礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更直接并且句子更准确，减少重复与语法错误。可以先一句回答主旨（Yes/No），然后简要说明原因，并用一个清晰的例子支持。注意时态和代词一致，避免重复短语如“whether like it or not”。每个答案控制在最长五句内。

範例: Not really. I often worry that my friends might not like what I choose, so I find gift-giving stressful. For example, I once bought a sweater that didn’t fit at all, which made me feel bad. Now I try to ask subtle questions about sizes and preferences before buying.

建議: 回答要明确并且避免犹豫语气。先给出直接答案（e.g. on birthdays），然后用一两个具体句子支持，保持代词一致并完成句子，不要留下未完成的部分。

範例: I usually give gifts on birthdays. For instance, I bought a sweater for a friend on his birthday last year and he was very happy. Sometimes I also give small presents on special occasions like graduations or holidays.

建議: 回答应结构化：先给出要点（喜好和尺寸），然后用连接词展开原因和例子。避免重复（如‘I I’）和碎片句，确保句子完整。可以适当使用连接词如“because”“for example”。

範例: I mainly consider whether the person will like the gift and whether it will fit them. For example, I always check sizes because once I bought a sweatshirt that was too large for my friend, so she couldn’t wear it.

建議: 澄清语义并修正用词（handmade, close）。先肯定回答，然后说明为什么做手工礼物并给出背景，控制语速避免填充词。确保表达条理清晰。

範例: Yes, I have. I once made a handmade scarf for my close friend’s birthday because we have been close since school. I wanted the gift to feel personal and special, so I spent time knitting it myself.

建議: 回答要更凝练并避免重复（e.g. compare, compare）。先明确立场（No），然后给两个支持理由并举例。修正语法，如用单数/复数一致和完成例子。

範例: No, I don’t think expensive gifts are better. I believe the thought behind a gift matters more than its price because personal meaning shows you care. For example, I once gave a heartfelt letter and a small handmade item to my best friend, and he appreciated it more than any costly present.

× I'm not very good at giving gifts because I always worry about the present that my friend whether like it or not.

✓ I'm not very good at giving gifts because I always worry about whether my friend will like the present or not.

这是句子结构和从句顺序的问题。原句中“the present that my friend whether like it or not”结构混乱，应把“whether”引导的宾语从句放在动词之后，并用将来时或情态动词表示对将来感受的担忧。建议把从句改为“whether my friend will like the present or not”。

× One time I bought a sweater to my friend, but the size is too large, too small.

✓ One time I bought a sweater for my friend, but the size was either too large or too small.

此句存在介词使用和值与数的表达问题（兼含单复数/搭配）。首先应该用动词短语“buy something for someone”而不是“to”。原句“but the size is too large, too small”缺少连接词并且时态需与事件一致，改为“was either too large or too small”。建议使用“for”和“either...or...”来表达两种可能性。

× I usually give other gifts in her birthday.

✓ I usually give other people gifts on her birthday.

原句中“other gifts”与语境不符，应为“other people”或直接“gifts to others”。同时英语中说“on her birthday”而不是“in her birthday”。因此改为“I usually give other people gifts on her birthday”。

× One time I bought a sweater to my friend in his birthday.

✓ One time I bought a sweater for my friend on his birthday.

同样应使用“buy ... for ...”而非“to”，并用“on his birthday”来表示在生日那天。此处也注意性别代词需和前文一致（若之前为her则应为her）。

× He uh, he was very happy and maybe I would give a gift to my friend in.

✓ He was very happy, and maybe I would give him a gift again in the future.

原句末尾不完整，“in”后面缺少时间状语。应补充完整的时间短语如“in the future”，并修正代词和句子流畅性。建议用完整表达“give him a gift again in the future”。

× I I was thinking the present that whether my friend like it or not and I often think about the size because one time I bought a sweatshirt for my friends but the size is not suitable for her so.

✓ I often think about whether my friend will like the present or not, and I also often consider the size because one time I bought a sweatshirt for my friend but the size was not suitable for her.

句子有重复和从句结构问题。不要混用过去进行时和一般现在时来表达常态。用“often think about whether...”来引导宾语从句，且将事件的时态保持为过去（bought ... was not suitable）。同时“friends”应为单数“friend”与后文的“her”一致。建议简化句子并统一时态。

× Of course I gave a handmaid's weather for my friend on her birthday.

✓ Of course I gave a handmade sweater to my friend on her birthday.

原句中“handmaid's weather”是拼写与词语选择错误。正确应为“handmade sweater”。同时用“give ... to ...”更自然。建议检查常见单词拼写并使用固定搭配“handmade + clothing”与“give ... to ...”。

× We have been closed same uh since the school days.

✓ We have been close since our school days.

原句“closed same”不合语法，应该用形容词“close”（亲密的）而不是“closed”（关闭的）。“since the school days”应为“since our school days”。建议选择正确形容词并使用所有格代词使表达自然。

× I wanted to give give her a gift personally and specially so.

✓ I wanted to give her a gift personally and especially for her.

原句有重复“give give”，并且“specially so”不自然。改为“personally and especially for her”或“as something special”更符合表达习惯。建议去掉重复并调整副词位置。

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

此句本身为考官提问，不需要改动。保留原句。

× In my opinion, I think the price is not important and compare, compare with the price.

✓ In my opinion, I think the price is not important compared with personal feelings.

原句有重复“compare, compare”且结构混乱。应使用“compared with”来引出比较对象，且改为“compared with personal feelings”使句子完整。建议避免重复并使用正确比较短语。

× I think, uh, personal feelings is more essential and crucial.

✓ I think personal feelings are more important and meaningful.

主谓不一致：复数名词“personal feelings”应配复数动词“are”。此外“essential and crucial”重复意义，改为“important and meaningful”更自然。建议注意主谓一致并避免冗余近义词。

× For example, once I'm I gave my best.

✓ For example, once I gave my best.

原句中有多余的“I”和时态混乱。去掉多余词，保留过去时“gave”以描述过去的举动。建议说话时注意删去重复词并保持时态一致。