礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法や表現が不自然で冗長です。自然で効果的にするには短いトピック文を述べ、理由を一つか二つに絞って簡潔に説明してください。また動詞の時制や語順、冠詞に注意しましょう。具体的には“take time many times to make a decision”は不自然なので“take a long time to decide”などに直します。

範例: Not really. I usually take a long time to decide what to buy because I worry about choosing something the person will actually like.

建議: 答えは要点を含んでいますが、言い直しや途切れが多く、文が途中で切れているため不明瞭です。まず直接に“Usually I give gifts on...”と始め、主要な場面を列挙するときは結合語（for example, and also）や並列表現を使って一貫性を持たせましょう。細部は一つ二つの具体例で補足します。

範例: Usually I give gifts for birthdays and at Christmas. I also give presents on anniversaries, such as my friends' wedding anniversaries.

建議: 内容は適切ですが、話し方が途切れ途切れで文法ミスがあります（e.g. “By skin care face masks”は誤り）。論理の流れを示す接続詞を使い、例は正しい語順で簡潔に述べましょう。可能なら具体的な習慣や好みの一つを挙げて理由を補強します。

範例: I usually think about the person's tastes and daily habits, because I want them to use the gift. For example, if a friend likes skincare, I might buy a set of face masks.

建議: 良い具体例（手作りの食べ物）を挙げていますが、文が長く繰り返しがあり語順や文法の誤りがあります（“it's makes me”など）。まず肯定・否定の簡潔なトピック文を述べ、その後に理由と一つの具体例で締めくくってください。接続詞は一度だけ使い、冗長表現を避けましょう。

範例: Not really — I don't make many handmade gifts, but I often give homemade treats. I enjoy baking cakes and cookies for friends because seeing their happy reactions makes me feel rewarded.

建議: 回答は核心をついていますが、断片的で不自然な区切りがあります。まず“it depends”の後に何に依存するかを明確に示し、理由と結論を短く述べましょう。例えば“if it is useful to the person”のように完全な節で説明し、最後に自分の通常の行動を明示します。

範例: I think it depends on the person — expensive gifts only show feelings if they are useful or meaningful to the recipient. Usually I focus on usefulness rather than price when I choose a present.

× Actually, I'm not good at giving gifts because I usually take time many times to make a decision, even if it's for my own.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at giving gifts because I usually take a long time to make a decision, even if it's for myself.

The phrase 'take time many times' is unnatural; use 'take a long time' to express needing a lot of time. 'For my own' is incorrect pronoun use and phrasing; use 'for myself'. Use of prepositions and pronouns is corrected. Suggestion: say 'take a long time' and use 'myself' for reflexive reference.

× In my country, uh, we usually give gifts on someone's birthday or on Christmas and personally I. Give some gifts on anniversary or.

✓ In my country, we usually give gifts on someone's birthday or at Christmas, and personally I give some gifts on anniversaries as well.

The original has sentence fragments and incorrect prepositions. 'On Christmas' is acceptable, but 'at Christmas' is more natural. 'I. Give' is a broken sentence. 'Anniversary' should be plural or preceded by 'an' depending on context; here 'anniversaries' or 'on an anniversary' is appropriate. Suggestion: combine clauses into one complete sentence and use correct preposition 'at' for holidays and pluralize 'anniversaries' if speaking generally.

× Well, I usually consider the person's tastes and habits when I choose a gift because I want them to actually use or enjoy it for example, I often. By skin care face masks for.

✓ Well, I usually consider the person's tastes and habits when I choose a gift because I want them to actually use or enjoy it; for example, I often buy face masks and skin-care products for them.

'By' is a typo for 'buy' and the sentence is fragmented. 'Skin care face masks' needs hyphenation or reordering: 'skin-care products' and 'face masks'. Also add object 'them' to indicate the recipient. Use of gerund not central here; main issues are verb form and sentence fragmentation. Suggestion: ensure verbs are correct ('buy') and complete the sentence with the object.

× No really, I haven't made many handmade gifts but I often give people handmade meals, especially sweets because I enjoy baking cakes and cookies for my friends because I enjoy seeing their smiles or reaction it's makes me.

✓ No, I haven't made many handmade gifts, but I often give people handmade meals, especially sweets, because I enjoy baking cakes and cookies for my friends and seeing their reactions makes me happy.

Multiple pronoun and clause problems: missing commas, incorrect conjunctions, and 'reaction it's makes me' is ungrammatical. 'Reaction' should be plural 'reactions' and use 'makes me happy' as predicate. Also add 'and' to connect clauses. Suggestion: split into clear clauses, pluralize 'reactions', and use proper subject-verb structure 'seeing their reactions makes me happy'.

× It depends on. It if it is actually useful for the person or not, so I usually give gifts.

✓ It depends on whether it is actually useful for the person or not, so I usually consider usefulness when giving gifts.

The fragment 'It depends on. It if' is incorrect. Use 'depends on whether' to introduce the condition. Also 'so I usually give gifts' is vague—clarify that usefulness guides the decision. Suggestion: use 'depends on whether' and state the consequence clearly.