自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the tense and grammar, make the response more concise and structured: state directly that you had a bike, give one or two specific details (what kind, when you got it, why it was special) and use linking words to connect ideas. Keep to max 3–4 sentences and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I did. It was a four-wheeled bike that my father bought from a local shop for my seventh birthday. I remember riding it around our neighborhood every afternoon, and it was my favorite gift because it made me feel independent and confident.

建議: Make the opinion clearer and support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (for example, because, moreover) and avoid repeating the same idea. Limit to 2–4 sentences and use more precise vocabulary (cycling, recreational activity).

範例: Yes, I think cycling is quite popular in my country because it is an affordable and flexible form of exercise. For example, many people ride bikes for short commutes or weekend leisure rides, and cycling clubs organise group outings in parks and countryside areas.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple 'do have' with the past time reference 'when I was a child.' Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past states (I had).

× It is a four wheel bike and I remembered back then I got this bike during my seventh years old birthday and my dad got it from a store near our house.

✓ It was a four-wheel bike, and I remember I got it on my seventh birthday; my dad bought it from a store near our house.

Multiple errors: 'four wheel' needs a hyphen as a compound adjective before a noun ('four-wheel'). The original mixes past tense 'remembered' with narrative; 'remember' (simple present) can work but better to use 'I remember' or past 'I remembered' with past narrative—here 'I remember' or 'I got' are preferred. 'during my seventh years old birthday' is ungrammatical: use 'on my seventh birthday.' Also 'got it from a store' is informal; use past 'bought' for clarity. Suggestions: use hyphen for compound adjectives before nouns, use 'on + ordinal birthday', and use 'bought' for purchase in past simple.

× Is actually my favorite gift of all time.

✓ It was actually my favorite gift of all time.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper tense. Beginning with 'Is' without a subject is incorrect. Add the subject 'It' and use past tense 'was' to match the earlier past context. Suggestion: always include subject and match tense to surrounding sentences.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my own country, especially because it is one of the most exciting sports you could do because it is easier to do where you can just go and biking by your own or it can also be done in a group of people.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially because cycling is one of the most exciting activities you can do; it is easy to do on your own, and it can also be done in a group.

Several issues: 'my own country' is acceptable but unnecessary; 'it is one of the most exciting sports you could do' mixes modality and vague noun choice—use 'cycling' or 'riding a bike' and 'activities' rather than 'sports.' 'Could' suggests conditional; present ability should use 'can.' 'Biking by your own' is incorrect pronoun usage and form: use 'on your own' and gerund noun 'biking' or 'ride a bike.' Also sentence is run-on; split or use punctuation. Suggestions: use 'cycling' or 'riding a bike,' use 'can' for general ability, use 'on your own' instead of 'by your own,' and break long sentences into clearer clauses.