自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, correct grammar, keep within 3–4 sentences, and add a specific detail. Use past simple consistently and connect ideas with a linking word. For example, say you didn’t have one, give the reason (parents’ concern for safety), and add a brief detail about how you traveled instead.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought riding was unsafe. Therefore, I usually walked or used public transport to get to school. Occasionally I rented a bike with friends, but mostly I avoided cycling for safety reasons.

建議: Answer directly, use clearer vocabulary and grammar, and add a specific supporting detail or example. Use linking words (for example, therefore, because) to make the response coherent and limit to about 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short journeys. For example, many people use motorcycles or scooters to commute to work and to run errands in crowded cities, especially during peak hours.

× No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought that I am unsafe in the bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought that I was unsafe on a bike.

The sentence mixes past and present tense. The main clause is past (did not have), and the reported thought should also be in past tense (thought that I was...). Use 'was' not 'am'. Also use the preposition 'on' with 'bike' rather than 'in', and use 'a bike' as the noun phrase. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for reported speech and use correct preposition: 'thought I was unsafe on a bike.'

× So I go to school in a cycle.

✓ So I went to school by bicycle.

The context refers to childhood (past), so the verb should be past tense 'went' instead of present 'go'. Also English prefers 'by bicycle' or 'by bike' rather than 'in a cycle.' Suggestion: use 'went' and 'by bicycle' to match past context: 'I went to school by bicycle.'

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because most of the people go to home or go to other places so used for bikes for travelling.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because most people use them to go home or to travel to other places.

Multiple issues: tense and wording. 'Most of the people' is better as 'most people'. 'Go to home' is incorrect; say 'go home'. The phrase 'used for bikes for travelling' is ungrammatical; use active construction 'use them to...' Keep present tense here is acceptable because it's a general statement, so use present 'use'. Suggestion: write 'most people use them to go home or to travel to other places.'