自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Clarify the main idea with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and specific details. Limit to about 2–4 concise sentences. Use past tense consistently and include linking words to show sequence (e.g., "then", "after"). Correct unclear words (e.g., "bike" instead of "back" or "boat") and give one or two specific details such as where you rode, who taught you, and how you felt.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and he often took me to the park to practise cycling. After I finished my homework, I looked forward to riding because it was my favourite activity.

建議: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific, coherent reasons. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "also", "nowadays") and correct common errors ("an undergraduate student", "go biking"). Keep responses natural and avoid repetition. Provide one or two concrete examples of where or why people bike.

範例: Yes, I think biking is quite popular in my country because many people use bicycles for exercise and short trips. For example, when I was a child families often biked together in parks, and now as an undergraduate I regularly go biking with friends around the campus lake.

× Yes, I had the back which boat by my father and then he already go to the park with me to practice my back skills.

✓ Yes, I had the bike which was bought by my father, and then he already took me to the park to practice my biking skills.

The sentence contains multiple grammar issues that match the past participle/ passive structure requirement: 'bought' is the past participle needed with 'was' to form the passive 'was bought'. 'Go' is incorrect for past context; 'took' is the correct past tense. Also 'back' and 'boat' appear to be wrong words; 'bike' and 'biking' fit the meaning. Improve by using correct vocabulary and forming the passive correctly: 'was bought'. Ensure verbs agree with the past timeframe by using past tense verbs like 'took' and the past participle 'bought'.

× That time when I finished my homework, it was the most I expect.

✓ At that time when I finished my homework, it was the most I expected.

The sentence sets a past timeframe ('finished my homework'), so the verb 'expect' must be in the past tense 'expected'. Also 'That time' is better as 'At that time'. To improve, match verb tenses consistently in past contexts and use natural time expressions: 'At that time... I expected'.

× Probably. Probably yes.

✓ Probably, yes.

This is a style/fluency issue more than strict grammar, but repeating 'Probably' is unnecessary. Combine into one clause 'Probably, yes' for natural spoken English. Keep present-tense sense consistent.

× When I was a child, my parents and their friends always together to biking, and today I'm a undergraduate student.

✓ When I was a child, my parents and their friends always went biking together, and today I'm an undergraduate student.

Problems: missing verb 'went' for past activity and incorrect word order; 'always together to biking' is ungrammatical. Use 'went biking together'. Also article error: 'a undergraduate' should be 'an undergraduate' because 'undergraduate' begins with a vowel sound. Fix by adding the past tense verb 'went', placing 'together' after the verb phrase, and using 'an' before 'undergraduate'.

× I always go to biking with my friends, like around the pool.

✓ I always go biking with my friends, for example around the pool.

'Go to biking' is incorrect; the correct pattern is 'go' + gerund for activities: 'go biking'. Also 'like' used to give an example is better replaced with 'for example' or 'such as'. Improve by using the gerund after 'go' and a clearer phrase for examples.