礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Votre réponse est claire mais contient des erreurs grammaticales et un peu de redondance. Corrigez la structure : utilisez un sujet + verbe corrects et réduisez les mots inutiles. Donnez un exemple concret ou une phrase supplémentaire (max 2 phrases) pour enrichir la réponse et utilisez un mot de liaison si nécessaire.

範例: Yes, I'm good at giving gifts to my family because I enjoy taking time to choose something that will make them happy. For example, I often think about their hobbies or recent comments to pick something meaningful.

建議: La réponse contient des erreurs de temps verbal et de formulation. Évitez "easily" et les formes passées incorrectes. Répondez d'abord directement, puis ajoutez une brève explication en utilisant un mot de liaison (e.g., "usually", "because").

範例: I usually give gifts on birthdays and at Christmas because these occasions feel special. I believe gifts are most meaningful when given on important days.

建議: Bonne idée générale mais la grammaire et la précision doivent être améliorées. Simplifiez la structure (present simple) et utilisez des exemples concrets, en reliant les points avec des mots de liaison comme "for example" ou "also".

範例: When I choose a gift, I consider the person's tastes, their needs and the occasion. For example, I might choose a practical item for someone who recently moved house, while I pick something personal for a close friend.

建議: La réponse est difficile à comprendre à cause d'une formulation incorrecte. Utilisez le passé simple correctement et soyez plus précis : dites ce que vous avez fabriqué et pourquoi. Ajoutez un détail pour rendre l'anecdote vivante (moment, réaction).

範例: Yes, when I was a child I made a small book of drawings for my mother because we couldn't afford to buy a present. She was very touched and kept it for many years.

建議: Bonne opinion mais la grammaire est maladroite (mélange de temps et formulations). Répondez directement en une phrase, puis expliquez brièvement avec un exemple et un lien logique (e.g., "because").

範例: I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better because what matters is the thought behind the gift. For instance, a thoughtful letter or a homemade item can show more care than an expensive object.

× I'm good at giving gifts to my family because I like to spend time in order to find the best gift to make them happy.

✓ I'm good at giving gifts to my family because I like to spend time finding the best gift to make them happy.

The phrase 'in order to find' is grammatically correct but wordy; more natural English uses the gerund 'finding' after 'spend time'. Use 'spend time finding' to connect the verbs smoothly and maintain present simple tense for habitual actions.

× I easily gave gifts to others at their birthdays or at Christmas.

✓ I easily give gifts to others on their birthdays or at Christmas.

The context asks about usual behavior, so present simple 'give' is appropriate rather than past 'gave'. Also use the preposition 'on' with 'birthdays' and keep 'at Christmas'.

× According to me, a gift has to be gave at a special moment.

✓ According to me, a gift has to be given at a special moment.

After 'has to be' you need the past participle 'given', not the simple past 'gave'. 'Has to be given' expresses necessity correctly.

× When I'm choosing a gift, I am considering multiple factors such as the taste of the people, the need, or what type of occasion I will give this gift.

✓ When I choose a gift, I consider multiple factors such as people's tastes, their needs, and the type of occasion for which I will give the gift.

Use present simple 'choose' and 'consider' for habitual actions. 'Taste of the people' should be 'people's tastes'; 'the need' should be plural 'their needs'. 'What type of occasion I will give this gift' is awkward — use 'the type of occasion for which I will give the gift' for clarity.

× I gave to my mother some under my gift when I was a kid.

✓ I gave my mother a handmade gift when I was a kid.

The original is ungrammatical. Use 'gave my mother a handmade gift' (direct object order). 'Under my gift' is incorrect; replace with 'a handmade gift' to answer the question. Past simple 'gave' is correct for a past event.

× I did it because I didn't have money to buy something.

✓ I did it because I didn't have money to buy anything.

'Buy something' is not wrong, but in negative sentences 'anything' is more natural: 'didn't have money to buy anything'. The past tense structure is correct.

× According to me, I didn't think that the price of a gift will express a better feeling.

✓ In my opinion, I don't think that the price of a gift expresses feelings better.

The examiner asked about general opinion, so use present simple 'don't think' and 'expresses'. Using 'will' here is unnecessary. Also use 'In my opinion' rather than 'According to me' for natural phrasing.

× I would say that it's the type of gift and the intentions that will express my feeling better.

✓ I would say that it's the type of gift and the giver's intentions that express my feelings better.

Keep present simple 'express' for general truth. Use plural 'feelings' and specify 'giver's intentions' for clarity. 'Will express' is unnecessary for a general statement.