网站— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and add a brief specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I often visit music streaming websites to listen while I work. For example, I use Spotify because its playlists help me concentrate and it recommends new songs based on my taste.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct word choice, and avoid repeating the same genre. Add a specific example of how you use the site. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

範例: My favorite website is YouTube because it has a huge variety of music and videos. For example, I follow several channels that upload live performances and curated playlists, so I can discover new artists easily.

建議: Answer directly, correct grammar, and use linking phrases to explain consequences. Be specific about which websites or ads and give a brief opinion or result.

範例: Yes, many websites now display more advertisements, so platforms often offer paid subscriptions to remove them. As a result, I rarely pay for ad-free versions because subscriptions are expensive for me.

建議: Provide one clear topic sentence, then use linked, specific examples. Correct grammar and avoid fragmented sentences. Mention a few popular types of websites and why they are useful.

範例: Video-sharing sites like YouTube are very popular in Thailand because people use them for many purposes. For example, many watch music videos, follow educational channels to study, or watch travel and product reviews before buying.

建議: Give a concise topic sentence, correct grammar, and provide a specific reason with an example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to organize ideas.

範例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are faster and more convenient than books. For example, I can quickly search for recent news or tutorials on my phone whenever I need them.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and repeated ideas; mention a possible condition if opinions change.

範例: No, I wouldn't like to have my own website because maintaining it takes time and technical skills. Maybe in the future I would consider it if I had help from a developer.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and give a specific example of something learned. Use linking words to connect the benefit to a concrete outcome.

範例: Websites have taught me practical skills that help my studies and work. For example, I learned data analysis techniques from online tutorials, which made my reports more accurate and saved me time.

× I love to visit website that for listening to the music because when I working I love to listen to the music because it helped me to have more concentration.

✓ I love to visit websites for listening to music because when I am working I love to listen to music because it helps me concentrate.

Errors: missing plural for 'website' and unnecessary definite article before 'music'; missing auxiliary 'am' for present continuous 'I am working'; wrong past tense 'helped' should be present 'helps' to match habitual action; 'to have more concentration' is unnatural—use 'concentrate'. Suggestions: use plural 'websites' for general habit, remove 'the' before uncountable 'music', use 'I am working' for present continuous, use present simple 'helps' for general truths and 'concentrate' as verb.

× My favorite website is YouTube website because there are lots of music in there and many kinds of musics, for example pop, rock or pop, and it's also free for everyone.

✓ My favorite website is YouTube because there is a lot of music there and many kinds of music, for example pop or rock, and it's also free for everyone.

Errors: redundant repetition 'YouTube website'—use just 'YouTube'; 'music' is uncountable so use 'a lot of music' not 'lots of music in there'; 'musics' is incorrect plural; unnecessary 'in' after 'there'. Suggestions: use 'a lot of music' and 'many kinds of music', avoid repeating 'website' and list genres clearly.

× Nowadays it's often have, uh, advertisement. If we don't need advertisements, we need to pay a subscription. So I think it's very expensive for me.

✓ Nowadays there are often advertisements. If we don't want to see advertisements, we need to pay for a subscription. So I think it's very expensive for me.

Errors: incorrect structure 'it's often have'—use 'there are often'; 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'; 'don't need advertisements' wrong verb—use 'don't want to see'; missing preposition 'for' before 'a subscription'. Suggestions: use 'there are' for existence, pluralize countable nouns, and use 'pay for a subscription'.

× YouTube is very popular in Thailand. This is because many people visit this with a different purposes. Listen to the music, study some academic subject or watch a review. Get it or travel is very useful website.

✓ YouTube is very popular in Thailand. This is because many people visit it for different purposes: listening to music, studying academic subjects, or watching reviews. It is very useful for learning about products or travel.

Errors: wrong pronoun 'this' should be 'it'; 'a different purposes' mixes singular article with plural noun—use 'different purposes'; sentence fragments 'Listen to the music...' need to be linked with gerunds and plural forms; last sentence 'Get it or travel is very useful website' is ungrammatical and unclear. Suggestions: use 'visit it for different purposes' and form parallel gerund phrases, clarify 'watching reviews' and 'useful for learning about purchases or travel'.

× I prefer to getting informations from websites. This is because is faster than search by books and also convenient. This is because I can search information every time, everywhere.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites. This is because it is faster than searching through books and also more convenient. I can search for information anytime, anywhere.

Errors: 'to getting' incorrect infinitive+gerund—use 'prefer getting' or 'prefer to get'; 'informations' is uncountable so use 'information'; missing subject 'it' in 'is faster'; 'search by books' incorrect—use 'searching through books'; 'every time, everywhere' should be 'anytime, anywhere'. Suggestions: use correct verb patterns after 'prefer', treat 'information' as uncountable, include subject in clauses and use idiomatic expressions.

× No, I don't think so. This is because it's hard to maintain the website. I think, uh, it's hard to create a website for myself.

✓ No, I don't think so. This is because it's hard to maintain a website. I think it's difficult to create a website for myself.

Errors: article use 'the website' implies a specific site—use 'a website' for general; repetition 'hard' fine but 'difficult' is more natural variation. Modal error is minor but fits article category as well; suggestions: use 'a website' for non-specific reference and avoid repetitive adjective use by varying vocabulary.

× Nowadays there are plenty of websites contain a lot of knowledge in there, so it easier if I would like to know more about my work feels I just search on the website, I think it's very fast and useful.

✓ Nowadays there are plenty of websites that contain a lot of knowledge, so it is easier if I want to learn more about my work; I just search on websites. I think it's very fast and useful.

Errors: missing relative pronoun 'that' after 'websites'; unnecessary 'in there'; missing 'is' in 'so it is easier'; 'would like to know' mismatches context—use 'want to learn'; 'feels' is incorrect word; sentence run-on and unclear reference. Suggestions: add 'that', use 'it is', replace 'would like to know' with 'want to learn', and split into shorter sentences for clarity.