网站— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Улучшите грамматику и последовательность речи: используйте правильные времена и артикли, избегайте лишних слов, свяжите идеи связками. Также уточните детали (например, зачем вы посещаете сайт и как часто).

範例: I often visit Kai Top CC, a site where I watch anime dubbed in English. I use it mainly in the evenings to practice listening and relax. However, it has many annoying pop-up ads, which distract me while I watch.

建議: Сфокусируйтесь на ясной, грамматически правильной структуре: начните с главной мысли, затем дайте два конкретных обоснования с связкой. Используйте более точную лексику (e.g. "up-to-date" вместо "actual").

範例: My favourite website is BBC News because it provides up-to-date football coverage and helps me improve my English. I read articles and watch short video reports, which expand my vocabulary and keep me informed.

建議: Улучшите стройность предложения: используйте одно понятное предложение для ответа и затем добавьте конкретную деталь. Исправьте порядок слов и ошибки (например, "was blocked").

範例: Yes. The site Anukai that I used to use for ad-free anime was blocked, and the owner created an alternative version. Unfortunately, the new site contains many intrusive pop-up ads.

建議: Уточните мысль и используйте корректные слова: вместо «conducive» объясните, что это за сайт (например, школьный портал). Дайте пример, когда и как люди используют такие сайты, и свяжите идеи логическими словами.

範例: In my country, school portals are very popular. Teachers upload homework and grades there, so students and parents can check assignments and exam results online.

建議: Уберите неясные слова и ошибки (например, "Bob" — вероятно, "books"). Постройте ответ логично: скажите предпочтение, объясните причины последовательно с связками (however, because, therefore). Ограничьте длину до 3–4 предложений.

範例: If I had both options, I would prefer books because reading them is more comfortable for me and less tiring for my eyes. However, books can be expensive, so I sometimes use websites when I need quick or affordable information.

建議: Сформулируйте идею ясно и избегайте повторений. Уточните, какие услуги вы бы предлагали, и добавьте связку, объясняющую мотивацию. Проверьте небольшие грамматические ошибки (e.g. "of course").

範例: Yes, I would. I would create a website to showcase my services, such as tutoring and freelance design, and include ads to earn income. That way I could attract clients and support myself financially.

建議: Уточните название сайта и используйте точные слова (например, "Warm Up 75" or "fitness site"). Дайте одно конкретное примерное упражнение или технику и свяжите это с результатом. Сделайте ответ более естественным и кратким.

範例: I often use a fitness site called "Warm Up 75" to find exercise routines that target specific muscles. For example, before going to the gym I check the site for proper squatting techniques and warm-up exercises to avoid injury.

× Recently I visit a new Kai Top CC.

✓ Recently I visited a new site called Kai Top CC.

The speaker uses 'recently' which refers to a past action, so the past tense 'visited' is required. Also 'a new Kai Top CC' is unnatural; use 'a new site called Kai Top CC'. Suggestion: use simple past with 'recently' (e.g., 'I visited').

× It's a website for watching animes in English for free.

✓ It's a website for watching anime in English for free.

The word 'anime' is an uncountable noun in English, so the plural form 'animes' is incorrect. Use 'anime' without -s. Suggestion: treat 'anime' like other uncountable media nouns (e.g., 'I watch anime').

× Of course because it's an official it has really annoying ads pop ups.

✓ Of course, because it's unofficial, it has really annoying pop-up ads.

Sentence has multiple issues: 'Of course because' needs a comma after 'Of course' and 'because' beginning a clause; context implies 'unofficial' not 'official'. 'ads pop ups' word order is wrong; correct phrase is 'pop-up ads'. Suggestion: reorder and use hyphenated adjective 'pop-up' and ensure correct use of 'unofficial' if intended.

× My favorite website is BBC News because I love football and also I need to improve my English so BBC News give me a lot of actual football news in English.

✓ My favorite website is BBC News because I love football and I need to improve my English, so BBC News gives me a lot of up-to-date football news in English.

