自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar (use past tense), give a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words for coherence. For example, start with a clear direct answer (‘No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.’), then add reasons with linking words (‘because…’ / ‘and’).

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. Also, I was quite small and wasn’t able to balance on a bike, so I didn’t learn to ride until I was older.

建議: Make the answer more natural and specific: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting points (reasons, examples). Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., ‘in my country’, ‘many people use bikes’, ‘they are convenient and cheap’). Use linking words like ‘because’ and ‘for example’.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an inexpensive and convenient way to travel short distances. For example, many people ride bicycles to work or to the market, especially in crowded cities where cars are slow.

× No I haven't back when I was there because my parents can't afford the bike.

✓ No, I didn't have one when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford a bike.

Errors: used present perfect 'haven't' with a past time expression 'when I was', which requires past simple; 'back when I was there' is unnatural for childhood context so change to 'when I was a child'; 'can't' is present tense but refers to past ability/permission, so use past 'couldn't'; 'the bike' should be 'a bike' (article). Suggestion: use past simple for completed past events ('didn't have'), match tense for the rest of the sentence ('couldn't afford'), and use appropriate article ('a bike').

× Also I was small to ride a bike.

✓ Also I was too small to ride a bike.

Errors: missing adverb 'too' to indicate insufficient size or age; 'small to ride' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'too + adjective + to + verb' structure for inability due to degree ('too small to ride').

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because by bike we can go from one place to another, we can reach other place easily.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because by bike we can go from one place to another and reach other places easily.

Errors: repetition and pluralization: 'other place' should be 'other places'; combine clauses more naturally with 'and'; tense is present which is correct. Suggestion: use plural 'places' when speaking generally and join clauses for fluency.

× There are limited of bikes in my countries so people can use easily to transport from one place to another.

✓ There are a limited number of bikes in my country, so people can easily use them to travel from one place to another.

Errors: 'limited of bikes' is incorrect; use 'a limited number of bikes' or 'limited bikes' with 'a'; 'my countries' should be singular 'my country' unless multiple countries intended; 'people can use easily to transport' is ungrammatical — use 'use them to travel' or 'use them for transportation'; add comma before 'so'. Suggestion: say 'a limited number of bikes' and use 'them' to refer back to bikes, and 'travel' or 'for transportation' for clarity.