科学— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "Yes, I like science.") and avoid unclear phrases like "I wish you would do it in front of science." Provide one or two specific supporting details and link them with simple connectors. Keep answers within 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I like science. As a child I often watched documentaries and read popular science books, which sparked my curiosity. Nowadays I enjoy attending science events and talks to learn about recent discoveries.

建議: Give a clear time marker and link past learning to current interests. Use connectors like "so" or "and" correctly and be specific about what you learned or do now to show depth.

範例: I started learning more about science in high school, when I chose geography as an elective and learned about earth systems. Since then I have kept studying astronomy, especially the solar system and Mars, by reading articles and following news about space missions.

建議: Answer directly naming the subject (e.g. "astronomy" or "space science") and avoid redundant phrasing. Use one linking phrase to explain why and give a short specific example of what you watch or read.

範例: Astronomy interests me most because space is full of mysteries. For example, I often watch documentaries about exoplanets and black holes to learn more about recent discoveries.

建議: Be precise and correct errors ("many" not "money"). Start with a topic sentence describing activities, then give two specific examples with short details (what experiments, which clubs, what books). Use linking words like "for example" and "also."

範例: I have done several science-related activities. For example, in school I took part in hands-on experiments like building simple circuits and I joined the science club to work on projects. I also read popular science books on biology and physics in my free time.

建議: Good clear answer—make it more natural by saying "favorite program" and briefly describe why you like it or what you learned. Keep it to two or three sentences maximum.

範例: Yes, I love watching science TV programs. My favorite program is called "Closer to Science" because it explores fascinating natural phenomena and often explains scientific ideas in an easy-to-understand way.

建議: Make the statement more general and correct grammar: use present tense and plural/singular consistency. Give a brief reason and an example (school trips, family visits). Use linking words like "because" or "for example."

範例: Yes, many Chinese people, especially students, visit science museums. For example, schools often organize field trips so students can see exhibits and do interactive activities that help them understand scientific concepts.

× Yes, I wish you would do it in front of science.

✓ Yes, I am interested in science.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured; 'I wish you would do it in front of science' is ungrammatical and does not express liking. Replace with a clear present-tense statement of preference. Use 'interested in' to show preference for a subject.

× When I was a child, I usually watched some documentaries and read some books about science.

✓ When I was a child, I usually watched documentaries and read books about science.

This sentence is mostly correct but 'some' is unnecessary; removing it makes the sentence more natural. Verb forms 'watched' and 'read' (past) are correct for a habitual past action.

× Nowadays I prefer to attend some scientific activities.

✓ Nowadays I prefer to attend scientific activities.

Using 'some' is unnecessary and slightly awkward. 'Prefer to attend scientific activities' is a normal present-tense preference. Keep 'nowadays' to indicate current habit.

× When I was in high school, I chose geography as my elective subject, so I acquired lots of knowledge about science.

✓ When I was in high school, I chose geography as my elective subject, so I gained a lot of knowledge about science.

'Acquired' is formal but acceptable; however 'gained a lot of knowledge' is more natural. 'Lots of' is informal; 'a lot of' fits better here. Tenses are consistent (past).

× Nowadays I actively learn about the solar system and Mars.

✓ Nowadays I actively study the solar system and Mars.

Use 'study' rather than 'learn about' to sound more natural for an ongoing interest. Present simple 'study' with 'nowadays' indicates a current habit.

× What interests me most is the outer space and science because I think they are full of mystery and the unknown, so I usually watch some documentaries about them.

✓ What interests me most is outer space and science because I think they are full of mysteries and the unknown, so I usually watch documentaries about them.

Remove the article before 'outer space' ('outer space' is uncountable without 'the'). Use plural 'mysteries' to match 'they'. Remove 'some' before 'documentaries' for naturalness.

× I think the money interesting things about science.

✓ I think the most interesting things about science are...

'Money' is incorrect word; likely intended 'most'. Use superlative 'most interesting' to compare. Sentence was incomplete; add 'are' to introduce examples.

× For example, when I was in school I usually did some hands on experience on science and attended some clubs.

✓ For example, when I was in school I usually did some hands-on experiments in science and attended clubs.

Use compound adjective 'hands-on' and noun 'experiments' (countable) rather than 'experience'. Use preposition 'in' for the subject area. 'Some' can be omitted; 'attended clubs' is sufficient.

× On top of that, I'm really fond of reading science.

✓ On top of that, I'm really fond of reading about science.

Use 'reading about science' to show that reading material concerns science. 'Reading science' is awkward; adding 'about' clarifies meaning.

× Of course, I am passionate about watching science TV programs and my favorite programming is called Closer to Science, which talks about how to find some interesting things in the natural world.

✓ Of course, I am passionate about watching science TV programs and my favorite program is called Closer to Science, which shows how to find interesting things in the natural world.

Use 'program' not 'programming' for a single show. 'Shows' is more natural than 'talks about' here. Remove 'some' before 'interesting things' for clarity.

× Yes, obviously for some students they often went to the museum because they school will organize some activities in the museum, they can acquire many knowledge and have a real contact with the science.

✓ Yes, obviously some students often go to museums because their schools organize activities there; they can learn a lot and have real contact with science.

Multiple errors: change past 'went' to present 'go' to match 'often' general habit. Use plural 'museums'. 'They school' should be 'their schools' (pronoun and plural). 'Will organize' should be present 'organize' for habitual events. 'Acquire many knowledge' is ungrammatical—use 'learn a lot'. 'Have a real contact with the science' -> 'have real contact with science' (no definite article, uncountable 'science').