礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition and fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Reduce hesitation words like “umm” and avoid repeating phrases.

範例: Yes, I’m good at giving gifts. I choose presents based on the recipient’s tastes and expectations, so they usually appreciate them. For example, for a friend who loves cooking I bought a high-quality knife set, which she used every day.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and then add one specific example with a linking phrase. Avoid vague phrases like “child's event” and unnecessary filler words.

範例: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays and weddings. For instance, at my cousin’s birthday last month I gave a book related to his studies because he enjoys reading.

建議: Be specific and use linking words to make your answer coherent. State the main consideration, then add reasons or an example to support it. Mentioning one concrete factor (e.g. hobbies) will strengthen your answer.

範例: I focus on the recipient’s preferences rather than the price. For example, if someone enjoys gardening I choose plants or tools, because they will actually use and appreciate the gift.

建議: Answer directly and avoid long unclear explanations. If you have not given a handmade gift, say so, then briefly explain a related experience using clear linking words and fewer hesitations.

範例: No, I haven’t given a handmade gift. However, once I designed a personalized gift idea and asked a friend to make it for me, so the recipient still received a thoughtful present.

建議: This is a good, clear opinion. To improve further, use a concise topic sentence then add one or two specific reasons or an example with a linking word to support your view.

範例: I don’t think expensive gifts express feelings better. Instead, thoughtful presents that match someone’s tastes show care; for example, a handwritten letter and a simple photo frame meant more to my friend than an expensive gadget.

× Yes, I do think yes, I do think that at the present I'm really good at giving giving gifts to others.

✓ Yes, I do think that at present I'm really good at giving gifts to others.

Redundant phrasing and repetition ('yes, I do think' twice and 'giving giving') make the sentence awkward. Use simple present 'I do think' once and remove duplicate words. Also 'at present' is the correct phrasing. Suggestion: keep statements concise and avoid repeating the same phrase.

× I choose gifts for them according to their umm, taste and expectations.

✓ I choose gifts for them according to their taste and expectations.

No grammatical error with -ing here; primary issue is filler words 'umm' which should be removed for clarity. The verb 'choose' in present simple is correct for habitual action. Suggestion: remove hesitations to make the sentence fluent.

× I try to not disappoint them, umm, whenever I I try to gift them.

✓ I try not to disappoint them whenever I give them gifts.

Split infinitive 'try to not' is acceptable but 'try not to' is more natural. Also 'whenever I I try to gift them' repeats 'I' and uses unnatural verb 'try to gift'. Use simple present 'give' for habitual action. Remove filler 'umm.'

× I usually give gifts to others on their special occasions such as birthdays, weddings and child's event.

✓ I usually give gifts to others on their special occasions such as birthdays, weddings and children's events.

'child's event' is singular and inconsistent with plural 'occasions'; possessive plural 'children's events' is correct. Use plural to match list. Suggestion: keep parallel plural forms when listing multiple occasions.

× Uh, I try to usually give them gifts according to the occasion.

✓ I usually try to give them gifts appropriate to the occasion.

Word order 'try to usually' is awkward; adverb 'usually' typically goes before the main verb or after auxiliary. 'Appropriate to the occasion' is more natural than 'according to the occasion.' Suggestion: place adverbs correctly: 'I usually try to...' or 'I try to usually...' but 'I usually try to...' is preferred.

× I don't usually consider price or anything that is related to me.

✓ I don't usually consider the price or anything related to myself.

Use definite article 'the price' when referring to price in general contexts. 'Related to me' is acceptable but 'related to myself' or 'that relates to me' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'the' with specific nouns and 'myself' for reflexive reference, or restructure: 'anything that concerns me.'

× I usually consider their opinions and their taste and what they want in their gift.

✓ I usually consider their opinions, their tastes and what they want in a gift.

Parallel nouns should match in number: 'tastes' (plural) fits with 'opinions.' Use 'a gift' instead of 'their gift' for general reference. Suggestion: keep parallel structure and consistent number in lists.

× No I no I haven't given others or handmade gift but there was once a time when I had thought a gift in my mind and made someone else to prepare the gift for me so that I can give it to the other person.

✓ No, I haven't given anyone a handmade gift, but once I imagined a gift and asked someone else to prepare it for me so I could give it to the person.

Multiple errors: repetition 'No I no,' incorrect object 'given others or handmade gift,' awkward tense sequence. Use 'anyone' instead of 'others' and 'a handmade gift.' Use past simple 'I imagined' and 'asked someone to prepare it' plus past modal 'so I could give it.' Remove redundancy and clarify sequence. Suggestion: break long sentence into clearer clauses and use appropriate past forms.

× Whether the gifts are expensive or cheap, it really doesn't matter how my feelings are seen.

✓ Whether the gifts are expensive or cheap, it really doesn't affect how my feelings are perceived.

Phrase 'how my feelings are seen' is awkward; 'perceived' is more natural. Also 'cheap' as adjective is fine but 'whether the gifts are expensive or cheap' is acceptable. Suggestion: use 'affect' and 'perceived' to express impact on others' impressions.

× I usually give them gifts from my heart and according to my knowledge about their preferences, so the price really doesn't matter what they think about me.

✓ I usually give them gifts from my heart based on my knowledge of their preferences, so the price doesn't really affect what they think of me.

'According to my knowledge about their preferences' is wordy; 'based on my knowledge of their preferences' is natural. 'Doesn't really affect what they think of me' correctly expresses the intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'affect' for influence and 'think of' when referring to others' opinions.