自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Keep answers concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense (since the question asks about childhood), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and self-correction mid-answer. Work on past-tense consistency and pronoun agreement.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me after I said I wanted to exercise, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon, which was great fun.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons and examples. Use correct noun forms and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and finish the thought—don't leave sentences incomplete. Mention frequency, places, and reasons to make it specific.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, every morning I ride along the roadside and I often see groups of cyclists training in parks and on bike paths because many people use cycling for exercise and commuting.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child actually my mom bought it for me because I told her that I would like to do some exercise and with that being said he bought she bought me one and I really had fun riding my bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. Actually, my mom bought it for me because I told her that I wanted to do some exercise, and she bought me one. I really enjoyed riding my bike.

Errors: incorrect tense mix (present 'do have' with past 'when I was a child'), unnecessary repetition and unclear pronoun ('he bought she bought'), and awkward phrasing. Correction: use past simple 'had' to match 'when I was a child', change 'do have' to 'had', use past 'wanted' to match reported desire, fix pronoun to 'she', and use 'enjoyed' for past enjoyment. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past) for events in childhood, use clear subject pronouns, and simplify sentences.

× I think bike is popular in in my country because every morning when I go to beside the road, I go beside the road.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because every morning when I go to the roadside, I often see many cyclists.

Errors: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally; repeated phrase 'in in' and awkward 'go to beside the road'. Correction: use plural 'bikes' and 'cyclists' or 'bikers'; replace 'beside the road' with 'the roadside' or 'along the road', and remove repetition. Suggestion: use plural for general statements, avoid repetition, and use natural prepositional phrases like 'along the road' or 'by the roadside'.

× I think bike is popular in in my country because every morning when I go to beside the road, I go beside the road.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because every morning when I walk along the roadside, I often see many cyclists.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'to beside' and repetition. Correction: use 'walk along' or 'go along' the 'roadside' or 'along the road'. Suggestion: learn common collocations: 'walk along the road', 'go along the roadside', 'by the roadside'.

× I often see bikers, bunch of bikers biking around.

✓ I often see groups of bikers riding around.

Errors: 'bunch of bikers' is informal and missing article 'a bunch of', and repetition 'bikers biking' is redundant. Correction: use 'groups of bikers' or 'a bunch of bikers' and use 'riding' instead of 'biking' twice. Suggestion: avoid redundancy by choosing one noun and one verb form (e.g., 'bikers riding' or 'people biking').

× I think they are exercising and.

✓ I think they are exercising.

Error: incomplete sentence ending with conjunction 'and' and missing object or continuation. Correction: remove the trailing 'and' or complete the sentence with additional information (e.g., 'and enjoying the fresh air'). Suggestion: ensure each sentence is complete and does not end with an unfinished conjunction; if you use 'and', add the second part of the sentence.