自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and article use, and avoid sentence fragments. Add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "and") to make the story coherent. Keep the response to no more than five sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child my mother bought me a red bicycle as a special birthday gift, and I rode it nearly every day. Because I lived near a park, I often rode there with friends, which helped me become more confident cycling on roads. I remember practicing until I could ride for long distances without stopping.

建議: Make the opinion sentence complete and give specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "also") correctly and avoid fragments. Provide at least one specific reason why bikes are popular (health, environment, traffic) and an example to support it, staying within five sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country today because many people want to stay healthy and avoid traffic. For example, city governments have built more bike lanes and parks, so more commuters and families choose cycling for short trips. Also, cycling is affordable and environmentally friendly, which makes it attractive to students and office workers.

× When I was a child my mother bought me red bicycle.

✓ When I was a child my mother bought me a red bicycle.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'red bicycle'. In English, singular countable nouns generally require an article (a/an or the). Use 'a' because the bicycle is not previously specified. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'red bicycle' whenever referring to one nonspecific item.

× It was a special gift for my birthday and.

✓ It was a special gift for my birthday.

The sentence ends with a coordinating conjunction 'and' without a following clause, creating an incomplete sentence. Remove the trailing 'and' or add the missing clause. Suggestion: if no additional information follows, end the sentence after 'birthday'.

× Usually route it every day.

✓ I usually rode it every day.

'Route' is incorrect here and the sentence lacks correct subject-verb structure and tense. The context is past habitual action, so use the past tense verb 'rode' (past of 'ride') with the subject 'I' and place the adverb 'usually' before the verb. Suggestion: use 'I usually rode it every day' to show habitual past action.

× Bikes are popular in our country these days because some people.

✓ Bikes are popular in our country these days because some people enjoy them.

The clause 'because some people.' is incomplete and lacks a verb and object, making the sentence fragmentary. Complete the clause by adding a verb and, if needed, an object or complement. Suggestion: include what people do or feel, e.g., 'enjoy them' or 'prefer them'.

× Are fun of doing physical activities like riding a bike.

✓ They are fond of doing physical activities like riding a bike.

'Are fun of' is ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'be fond of' meaning to like something. Also the sentence needs a subject 'They' or 'Some people' to agree with the earlier clause. Suggestion: use 'are fond of' or 'enjoy' and include the appropriate subject, e.g., 'They are fond of doing physical activities.'