.

Add articles 'a' before 'chocolate cake' and 'a cheesecake'. Use possessive 'mom's birthday'. Maintain tense consistency and punctuation.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

Question is acceptable as written; no grammatical correction needed.

× I think expensive gifts can be upwardly rate for my some of my friends because they appreciate luxury items, but for my family I prefer give letter as gift.

✓ I think expensive gifts can be appropriate for some of my friends because they appreciate luxury items, but for my family I prefer to give a letter as a gift.

Replace 'upwardly rate' with 'appropriate'. Remove duplicate 'my'. Use 'prefer to give' and include articles 'a letter' and 'a gift'.

× I give my family letter every year because it will be feel unfair if I bought $50.00 for my eldest sister and only 20°.

✓ I give my family a letter every year because it would feel unfair if I bought $50.00 for my eldest sister and only $20 for another sibling.

Add article 'a' before 'letter'. Use conditional 'would feel' for hypothetical. Fix money notation and compare with 'for another sibling' or 'for my other siblings' to clarify. Use consistent currency format.