梦想— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You misunderstood the question (it asks about night dreams). Answer directly whether you remember night dreams, use 2–3 well-formed sentences, correct grammar and word choice, and keep details specific. Replace unclear phrases like “I'm personality about languages” with clear expressions such as “I enjoy learning languages.” Use linking words if you add a supporting detail.

範例: No, I rarely remember my night dreams; only occasionally are they vivid. I do have a career dream: I want to be a translator because I enjoy learning languages and helping people communicate. For example, I would like to assist immigrants so they can access services and understand important information.

建議: Clarify the meaning of “dreams” (night dreams or ambitions) and answer accordingly. Use correct grammar (e.g., “I prefer to keep them private”), keep to 2–3 sentences, and give a specific example of who you tell and why. Avoid unclear words like “abuse.”

範例: I don't usually share my personal dreams because I prefer to keep them private. I only tell a few close friends about my career plans, such as becoming a translator and a writer, because they support and give me practical advice.

建議: Make a clear opinion statement first, then give a specific reason or brief example. Use correct pronouns and sentence structure. If you think dreams can be meaningful, say why (e.g., reflect emotions or concerns). Keep it concise and coherent with linking words.

範例: Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because they often reflect a person's emotions or worries. For example, if I dream about exams, it usually shows I am anxious about my performance.

建議: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer and one clear supporting detail about how you will achieve the dream. Use formal contractions or full forms (e.g., “I want to”), avoid repetition, and include a concrete plan or example.

範例: Absolutely. I want to make my dreams come true, and I am working toward this by studying translation and practicing languages every day. For example, I take online courses and talk with native speakers so I can become a translator and travel the world.

× I'm personality about languages

✓ I'm passionate about languages

The original uses 'personality' (a noun) incorrectly where an adjective describing feeling is needed. Use 'passionate' or 'interested' to describe a person's attitude toward languages. Suggestion: say 'I'm passionate about languages' or 'I'm interested in languages' to be natural and grammatical.

× help immigrants assays service

✓ help immigrants access services

The phrase 'assays service' is incorrect; likely intended verb is 'access' and noun should be plural 'services'. Use base form 'access' after 'help' and pluralize 'services' to refer to multiple kinds of assistance. Suggestion: 'help immigrants access services.'

× No, I don't usually share my dreams with other people because I'm prefer to keep my abuse.

✓ No, I don't usually share my dreams with other people because I prefer to keep them to myself.

Several issues: 'I'm prefer' mixes present continuous with simple present; correct is 'I prefer'. 'keep my abuse' is incorrect vocabulary and meaning; intended is 'keep them to myself.' Also pronoun reference needed ('them' for dreams). Suggestion: use 'I prefer to keep them to myself.'

× For example, although I want to be translator and letter and author and only tell close friends about these plans.

✓ For example, I want to be a translator, a writer, and an author, and I only tell close friends about these plans.

Missing articles before singular countable nouns ('a translator'), incorrect word 'letter' (likely 'writer'), and run-on structure. Add articles and commas for clarity, and correct 'letter' to 'writer'. Suggestion: 'I want to be a translator, a writer, and an author, and I only tell close friends about these plans.'

× I think yes, because a person can think about yourself dreams and it is so up to personal well how your dreams.

✓ I think so, because a person can think about their own dreams, and the meaning of dreams is very personal.

Problems: 'think yes' should be 'think so'; 'a person' must not be followed by 'yourself' — use 'their own' for gender-neutral reference; 'it is so up to personal well how your dreams' is ungrammatical and unclear. Rephrase to 'the meaning of dreams is very personal.' Suggestion: use 'their own' and a clear clause about personal interpretation.

× I wanna to make my dreams come come true and I arrive to the dream my and for example, I wanna be translator and travel all the world.

✓ I want to make my dreams come true and achieve them. For example, I want to be a translator and travel all over the world.

Colloquial 'wanna' should be 'want to' in formal speech; 'wanna to' incorrectly combines forms. 'come come' repeated. 'I arrive to the dream my' is ungrammatical — use 'achieve them.' 'be translator' needs article 'a', and 'travel all the world' should be 'travel all over the world' or 'travel the world.' Suggestion: use 'I want to make my dreams come true and achieve them. For example, I want to be a translator and travel all over the world.'