网站— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve fluency and sentence structure: avoid pauses and sentence fragments, use one or two cohesive sentences with linking words. Be more specific about purposes (e.g., research, news, shopping) to enrich content.

範例: I often use search engines like Google to look up information quickly; for example, I search for news, product reviews, and how-to guides, which saves me time and helps me find reliable answers fast.

建議: Organize into a clear topic sentence and supporting details; avoid trailing off. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) and be specific about reasons and features of the app.

範例: My favourite website is Google because I mainly use its mobile app; it is very convenient, loads quickly, and lets me search for maps and news on the go, so I rarely need to use a computer.

建議: Reduce filler words and give concrete examples of changes. Use linking words to explain cause and effect and specific features (AI, personalization, faster loading, notifications).

範例: Yes, websites have become smarter because they use AI and personalization; for instance, search results are tailored to my interests and news sites now send instant notifications based on my reading history.

建議: Answer directly with clear examples and short explanations. Avoid repetition and fillers; mention a few types (search engines, social media, e-commerce) and why they are popular.

範例: Popular websites in my country include Baidu for searching, WeChat and Weibo for social networking, and Taobao for online shopping because they offer local services, messaging, and convenient payments.

建議: Make a concise comparison using linking words (because, although, however) and give specific reasons and an example of when each source is better.

範例: I prefer websites because I can search on my phone and get quick answers, which saves time; however, for in-depth study or academic research, I still use books because they are more reliable and detailed.

建議: Clarify your goal with a clear topic sentence and specific details about the website type and purpose. Remove hesitations and use linking words to explain benefits (e.g., showcase products, reach customers).

範例: Yes, I would like my own website to promote a future company: it would showcase our products, include an online store and contact page, and help attract customers by displaying reviews and product photos.

建議: Be specific about what you learned and how it helped you; use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Give one or two concrete examples (skills, news, courses) and a result.

範例: Websites have taught me useful skills and given me up-to-date news; for example, I learned coding from online tutorials and followed economic news online, which helped me plan my studies and career choices.

× I often visit search engine such as Google because I need to search something.

✓ I often visit search engines such as Google because I need to search for things.

The noun 'search engine' should be plural 'search engines' when speaking generally about types of websites. Also use the preposition 'for' with 'search' (see preposition errors) and pluralize 'something' to 'things' for general searches. Suggestion: say 'visit search engines such as Google to search for things.'

× I just. Fill in keywords and they will give me answer quickly.

✓ I just fill in keywords and they will give me answers quickly.

The original contained a sentence fragment 'I just.' and then capitalized 'Fill'. Combine into one sentence and make 'answer' plural to match 'they' and general usage. Suggestion: avoid fragments; attach clauses correctly.

× I prefer use app because I can use app just on my phone.

✓ I prefer to use the app because I can use it just on my phone.

After 'prefer' use the infinitive 'to use'. Also repeat of 'app' is awkward; use the definite article 'the app' or 'apps' and replace the second 'app' with the pronoun 'it'. Suggestion: 'I prefer to use the app because I can use it on my phone.'

× It's very convenient, easy to get information then from computer because.

✓ It's very convenient and easier to get information than from a computer.

Use the conjunction 'and' to connect adjectives, comparative form 'easier' to compare, and 'than' for comparison (not 'then'). Include article 'a' before 'computer'. The original ends with an incomplete 'because'—remove it or complete the clause. Suggestion: 'It's very convenient and easier to get information than from a computer.'

× I think there are some changes to the websites I often visit, umm, such as uh, more smarter smart than before umm, because they use AI and use uh, tons of message umm, so.

✓ I think there have been some changes to the websites I often visit, such as being smarter than before because they use AI and handle tons of messages.

Use present perfect 'have been' to indicate changes up to now. 'More smarter' is ungrammatical; use 'smarter' (not 'more smarter'). 'Tons of message' needs plural 'messages' and verb 'handle' or 'use' with appropriate object. Suggestion: 'I think there have been changes; websites are smarter now because they use AI and process many messages.'

× In my country the popular websites names umm, Baidu, umm, I think uh, alert analogy for uh, Google, Google, Google, umm, because uh, it's same search engine, uh, it's search engine too.

✓ In my country the popular websites are Baidu and others; I think Baidu is similar to Google because it is the same kind of search engine.

Correct plural 'websites' and complete sentence structure 'the popular websites are'. Avoid repetition and use 'similar to' instead of unclear 'alert analogy'. Use 'it is' or 'they are' consistently. Suggestion: 'The popular websites in my country include Baidu, which is similar to Google because it is a search engine.'

× I prefer getting information from websites to books because I can just search on my phone.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites rather than from books because I can search on my phone.

Use 'rather than' to compare preferences; include 'from' before 'books' for parallel structure. 'Just' can be omitted or placed after 'can'. Suggestion: 'I prefer getting information from websites rather than from books.'

× If I search get information from book books, I need to read a lot of books it.

✓ If I get information from books, I need to read many of them.

Remove the redundant 'search' and duplicated 'book books'. Use 'many of them' or 'many books' for clarity and correct word order. The original had an extraneous 'it'. Suggestion: 'If I get information from books, I need to read many books.'

× For example, I want to uh owe my own a company and uh, I want to uh show my products on my website uh, so they call it dependent website.

✓ For example, I want to own my own company and I want to show my products on my website, so it would be a company website.

Use correct verb 'own' not 'owe'. Remove extra articles and use 'my own company'. 'Dependent website' is unclear; use 'company website' or 'business website'. Article 'a' should appear before 'company website' if necessary. Suggestion: 'I want to own a company and show my products on a company website.'

× There are many advantages. I learned from websites and for example, I got a lot, I got a lot of informations about the world and I can go to the news quickly so I can set up my future.

✓ There are many advantages. I learn from websites; for example, I get a lot of information about the world and I can access news quickly, which helps me plan my future.

Use uncountable noun 'information' (not 'informations') and prefer present tense 'learn' and 'get' for habitual actions. 'Go to the news' is unnatural; use 'access news'. 'Set up my future' should be 'plan my future'. Suggestion: 'I learn from websites; for example, I get a lot of information and can access news quickly to help plan my future.'