梦想— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct tense and pronouns, and avoid repetition. Focus on clarity: say whether you remember dreams and why or why not.

範例: I rarely remember my dreams clearly. Usually they fade quickly after I wake up because I'm very busy with work in the morning, so I don't have time to think about them. Sometimes I catch fragments if I wake up in the middle of the night.

建議: Answer directly about sharing dreams, not unrelated topics (e.g., 'address'). Use a topic sentence and a reason with one example. Use linking words like 'but' or 'because' and correct grammar for clarity.

範例: I don't usually share my dreams with strangers, but I do talk about them with close family. For example, I often tell my mother about interesting or strange dreams because she understands me and gives advice.

建議: Be consistent and avoid self-contradiction. Choose a clear position (yes or no) and support it with one or two coherent reasons. Use linking phrases like 'because' and 'however' to structure the answer and correct word choice (e.g., 'reflect' instead of 'come in our mind').

範例: I don't think dreams have special mystical meanings; they mostly reflect our thoughts and experiences from the day. For example, if I study for an exam all day, I might dream about the subject because my mind is still processing it.

建議: Answer directly and give specific actions or plans that show how you try to achieve your dreams. Use clear, natural expressions and avoid vague phrases. Keep to two or three sentences maximum and include linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to show result.

範例: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true. Therefore I set clear goals and work hard every day, for example by studying for two hours each evening and networking with people in my field to gain experience.

× As far as I remember when I had a dream, I usually not remember exactly but it is a fade away throughout my routine and I was so busy in my work so I don't start. I had no time to recall the dreams.

✓ As far as I remember, when I have a dream I usually do not remember it exactly; it fades away during my routine because I am so busy with work that I do not have time to recall my dreams.

Errors include incorrect present tense usage and inconsistent past tense. Use present simple for habitual actions (when I have a dream, I usually do not remember). 'Usually not remember' needs auxiliary do: 'do not remember'. 'It is a fade away' is ungrammatical; use 'it fades away'. 'Throughout my routine' -> 'during my routine'. 'I was so busy in my work so I don't start' mixes past and present and uses incorrect verb 'start'; correct to 'I am so busy with work that I do not have time to recall my dreams'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent, use auxiliaries for negatives, and use correct verb forms (fades away, have time).

× I usually not interested to share my address with others, however my family members who are very close to me, so I prefer to share my mother because she is my best friend.

✓ I am usually not interested in sharing my dreams with others; however, I prefer to share them with close family members, especially my mother, because she is my best friend.

Multiple issues: missing verb 'am' for adjective 'interested' and wrong preposition 'to share my address' (likely meant 'share my dreams') and incorrect object 'share my mother'. Use 'interested in' + gerund: 'interested in sharing'. Also use 'share them with' to refer to dreams and correct word order: 'prefer to share them with my mother'. Suggestion: use 'be' + adjective, correct prepositions, and clear pronouns for antecedents.

× I don't think so. It is you, it uh, dreams have a special meaning because it just our overthinking and imagination throughout the day and uh it is connected with our real life experience. So dreams have come in our mind in the night time.

✓ I don't think so. Dreams do not have a special meaning; they are just our overthinking and imagination during the day, and they are connected to our real-life experiences. Dreams come to our minds at night.

Problems: 'It is you, it uh' is unclear and unnecessary. Use plural subject 'dreams' with plural verbs: 'dreams do not have' and 'they are'. 'It just our overthinking' lacks verb; correct to 'they are just our overthinking'. 'Throughout the day' -> 'during the day'. 'Connected with' better as 'connected to'. 'Dreams have come in our mind in the night time' mixes tense and word order; correct to 'dreams come to our minds at night'. Suggestion: use clear subjects, match plural forms, and maintain present simple for general truths.

× Yes, definitely, I work hard and with positive mind I complete my task with fully potential. So turning the dream into reality with the very is very crucial for me and it is my goal to achieve.

✓ Yes, definitely. I work hard and with a positive mindset I complete my tasks to the best of my ability. Turning dreams into reality is very important to me, and it is my goal to achieve.

Errors: missing articles and singular/plural mismatches. Use 'a positive mindset' not 'positive mind'; 'complete my tasks' plural and 'to the best of my ability' is natural. 'With the very is very crucial' is ungrammatical; correct to 'Turning dreams into reality is very important'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions/goals. Suggestion: use correct articles, pluralize countable nouns, and use natural collocations (positive mindset, to the best of my ability).