礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct article/number errors, and add one specific example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid redundancy.

範例: Not really. I tend to give gifts only to close friends and family because I prefer choosing meaningful items. For example, I once spent weeks looking for a vintage book for my sister because she loves reading, even though I was on a tight budget.

建議: Correct vocabulary mistakes and be specific about occasions. Use linking words (for example, or such as) to make the answer coherent and give one clear example.

範例: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays, when friends move into a new house, or to celebrate achievements. For example, I recently sent a small gadget to a friend who graduated from university.

建議: Improve structure and clarity. State the factors in a clear list with correct grammar and provide a short explanation for each. Use linking words like firstly, secondly, finally.

範例: I consider three main factors when choosing a gift. Firstly, the recipient's personal preferences, so I pick something they will actually use; secondly, the price, because I want good value for money; and finally, the presentation, such as nice wrapping, which makes a gift feel special.

建議: Be precise and fix word choice errors (e.g., 'college' should be 'colleagues', 'wooden clothes' unclear). Provide a concise description of the item and why you chose it.

範例: Yes. Last year I bought handmade souvenirs during a holiday in Shanghai and gave them to my colleagues and close friends. I chose wooden ornaments from a local craft shop because they looked authentic and unique, and my colleagues appreciated the local craftsmanship.

建議: Complete your idea and avoid leaving sentences unfinished. Give a clear opinion and justify it with specific reasons or an example. Use connectors like 'however' to show nuance.

範例: Sometimes. It depends on the context and the relationship; an expensive gift can show generosity, but a thoughtful, inexpensive gift can be more meaningful. For example, I appreciated a handmade card from a close friend more than an expensive item because it showed effort and understanding.

× No, I don't think I am very good at giving gift.

✓ No, I don't think I am very good at giving gifts.

The noun 'gift' refers to countable items and here it is used in a general sense. Use the plural 'gifts' when speaking about giving presents in general to indicate more than one or non-specific items. Suggestion: Use plural for general reference to countable nouns (gifts).

× I usually only give presents to close friends or family because I prefer to choose meaningful items and I have limited budget.

✓ I usually only give presents to close friends or family because I prefer to choose meaningful items and I have a limited budget.

The phrase 'limited budget' needs the indefinite article 'a' before it. English requires an article before singular countable nouns. Suggestion: Use 'a limited budget' or 'limited budgets' depending on meaning; here use 'a limited budget'.

× I usually give presents to my close friends on diabetes or when they move into a new house.

✓ I usually give presents to my close friends on their birthdays or when they move into a new house.

The preposition and noun 'on diabetes' is incorrect; likely intended 'on their birthdays'. Use 'on' with days/occasions and include the possessive 'their' for friends' birthdays. Suggestion: Replace incorrect event with correct noun and include possessive pronoun: 'on their birthdays'.

× I also send a small gadget to celebrate achievement or other occasions such as graduation or promotions.

✓ I also send a small gadget to celebrate achievements or other occasions such as graduations or promotions.

Use plural 'achievements' and 'graduations' when speaking generally about events. Also 'to celebrate achievement' is better with plural or 'an achievement'. Suggestion: Use plural forms for general statements about events or use 'an achievement' if referring to a single instance.

× In my opinion, I always consider to buy gifts with three factors.

✓ In my opinion, I always consider three factors when buying gifts.

The verb phrase 'consider to buy' is incorrect. 'Consider' is followed by a noun or gerund, not an infinitive. Also word order is awkward; natural phrasing is 'consider three factors when buying gifts.' Suggestion: Use 'consider' + noun/gerund and place time/clause appropriately: 'consider three factors when buying gifts.'

× Firstly I concern about personal preference and secondly does the price of product that may cause effectiveness and lastly the but.

✓ Firstly, I am concerned about personal preference. Secondly, I consider the price of the product because it may affect value, and lastly I think about usefulness.

Multiple issues: 'concern about' should be 'be concerned about' or 'I care about'; 'does the price of product that may cause effectiveness' is ungrammatical—use 'I consider the price of the product because it may affect value' or 'it may affect usefulness'; 'lastly the but' is incomplete. Sentence needs restructuring into clear separate points. Suggestion: Break into separate clear clauses: 'I am concerned about personal preference. I consider the product's price because it may affect value, and I also think about usefulness.'

× Yes, I have. Last year I bought some handmade souvenirs during a holiday in Shanghai and gave them to my college and a few of my close friends.

✓ Yes, I have. Last year I bought some handmade souvenirs during a holiday in Shanghai and gave them to my colleagues and a few of my close friends.

The word 'college' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'colleagues' (people you work with). 'College' refers to an educational institution. Use correct noun to match meaning. Suggestion: Use 'colleagues' when referring to coworkers.

× I chose more wooden clothes from local craft shop because they look authentic and unique.

✓ I chose several wooden items from a local craft shop because they looked authentic and unique.

'Wooden clothes' is unlikely; likely 'wooden items' or 'wooden crafts'. Also need article 'a' before 'local craft shop' and past tense consistency 'looked'. Suggestion: Use accurate noun ('items', 'crafts') and include articles; keep tense consistent.

× Maybe yes. It depends on the context. For example, when my friends give me an expensive bag, my feeling is good because I think it represents the love and.

✓ Maybe yes. It depends on the context. For example, when my friends give me an expensive bag, I feel good because I think it represents their love and care.

The phrase 'my feeling is good' is awkward; better 'I feel good'. The clause 'represents the love and.' is incomplete and missing a noun after 'and'. Use 'their love and care' to complete the idea and match possessive. Suggestion: Use natural verbs for feelings ('I feel') and complete paired nouns ('love and care').