自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and relevant: answer the question clearly (yes/no), give a brief reason or detail, use correct tense and vocabulary, and avoid repetitions. Keep to 2–4 sentences, use past tense for childhood, and include one specific detail (e.g., who gave it, how you used it).

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was eight, and I used it to ride to school and play with friends every afternoon. I still remember how excited I was to learn to ride without training wheels.

建議: Improve grammar and add one specific comparison or reason with linking words. Use plural agreement and clearer linking phrases (for example, 'because', 'so', 'however'). Keep answers within 2–3 sentences and provide a short example or consequence.

範例: Not really. Most people prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for commuting in busy cities, so bicycles are mainly used for exercise or leisure in parks.

× I, we actually, I, I actually do have a bag when I was young because my mom works abroad to buy the, the, the gifts or the things that I want the dish that she doesn't have when she was young.

✓ I actually had a bag when I was young because my mom worked abroad and bought gifts or things I wanted that she didn't have when she was young.

Multiple problems: 1) Tense inconsistency: the student mixes present tense ('do have', 'works') with past-time reference 'when I was young'. Use past tense for actions in the past (had, worked, bought). 2) Sentence structure is fragmented and contains repetitions ('I, we actually, I, I actually'), which should be removed. 3) Word choice/clarity: 'the dish that she doesn't have' is unclear; likely intended 'things she didn't have when she was young', so change to 'things I wanted that she didn't have when she was young'. Suggestions: keep all verbs in the past tense for past events, remove filler repetitions, and simplify the clause order: main clause (I had a bag) + reason clause (because my mom worked abroad and bought things I wanted).

× Not really because most people uses motorbike.

✓ Not really, because most people use motorbikes.

Error: subject-verb agreement and singular/plural form. 'Most people' is plural, so the verb should be 'use' not 'uses' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27 and 1). Also, 'motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' to match 'most people' generally, or use an uncountable/general term 'motorcycles'. Suggestion: use 'most people use motorbikes' or 'most people ride motorcycles.'

× It is because it is more convenient and is more fast to go wherever they want.

✓ This is because they are more convenient and faster for getting around.

Errors: inappropriate repetition of 'it is' and mismatch of subject (needs plural to match 'motorbikes' or 'they'), adjective/adverb error 'more fast' is incorrect; use comparative adjective 'faster'. Also 'to go wherever they want' is wordy; 'for getting around' is more natural. Suggestions: match plural subject with plural verb ('they are'), use correct comparative 'faster', and simplify phrase to 'for getting around'.