'BBC News' is singular, so the verb should be 'gives' (subject-verb agreement). 'I need' should be joined with 'I love' by proper conjunctions and commas. 'actual' is wrong collocation; use 'up-to-date' or 'current'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use proper connectors and collocations.

× Is the website Anukai where I used to watch anime for free with no hats on was blocked and there is a alternative version of it from the same person but it has a lot of pop up ads on it.

✓ The website Anukai, where I used to watch anime for free without ads, was blocked, and there is an alternative version by the same person, but it has a lot of pop-up ads.

Original sentence has redundant 'Is' at start and incorrect phrase 'no hats on' presumably meant 'no ads'. There is a tense/structure problem and wrong word order. Correct by removing stray 'Is', use 'without ads', and fix 'pop-up ads'. Suggestion: keep clauses clear, place commas to separate relative clause, and ensure correct vocabulary.

× I believe it's conducive.

✓ I believe it's useful.

'Conducive' requires a complement (conducive to something) and is awkward here. Use 'useful' or 'helpful' to express popularity or usefulness. Suggestion: choose adjectives appropriate to meaning and structure.

× It's a website for teachers and students. Or the teachers put school grades on it and the students can see the given homework and the grades they took for lesson.

✓ It's a website for teachers and students. Teachers put school grades on it, and students can see the assigned homework and the grades they received for lessons.

Problems: unnecessary 'Or' starting second sentence; 'given homework' better as 'assigned homework'; 'grades they took for lesson' incorrectly uses 'took' and singular 'lesson'. Use 'received' and plural 'lessons' or 'a lesson' as needed. Suggestion: use correct verbs for receiving grades and proper noun forms.

× Well, if I had both, I would like to get information from Bob, because by reading a book I don't feel tired.

✓ Well, if I had both, I would like to get information from books, because when I read a book I don't feel tired.

Original says 'from Bob' likely typo for 'books'. Also mixing condition with habitual present: use 'when I read' for a general truth. Suggestion: correct nouns and use 'when' for habitual actions.

× I can't do it really long time and I can enjoy it.

✓ I can't read for a very long time, but I can enjoy it.

'do it really long time' is ungrammatical; use 'read for a very long time'. Also contrasting idea needs 'but'. Suggestion: use time expressions like 'for a long time' and appropriate verbs.

× But if I get information from my phone, my eyes get tired.

✓ But if I get information from my phone, my eyes become tired.

'Get tired' is acceptable but 'become tired' is more natural in this context; both are possible. No major grammar error, minor style improvement. Suggestion: prefer 'become tired' or 'my eyes hurt' for clarity.

× But the problem is that books are expensive. They can.

✓ But the problem is that books are expensive; they can be costly.

Final fragment 'They can.' is incomplete. Complete the thought with 'They can be expensive' or 'They can cost a lot'. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and finish the idea.

× Yes of course I would post some services I do and also put some ads from other companies.

✓ Yes, of course I would post the services I offer and also put some ads from other companies.

'Some services I do' is awkward; use 'the services I offer'. Add commas after 'Yes' and 'of course'. Suggestion: use 'offer' for services and include articles when specific.

× If course they pay me I would earn from it and work all my life on it.

✓ If, of course, they pay me, I would earn money from it and work on it all my life.

Missing commas and awkward word order. Add 'money' after 'earn' and place 'all my life' after 'work on it'. Also correct 'If course' to 'If, of course,'. Suggestion: punctuate conditionals correctly and include necessary nouns.

× I often use warm up 75 sides to know what kinds of exercise I need to train my muscles.

✓ I often use Warm Up 75 site to find out what kinds of exercises I need to train my muscles.

'warm up 75 sides' appears to be 'Warm Up 75 site'; 'sides' is wrong. Use 'find out' not 'to know', and 'exercises' plural. Suggestion: correct the name capitalization and use 'site' and plural 'exercises'.

× For example, when I go to the gym, I check the site for techniques.

✓ For example, when I go to the gym, I check the site for technique.

'techniques' is acceptable but 'technique' as uncountable is more natural when referring to general methods; both possible. No major grammar error. Suggestion: use singular 'technique' for general reference or plural if referring to multiple techniques.