网站— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more direct and organized: start with a clear topic sentence naming the types (e.g., scientific websites and news), then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words (for example, also) to connect ideas and keep the response within 2–4 sentences.

範例: I often visit scientific websites and online news sites. For example, I read research articles to improve my English learning strategies and check news sites to stay updated about world events. Also, I use educational platforms to practice specific skills such as listening and vocabulary.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence stating the favourite website type, then give specific details about what you like and one concrete example or feature. Avoid hesitations and vague phrases. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences) and use linking words like because or for example.

範例: My favourite website is a nature and wildlife site because it has detailed articles about animals and national landscapes. For example, it features photo essays and short videos that explain animal behavior and conservation efforts, which I find very inspiring.

建議: Give a clear statement about whether changes have happened, then specify one concrete change you would like and explain why. Use linking words (however, because) and avoid filler sounds. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: No, there haven't been major changes to the websites I visit recently. However, I would like them to update the design because the current layout is hard to navigate and makes it difficult to find useful articles quickly.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence naming the main popular types, then provide specific examples and a brief reason for their popularity. Use linking words (first, second, because) and avoid trailing off. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

範例: In my country, social media and educational websites are very popular. First, platforms like TikTok and Instagram are widely used for entertainment and communication. Second, sites such as Ingnovate are popular among students because they offer online courses and study resources.

建議: State your preference clearly, then give two concise reasons with specific examples. Avoid broad generalizations and grammatical errors; use linking words (because, for example) and correct comparisons (more than). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer getting information from websites because they are updated quickly and often include multimedia like videos and diagrams. For example, when I study a new topic I can watch tutorials and read recent articles online, which is faster than consulting a book.

建議: Answer directly that you would like a website, then describe its purpose and one or two specific features or audiences. Use linking words (for example, where, and) and correct tense/grammar. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I would like to have my own website where I post articles about historical places and how they have changed over time. For example, I would include before-and-after photos and simple explanations for children to learn local history easily.

建議: Begin with a direct topic sentence about a specific thing you learned, then give a concise example showing how the website helped your studies. Use linking words (for example, then) and avoid filler. Keep it to 2–3 clear sentences and correct phrasing.

範例: Websites have helped me learn many specific topics for school. For example, when I needed to complete homework on the life cycle of a frog, I found diagrams and step-by-step explanations online that made the process easy to understand and complete on time.

× Well, I usually learn and try to read articles that are scientific and have learning effects.

✓ Well, I usually read scientific articles that help me learn.

Original sentence is awkward and contains redundant verbs ('learn and try to read') and the phrase 'have learning effects' is unnatural. Simplify to a clear subject-verb-object structure and use 'help me learn' to express purpose.

× I checked news sites because I like to know what is happening in the world and I use learning science to study English and other skills and for scientific websites I try to be.

✓ I check news sites because I like to know what is happening in the world, and I use scientific resources to study English and other skills.

Use present tense 'check' to match habitual action. 'Learning science' is unclear; 'scientific resources' or 'educational websites' fits. The phrase 'for scientific websites I try to be' is incomplete and removed for clarity.

× Currently I am not good at remembering, uh, the name of websites, but its websites were where it teaches humanity, uh, animals and their, uh, national landscapes.

✓ Currently I am not good at remembering the names of websites, but there was a website that taught about humans, animals, and national landscapes.

Use plural 'names' for 'websites' (singular/plural agreement) and correct article usage. 'Its websites were where it teaches' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'there was a website that taught' using past tense to match 'was' and correct verb form 'taught'.

× And I really love this website. It's about nature and life.

✓ I really like that website; it's about nature and wildlife.

'Love' is acceptable but 'like' is more neutral for a test. 'Life' is vague; 'wildlife' or 'nature and wildlife' is clearer. This improves adjective/noun choice.

× Now there are no changes are happening and websites that I often visit, but I wish there was a a little change.

