自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, use correct verb tenses and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and avoid filler sounds. Also keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I was afraid of falling and never learned how to ride, so I usually walked or ran to play with my friends. Even now I still don’t know how to ride a bicycle.

建議: Answer directly and use more precise vocabulary and linking words. Fix grammar (plural/singular, articles). Provide a clear reason then a specific example, and finish with a short concluding sentence. Keep it concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in Korea because there are many bike lanes and parks that are suitable for cycling. For example, the Han River park has wide paths where people frequently rent and ride bikes. Therefore, cycling is a convenient and common way to get around in many cities.

× No I don't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question asked about the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the response should use past tense. Using 'do/ don't' is present tense and mismatches the time reference. Use 'did' for past simple. Also add a comma after 'No' for clarity.

× I didn't have bike because at that time I didn't know how to ride bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike because at that time I didn't know how to ride a bike.

Countable singular nouns require an article ('a bike'). The verbs are correctly in past simple, but the missing articles make the sentence ungrammatical. Add 'a' before each 'bike'.

× I was scared about riding bike so I just walked or ran with playing with my friends.

✓ I was scared of riding a bike, so I just walked or ran and played with my friends.

Use 'scared of' not 'scared about'. Add the article 'a' before 'bike'. The phrase 'with playing with my friends' is ungrammatical; use 'and played with my friends' to list activities. Also add a comma before 'so'.

× So still now I don't know how to ride a bike.

✓ So even now I don't know how to ride a bike.

The meaning refers to the present state, so present tense 'don't know' is fine; improve naturalness by using 'even now' instead of 'still now'. Keep the article 'a' before 'bike'.

× Yeah, I guess so, because there are so many road to ride bike.

✓ Yeah, I guess so, because there are so many roads to ride bikes.

'Road' should be plural 'roads' to match 'so many'. Also 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match the general plural reference. Alternatively, use 'places to ride bikes'. Subject-verb agreement remains correct with plural noun.

× For example, if you visit the park nearby Han River, you can enjoy riding bicycles.

✓ For example, if you visit the park near the Han River, you can enjoy riding bicycles.

Use 'near' rather than 'nearby' when followed by a noun. Add the definite article 'the' before 'Han River' in English. The rest of the sentence is fine.

× So I think Korea is really easy to ride bikes.

✓ So I think Korea is really an easy place to ride bikes.

The original sentence wrongly assigns difficulty to 'Korea' directly followed by an infinitive. English prefers 'an easy place to ride bikes' to express that riding bikes is easy in Korea. Add the article 'an' and 'place' to complete the structure.