礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and article use, and limit to 3–4 concise sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons and add a specific example to make your answer more natural.

範例: I’m not very good at giving gifts. I rarely buy presents because I don’t enjoy festivals like Christmas or New Year. As a result, I usually just send a card or a message instead when those occasions come around.

建議: Avoid repetition and use complete sentences. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating frequency, then give a brief reason and one specific instance. Keep it under five sentences and use correct tense.

範例: I rarely give gifts to others. I’ve never given formal presents to my parents or friends because I don’t celebrate many occasions. If I do give something, it is usually a small homemade card on a birthday.

建議: Organize your answer: state the main consideration, then give specific details and an example. Use correct vocabulary and avoid unclear phrases. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas.

範例: When I choose a gift, I focus on the recipient’s interests and hobbies. For example, some of my friends are passionate about music, so I would buy them music-related gifts such as headphones or a guitar accessory because those items match their hobbies.

建議: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. If you have not made handmade gifts, say so briefly, then describe a specific handmade gift you would make in the future and why. Keep it coherent with linking words.

範例: No, I haven’t given a handmade gift so far. But in the future, if I have a girlfriend I would make her a photo album with notes because it would be personal and show I care.

建議: Give a clear opinion and support it with two concise reasons and an example. Reduce filler words and repetition. Use linking words such as because and therefore to make your argument logical and natural.

範例: No, I don’t think expensive gifts express feelings better. I believe thoughtful gifts matter more because they show the giver understands the recipient’s needs. For example, a handwritten letter or a useful item chosen for someone’s hobby can be more meaningful than an expensive but impersonal present.

× Umm, I think I'm not good at giving gifts.

✓ Umm, I don't think I'm good at giving gifts.

The original uses 'I think I'm not good' which is an unnatural present-tense construction. Use 'I don't think' plus adjective to express a negative opinion in present tense.

× I never giving gifts to my friends or my parents before because I don't enjoy a special occasion of very simple Christmas or like a new year.

✓ I have never given gifts to my friends or my parents before because I don't enjoy occasions like Christmas or New Year.

Multiple issues: 'never giving' is incorrect after 'I' and should be present perfect 'have never given' for past experience. 'a special occasion of very simple Christmas or like a new year' is ungrammatical; use plural 'occasions' and correct names 'Christmas' and 'New Year'.

× I never enjoy that, uh, event.

✓ I never enjoy that event.

This sentence is acceptable in simple present for habitual dislike; remove extra comma and filler 'uh'. If speaker meant past, use 'didn't enjoy that event'. Here present simple 'never enjoy' is coherent.

× As I mentioned before, I never gave presents to anyone.

✓ As I mentioned before, I have never given presents to anyone.

Talking about life experience up to now requires present perfect 'have never given' rather than simple past 'never gave'.

× My dad, my mom, my brother and my friends.

✓ I don't give presents to my dad, mom, brother, or friends.

Original is a sentence fragment (no verb). Provide a full sentence with subject and verb to express the idea.

× I never present that.

✓ I never give them presents.

'Present' as a verb is awkward here; use 'give presents' and include object 'them'. Also use correct word order.

× I never give a gift to them.

✓ I never give gifts to them.

Use plural 'gifts' for habitual action and omit unnecessary article 'a' when speaking generally.

× I rarely give presents, but when I do I always consider the person, interest and hobbies for wrecking pool my friends, they passionate about music, so if I have to shoot something as a gift for them, I would possess something about musical instruments and.

✓ I rarely give presents, but when I do I always consider the person's interests and hobbies. For example, my friends are passionate about music, so if I had to choose a gift for them, I would pick something related to musical instruments.

Original contains many errors: fragmented clauses, wrong words ('wrecking pool', 'shoot', 'possess'), incorrect noun forms ('interest' should be 'interests'), and punctuation issues. Corrections use clear noun phrases, conditional 'if I had to choose' for hypothetical, and 'related to' to link gift and instruments.

× As I mentioned before and they were gift a gift to anyone but in the future if I if I have a girlfriends I would do anything that she want.

✓ As I mentioned before I have not given a gift to anyone, but in the future if I have a girlfriend I would do anything she wants.

Multiple issues: sentence fragments, incorrect passive/word order ('they were gift a gift'), wrong article 'a girlfriends', and verb agreement 'she want' should be 'she wants'. Use present perfect for past experience and conditional tense for future hypothetical.

× If she want me to make like homemade gifts I would do it if I can do it for her actually.

✓ If she wants me to make homemade gifts, I would do it if I can.

Pronoun/verb agreement: 'she want' -> 'she wants'. Remove filler 'like' before 'homemade gifts' and tighten the conditional 'I would do it if I can.'

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts express your feelings better?

Word order: the comparative adverb 'better' should follow the verb phrase 'express your feelings'. Move 'better' to the end to form a correct question.

× In my opinion, no.

✓ In my opinion, no, they do not.

Short answer is acceptable but adding 'they do not' clarifies the subject. Ensure a complete sentence for clarity.

× I think when, when people want to buy a gift for people, for another people, I think they just want to make them satisfy and you know, they, they just want to spread love and take care of their coworkers or their friends or their parents, you know.

✓ I think when people buy gifts for others, they just want to make them happy. They want to show love and care for their coworkers, friends, or parents.

Problems: unnecessary repetition, plural/singular pronoun use, wrong phrase 'make them satisfy' (should be 'make them happy' or 'satisfy them' but idiomatic 'make them happy'). Simplify sentences, correct 'another people' to 'others', and remove fillers.