✓ There are no changes happening to the websites I often visit, but I wish there were a few small changes.

Remove redundant 'are' and reorder for clarity. Use subjunctive 'were' for hypothetical wish and 'a few small changes' is idiomatic instead of 'a a little change'.

× Umm, so the design of this website isn't that, uh, comfortable as well.

✓ The design of this website isn't very comfortable.

'Comfortable' typically describes people or objects; for design, 'comfortable' is less natural—better choices are 'user-friendly' or 'comfortable' with 'very'. Removed filler words and extra 'as well'.

× So I'd like to improve that's one.

✓ So I'd like to improve that; that's one thing I'd change.

Original is fragmented. Rephrase into a complete sentence and clarify meaning.

× The people in my country use a wide range of websites but for my notice there also mean websites that all people use.

✓ People in my country use a wide range of websites, but there are also some sites that everyone uses.

'For my notice' is incorrect; use 'there are also' and 'some sites that everyone uses' corrects quantifier and phrasing.

× First one is a social website like a Tiktok and Instagram and so on and second one is educational website which is known as Ingnovate for example.

✓ The first is social websites like TikTok and Instagram, and the second is educational websites, for example Ingnovate.

Correct article and number agreement: use plural 'websites' for categories. Capitalize brand names and place 'for example' appropriately.

× I'm a person who use both of them and find it interesting and.

✓ I'm a person who uses both of them and finds them interesting.

Subject-verb agreement: 'who uses' and 'finds' are required for third person singular relative clause. Complete the sentence by providing object 'them'.

× I'll say that I prefer getting information from websites raised and on books.

✓ I'd say that I prefer getting information from websites rather than from books.

'Raised' is incorrect here; use comparative structure 'rather than' to contrast websites and books. Adjust conditional 'I'll say' to 'I'd say' for a preference statement.

× Uh, from my perspective, uh, nobody knows an adults and teenagers don't read book as well then in the past.

✓ From my perspective, adults and teenagers don't read books as much as they used to.

Remove 'nobody knows an' which is ungrammatical. Use plural 'books' and phrase 'as much as they used to' for comparison with the past.

× And to compare, I'll say that websites gives more great information read than books.

✓ In comparison, I'd say that websites give much more useful information than books.

Subject-verb agreement: 'websites' requires 'give' not 'gives'. 'More great information read' is ungrammatical; use 'much more useful information'.

× Yes, I would like I wonder if I could have my own website if it will happen, I'll definitely call it time to time and I'll post a historical places and historical articles and the places how it changed to till now and the describes them as well like I'll teach children to that.

✓ Yes, I would like that. If I had my own website, I'd definitely name it 'Time to Time' and I'd post about historical places and articles showing how those places have changed up to now; I would also describe them and teach children about them.

Original is run-on and ungrammatical. Use conditional 'If I had my own website' for hypothetical. Clarify naming, use 'I'd' for conditional future, correct pluralization 'places', use present perfect 'have changed' for changes up to now, and add clear verbs 'describe' and 'teach'.

× Well, that's an interesting question. From websites, I've learned such an interesting and useful information for my studies.

✓ Well, that's an interesting question. From websites, I've learned a lot of interesting and useful information for my studies.

'Information' is uncountable; say 'a lot of ... information'. Remove redundant 'such an' and use present perfect 'I've learned' correctly.

× So one time, uh, our teacher gave us a homework about, uh, life cycle of a frog and I didn't know how it happens.

✓ One time, our teacher gave us homework about the life cycle of a frog, and I didn't know how it worked.

Use 'homework' without article and add 'the' before 'life cycle'. For past reference 'didn't know how it worked' fits better than 'how it happens'.

× Then I entered the website and I guess, uh, given information to me.

✓ Then I visited a website and it provided the information to me.

'Entered the website' is awkward; 'visited a website' or 'went to a website' is natural. 'I guess, given information to me' is ungrammatical; use passive 'it provided the information to me' or 'I found the information'.