梦想— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Javobni qisqa, aniqlik bilan va grammatik jihatdan to’g’ri qilib qayta tuzing. Boshlanishda to’g’ri zamon va sub’ektni ishlating, masalan: “No, I usually don’t remember my dreams.” Keyin sababni sodda va bog‘lovchi so‘z bilan tushuntiring (because / so). Misol: “because I wake up quickly and forget them.” Ikkidan ortiq xato yoki takroriy so‘zlardan saqlaning va maksimal 3-4 gap bilan cheklaning.

範例: No, I usually don't remember my dreams because I often wake up quickly and forget them. Sometimes I remember small fragments, but they disappear soon after I wake up.

建議: Javobni aniq fikr bilan boshlang va sababni bog‘lovchi so‘z bilan tushuntiring. “Unfortunately” kabi so‘zni kerakli joyda ishlating, va grammatik jihatlarni tuzating (masalan: subject-verb agreement). Shu bilan birga, qo‘shimcha misol yoki holat keltiring va takroriy so‘zlardan saqlaning.

範例: No, I don't usually share my dreams because I don't find them interesting. However, my friends sometimes tell me about theirs and I listen politely and give my opinion.

建議: Javobni aniq fikr bilan boshlang (Yes/No + sabab). Qisqa ravishda qarashlaringizni bayon qiling va sabablar yoki misollar bilan mustahkamlang. Grammatik xatolarga e'tibor bering va keraksiz takrorlardan saqlaning. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlar (for example, because, however) ishlatish orqali mantiqiylikni oshiring.

範例: No, I don't think dreams have special meanings because they are often random images from our thoughts. Some people believe they predict the future, but in my view there is no clear evidence for that.

建議: Javobni sodda va aniq tuzing: boshlang‘ich gapda istakingizni bildiring, so‘ng sababni bering. Takroriy so‘zlarni (I would like / I want) bitta iborada to‘g‘ri foydalaning. Konkret maqsad va reja haqida qisqacha ma'lumot qo‘shing (how or when you will achieve it).

範例: Yes, I would like to make my dreams come true. For example, I dream of earning a ministry degree, so I'm studying hard and planning to apply to university next year to achieve it.

× Unfortunately no, I didn't remember about my dreams because the dreams will be when I in unconscious time and first reason I didn't remember it.

✓ Unfortunately no, I didn't remember my dreams because dreams happen when I am unconscious, and that is the first reason I didn't remember them.

Original sentence uses incorrect verb forms and structure: 'will be when I in unconscious time' is ungrammatical and 'remember about' is wrong. Use simple past 'didn't remember' with direct object 'my dreams'. Use present simple 'happen' for general events and 'am unconscious' for state. Also use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'dreams'. Suggestions: say 'dreams happen when I am unconscious' and 'I didn't remember them'.

× Unfortunately, no, I didn't find it interesting and I didn't share my dreams.

✓ Unfortunately no, I didn't find them interesting and I didn't share my dreams.

Pronoun reference is unclear: 'it' should refer to 'dreams', which are plural, so use 'them'. Maintain past tense 'didn't find' and 'didn't share'. Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun ('dreams' -> 'them').

× Sometimes my friends share their dreams with me and they appreciate your feelings about these things.

✓ Sometimes my friends share their dreams with me and I appreciate their feelings about these things.

Pronoun subjects/objects are mixed up: 'they appreciate your feelings' incorrectly addresses the listener. Correct meaning is speaker appreciates friends' feelings, so use 'I appreciate their feelings'. Keep pronoun agreement consistent.

× From our city, it's don't have any special meanings.

✓ In our city, it doesn't have any special meaning.

Incorrect negative construction 'it's don't have' should be 'it doesn't have'. Also 'special meanings' better as singular 'meaning' when speaking generally. Use 'In our city' instead of 'From our city'. Suggestion: 'In our city, it doesn't have any special meaning.'

× Some people think it's a give some words about their future and for reasons they believe it, but in my opinion it's not.

✓ Some people think it gives some clues about their future and for that reason they believe it, but in my opinion it does not.

Original uses wrong verb forms: 'it's a give' is incorrect. Use 'it gives' (third person singular). 'Some words' is vague; 'clues' is better. 'For reasons they believe it' should be 'for that reason they believe it'. Maintain parallel structure and correct negation 'does not'.

× See if it's don't say about future.

✓ It does not tell about the future.

'See if' is unnecessary. 'It's don't say' is ungrammatical; use 'it does not tell' or 'it does not say'. Include article 'the' before 'future'. Suggestion: 'It does not tell the future.' or 'It does not say anything about the future.'

× Sometimes I I would like to make my dreams come true because most of the time I had dream about my taking the ministry degree and I would like to take it for the reason I want to make my dreams come true.

✓ Sometimes I would like to make my dreams come true because I often dream about getting a ministry degree, and I want to achieve it.

Remove duplicate 'I'. Use 'would like' consistently (conditional/desire). Replace 'had dream about my taking the ministry degree' with 'often dream about getting a ministry degree' for natural phrasing. 'Take it' is wrong; use 'achieve it' or 'earn it'. Keep tense consistent and concise.