镜子— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and remove fillers like “umm” and repetition. Add a linking word when giving a reason.

範例: Yes, I do. I check my appearance in the mirror every day to make sure my outfit and makeup look neat. For example, before I leave home I quickly adjust my hair and clothes so I feel confident.

建議: Give a clear, grammatical answer and avoid hesitation. Use one precise detail about the mirror you bought (type, size, why you chose it). Keep it to two or three sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

範例: Yes, I have. I once bought a small pocket mirror because it is convenient to carry in my bag, so I can quickly check my appearance when I’m out.

建議: Answer directly and avoid repeating phrases. Provide a specific situation when you take a mirror and a brief reason. Use linking words such as “because” or “when” to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I usually carry a compact mirror when I go out with friends because I like to touch up my makeup quickly after eating or before taking photos.

建議: State your preference clearly and give one or two specific reasons with correct grammar. Replace hesitations with pauses or brief linking phrases like “because” and avoid double negatives.

範例: No, I wouldn’t. I don’t keep mirrors in my room because large mirrors make me feel uneasy, especially at night, so I prefer to have them only in shared spaces like the bathroom.

× Yes, definitely. You know that everyday I always look at myself in the mirror to take out my outfit, my appearance and make sure it's look good.

✓ Yes, definitely. You know that every day I always look at myself in the mirror to check my outfit and appearance and make sure they look good.

Uses incorrect verb forms and nouns: 'everyday' should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase). 'take out my outfit' is incorrect collocation; 'check my outfit' is natural. 'make sure it's look good' mixes singular contraction 'it's' with plural verb 'look'; use 'they look good' referring to outfit and appearance. Also 'always' and 'every day' is redundant but acceptable; suggestion: use one of them for conciseness.

× Umm and I also looking myself and my in the mirror to make it confident.

✓ Umm, and I also look at myself in the mirror to feel confident.

Incorrect verb form 'looking' used without auxiliary; should be base form 'look' after 'I'. 'looking myself and my' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'look at myself'. 'to make it confident' wrongly uses 'make' and 'it'; the intended meaning is 'to feel confident'.

× Well, MMM, definitely I will say yes, because I have uh bought my murals is, I mean the mineral mirrors to take take uh, with me to go everywhere that if I have to check out my appearance, I will bring it it with me.

✓ Well, definitely I would say yes, because I have bought small hand mirrors to take with me everywhere in case I need to check my appearance.

Sentence contains many issues: 'I will say' is better as 'I would say' in this conversational context. 'bought my murals is, I mean the mineral mirrors' appears to be mispronunciations; corrected to 'bought small hand mirrors'. Article and noun forms fixed: 'to take with me everywhere' is natural. Removed repeated words 'take take' and 'it it'. Use 'in case I need to' instead of awkward clause.

× Yes, definitely. I always take out my outfit and my appearance especially is my makeup when I'm uh, hanging out, hanging out with my friends.

✓ Yes, definitely. I always check my outfit and appearance, especially my makeup, when I'm hanging out with my friends.

'take out my outfit and my appearance' is incorrect; use 'check my outfit and appearance'. Extra word 'is' is unnecessary. Redundant 'hanging out, hanging out' should be single occurrence. Overall present continuous 'I'm hanging out' is fine.

× Well, you know that my room actually don't have any mirrors, so and I feel that I'm not, umm, relaxed when I have the mirror in my room, especially if they have a big mirrors, I feel it's uh, quite a scary.

✓ Well, you know that my room actually doesn't have any mirrors, and I feel that I'm not relaxed having a mirror in my room; especially if there is a big mirror, I feel it's quite scary.

Subject-verb agreement: 'my room ... don't have' should be 'doesn't have' (room singular). Remove unnecessary 'so and'. 'relaxed when I have the mirror' better as 'relaxed having a mirror'. 'if they have a big mirrors' mixes plural and singular; use 'if there is a big mirror'. 'quite a scary' needs noun/adjective fix: 'quite scary'.

× So I never bring a mirror in my room.

✓ So I never put a mirror in my room.

'bring a mirror in my room' implies carrying into room now; more natural to say 'put a mirror in my room' meaning to place one there. Present simple 'never' with 'put' is correct. If meaning 'I never keep a mirror in my room', 'keep' could be used.