自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear, ungrammatical and gives irrelevant information. Give a direct topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (reason, memory or how you felt). Keep it natural and under five sentences. Use past tense for childhood and avoid unrelated comments.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on busy streets, so I usually walked or took the bus to school. Sometimes friends let me borrow theirs, and I remember feeling a little jealous but happy to join them.

建議: This is a good, clear answer with relevant details. To improve further, vary vocabulary slightly, use linking words for coherence, and add a brief specific example or statistic to make it more convincing. Keep it within five sentences and use precise phrasing (e.g., 'commute to work or school').

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people commute to work or school by bicycle because it is cheap, convenient and often faster in traffic. Moreover, several cities have invested in dedicated cycling lanes, which has significantly improved safety and encouraged more people to cycle regularly.

× I don't have a bike when I am chat 'cause I am a girl.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense forms. 'Don't have' (present) and 'am' (present) are incorrect. Also 'chat' appears to be a typo for 'child'. Use 'didn't have' for negative past and 'was' for past of 'am'. Additionally, avoid using 'cause' in informal speech; 'because' is clearer. Suggestion: say 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I am a girl' or better 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Many people use them to commute, work and school because they are cheap and convenient.

✓ Many people use them to commute to work and school because they are cheap and convenient.

The list 'commute, work and school' is missing a preposition before 'work and school'. The verb 'use' is fine, but the phrase should be 'commute to work and school' to be grammatically correct. Add the preposition 'to' and keep parallel structure: 'commute to work and school.'

× And some cities have good cycling lanes which makes riding safer.

✓ And some cities have good cycling lanes, which make riding safer.

The relative clause 'which makes' does not agree in number with the plural noun 'cycling lanes'. Use 'make' (plural) to match 'lanes'. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive relative clause: 'lanes, which make riding safer.'