数字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, reduce filler words, and add a brief reason or example with a linking word. Keep it under 3 sentences.

範例: No, I'm not good at remembering numbers. For example, I often forget phone numbers because I don't rehearse them, so I usually save contacts immediately to avoid mistakes.

建議: Organize your response: give a clear direct answer, then briefly explain with coherent linking words. Correct grammar (tense and articles) and avoid repetition. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

範例: No, I don't expect to work with numbers in the future. My planned role will rely on algorithms and writing, so I prefer recording information in a diary or in my phone notes to remember details.

建議: Be concise and avoid contradictory statements. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use consistent vocabulary (e.g., 'math' or 'mathematics') and correct verb forms.

範例: No, I didn't enjoy math as a child because I found its calculations difficult. In contrast, I liked subjects such as biology and conceptual parts of physics, but numerical problems always frustrated me.

建議: Be clearer and more fluent: start with a direct answer, then give a specific reason and an example using linking words. Remove fillers and clarify expressions (e.g., '60s' is confusing).

範例: No particular number is important to me, but I favor the digits 0 and 6. For instance, many of my social media usernames include 06/06 because that combination is memorable to me.

× No, I'm not good at remembering the numeric digits.

✓ No, I'm not good at remembering numbers.

Using 'numeric digits' is unnatural and wordy in this context. 'Numbers' is the correct, natural noun. Replace the adjective+noun phrase with the single noun 'numbers' to improve clarity and naturalness.

× Numeric digits because I easily forgot them, and remembering a particular number or remembering someone's phone, uh, number is really tough for me.

✓ Numeric digits, because I easily forget them, and remembering a particular number or someone's phone number is really tough for me.

Two issues: verb tense and word choice. 'Forgot' is past tense but the meaning is habitual, so use present simple 'forget'. Also 'remembering someone's phone, uh, number' is redundant; combine as 'someone's phone number'. This fixes subject-verb consistency and phrasing.

× No, I don't. I don't prefer using numbers in my future works as everything is based on algorithm that for sure.

✓ No, I don't. I don't plan to use numbers in my future work because everything will be based on algorithms for sure.

Several problems: 'prefer using' is odd for future intention—use 'plan to'. 'Future works' should be 'future work' (uncountable). 'Based on algorithm' needs plural 'algorithms' and a clearer conjunction: 'because everything will be based on algorithms'. Also use 'will' to indicate future.

× But I I like to wrote everything.

✓ But I like to write everything.

Incorrect past tense 'wrote' after 'like to' which requires base form 'write'. Use the base form after 'to' (infinitive).

× I have a diary. I I love to wrote everything in my diary or even when I have phone.

✓ I have a diary. I love to write everything in my diary, and even on my phone.

Again 'wrote' should be 'write' (infinitive). 'When I have phone' is incorrect; use 'on my phone' to indicate where you record notes.

× So I type everything in my notes app on the phone so that I can remember.

✓ So I type everything in my notes app on my phone so that I can remember.

Small possessive correction: 'on the phone' is less natural than 'on my phone' when referring to the speaker's device.

× So in my future I don't like to work with the numbers.

✓ So in the future I don't want to work with numbers.

Use 'in the future' and 'don't want to' to express future preference. 'The numbers' is unnecessarily specific; use plural 'numbers'.

× No, I, I hate maths.

✓ No, I hate maths.

Remove stutter 'I, I' in normal written answer. The rest is acceptable; 'maths' is a regional variant (British English) so keep consistent.

× When I was a child, even now I hate maths.

✓ When I was a child, and even now, I hate maths.

Add conjunction and commas to clarify the time contrast. Also maintain present tense 'hate' for current feeling.

× Mathematics is kind of very a tough subject that I can't do.

✓ Mathematics is a very tough subject that I can't do.

Word order is incorrect: use 'a very tough subject' not 'kind of very a tough'. Remove 'kind of' or use 'kind of' alone (informal). This corrects adjective order and article placement.

× I, I remember I can do chemistry, I can do physics, I can do biology.

✓ I remember I can do chemistry, physics, and biology.

Remove stutter 'I, I' and combine items with commas and 'and'. The present simple 'can do' is fine; combining reduces redundancy.

× Everything I can do, every subject is easy to me.

✓ All subjects are easy for me.

'Everything I can do, every subject is easy to me' is awkward. Use 'All subjects are easy for me' for clarity and natural phrasing. Use 'for me' instead of 'to me' in this context.

× But I hate mathematics and numericals and physics.

✓ But I hate mathematics and numerical problems in physics.

'Numericals' is nonstandard; use 'numerical problems' or 'calculations'. Clarify that you dislike numerical problems in physics, not physics in general.

× I love physics, but I hate numericals in physics because it has calculation.

✓ I love physics, but I hate numerical problems in physics because they involve calculations.

Use plural 'they' to agree with 'numerical problems'. 'It has calculation' is incorrect; use 'they involve calculations' to describe what those problems require.

× There's no number, which are really important to me, but uh, but I feel like 6 is a number, which is my 60s that like digit is the only digit I love because I have my all Instagram, all Snapchat, all social accounts with the, with the number 06/06.

✓ There are no numbers that are really important to me, but I feel like 6 is special to me because many of my social accounts have the number 06 or 06/06.

Several issues: 'There's no number' should be 'There are no numbers' (agreement with plural 'numbers'). Relative clause 'which are' incorrect with singular 'number' — restructure. Phrase 'my 60s that like digit' is unclear; interpret and simplify to '6 is special to me' and explain accounts using '06' or '06/06'. Use plural 'accounts' and correct word order.

× I love, uh, using zero and six repeatedly.

✓ I love using zero and six repeatedly.

Remove filler 'uh' in written response. The sentence is otherwise fine; no preposition needed. This improves fluency and formality.