自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on meaning, clarity and sentence structure. Begin with a direct statement answering the question (e.g. “Yes, I did.” or “No, I didn’t.”). Use correct vocabulary (bike, not bite) and correct tense (past simple for childhood). Keep it concise (1–3 sentences) and add one supporting detail with a linking word. Practice clear pronunciation and avoid filler words like “uh” and repeated words.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child, and I rode it every day before dinner with my sister. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I learned to ride confidently by the age of six.

建議: Start with a clear opinion (e.g. “Yes, I think so.”). Use accurate vocabulary and grammar (bicycle/bikes; people often ride bikes). Provide one specific reason and an example, using a linking word such as “because” or “for example.” Keep sentences short and organized to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are convenient for short trips and exercise. For example, I often see parents cycling with their children around residential areas in the evenings.

× Uh, in my shower I have a bite.

✓ Uh, in my childhood I had a bike.

The student used incorrect words: 'shower' and 'bite' instead of 'childhood' and 'bike'. This is a vocabulary/word choice error which affects pronoun/reference clarity. Also tense should be past ('had') because the question asks about having a bike when they were a child. Suggestion: use 'childhood' for the time period and 'had a bike' for past possession.

× I ride a bike every every day in uh, before I I eat dinner with my sister.

✓ I rode a bike every day before I ate dinner with my sister.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so verbs should be in the past tense. The student used present tense 'ride' and 'eat' instead of past 'rode' and 'ate'. Also remove the repeated word 'every' and the duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for habitual actions in the past: 'rode' and 'ate'.

× In my opinion, I think bai is very popular in my country because uh, allow around home.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are very popular in my country because they are allowed around the neighborhood.

The student used 'bai' (misspelling) and an unclear clause 'allow around home'. This is a word choice and pronoun/reference error. Use the plural 'bikes' to match general statement and a clear subject 'they' referring to bikes. 'Allowed around the neighborhood' clarifies that riding bikes is permitted locally. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary and clear pronouns.

× I, I saw people that have a child, uh, ride a bike every day.

✓ I saw people who have children ride bikes every day.

Use 'who' for people rather than 'that' (relative pronoun preference) and plural 'children' if meaning parents, and 'ride bikes' to match plural subject. Also tense is simple past 'saw' which is correct. Suggestion: use 'people who' and plural forms for general statements and ensure verb agreement with the plural subject.