镜子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common grammar errors (e.g. "look myself" → "look at myself", "apart from them" → "besides that" or "also"). Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I do — I look at myself in the mirror every morning when I get ready for work. Besides that, I also check my face when I do my skincare routine or freshen up in the washroom.

建議: Improve tense and word choice, and make the answer more concise. Use past simple for recent purchases ("I bought"). Replace vague phrases like "bigger length" with "full-length". Use a linking word to explain reason.

範例: Yes, I bought a full-length mirror last month. I already had a bathroom mirror, but it didn't show my whole body, so I bought a taller, full-length mirror to check outfits properly.

建議: Avoid repetition and fix unclear phrases. Say why you prefer your phone camera and give one brief example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" and correct "hear if my hair gets messy" to "see if my hair is messy."

範例: No, I don't carry a mirror because I usually use my phone camera to check my appearance. For example, I quickly take a selfie to see if my hair is messy and fix it before leaving.

建議: Make the response clear and grammatical. Start with a direct opinion, then give a specific example and use linking words (e.g. "because" or "for instance"). Fix awkward phrases like "instead of it I I used" and be concise.

範例: Yes, I would, because mirrors can make a room look brighter and bigger. For instance, I used a mirrored wallpaper on one wall to reflect light and create the illusion of more space.

× I look myself in the mirror regularly.

✓ I look at myself in the mirror regularly.

The verb 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when used with a person as the object. Use 'look at myself' to indicate observing your own reflection.

× Whenever I get ready for work I look myself in the mirror.

✓ Whenever I get ready for work, I look at myself in the mirror.

Same issue: 'look' needs the preposition 'at' before the pronoun. Also add a comma after the introductory time clause for clarity.

× Apart from them that whenever I do my skin care and use washroom, I look myself in the mirror.

✓ Also, whenever I do my skin care and use the washroom, I look at myself in the mirror.

Replace 'Apart from them that' with a natural connector like 'Also'. 'Look' needs 'at'. Add the definite article 'the' before 'washroom' in this context.

× Last month I had bought a mirror which could show a full reflection of myself.

✓ Last month I bought a mirror that could show a full reflection of me.

Use simple past 'bought' for a completed action at a specific time ('last month'); past perfect 'had bought' is unnecessary. Use 'that' instead of 'which' in defining clauses and use 'me' rather than 'myself' for the object of 'show'.

× I already had mirror in the bathroom, but that cannot show my full body.

✓ I already had a mirror in the bathroom, but it could not show my full body.

Countable singular noun 'mirror' requires an article: 'a mirror'. Match tense: if referring past situation, use 'could not' rather than present 'cannot'. Use 'it' to refer back to 'a mirror'.

× That's why I purchased a mirror with the, uh, bigger length rather than the shorter one.

✓ That's why I purchased a mirror with a longer length rather than a shorter one.

Use 'a' for countable nouns and comparative form 'longer' not 'bigger length'. Remove filler 'the, uh,' and use parallel 'a shorter one' for comparison.

× No, I don't take mirror with me because I use my mobile camera to check my face and hear if my hair gets messy.

✓ No, I don't take a mirror with me because I use my mobile camera to check my face and see if my hair gets messy.

Use article 'a' before 'mirror'. 'Hear' is incorrect for checking appearance; use 'see'.

× I use my phone's camera to get it fixed so I don't take mirror with me.

✓ I use my phone's camera to fix it, so I don't take a mirror with me.

Add 'a' before 'mirror'. Rephrase 'to get it fixed' to active 'to fix it' for clarity and naturalness.

× Definitely mirrors can enhance the beauty of our room, so I prefer to decorate my room with mirrors instead of it I I used a wallpaper which has mirrors in my room.

✓ Definitely, mirrors can enhance the beauty of a room, so I prefer to decorate my room with mirrors instead of wallpaper; I used a wallpaper that has mirror patterns in my room.

Add comma after 'Definitely'. Use 'a room' for general statement. Replace awkward 'instead of it I I used' with 'instead of wallpaper; I used'. Use 'that' for defining clause and 'mirror patterns' to clearly describe wallpaper design. Remove duplicate 'I'.