自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make a direct, natural response and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then add one or two short supporting details. Use past tense correctly and avoid extra words. For example, say whether you owned a bike, when you got it, and one simple detail about it.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon.

建議: Begin with a clear opinion sentence and follow with specific, coherent reasons. Use linking words (because, also, for example) and correct vocabulary (e.g. "cheap", "practical", "commuting"). Avoid unclear phrases and keep to 2–3 supporting sentences. Mention one concrete example or statistic if possible.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and practical for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or school, and bike-sharing programs are common in cities with few wide roads.

× Yet I had to buy when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have one when I was a child, so my parents bought me a bike.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Yet I had to buy when I was a child' lacks a clear subject and verb agreement and uses 'yet' incorrectly. The intended meaning appears to be that the student did not own a bike as a child or that they had to buy one; I corrected it to a clear past-tense statement. Suggestion: state the subject ('I'), use a correct negation if needed ('didn't have'), and provide the action in past tense ('bought me a bike') to match the past time reference.

× Where I think by are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and good for salt drifts and many people use them to go to IT work in school.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and good for short trips, and many people use them to go to work or to school.

This sentence contains many structural and word choice errors. 'Where I think' is misplaced; start with 'I think'. 'by are' is incorrect word order and spelling; use 'bikes are'. 'salt drifts' is likely a mistranslation of 'short trips' or 'short distances'—I replaced it with 'short trips'. 'go to IT work in school' is unclear; likely meant 'go to work or to school'. Use parallel structure 'to go to work or to school'. Maintain present simple tense for general statements.

× For example in my city there are no pie plains and by sharing system no more student and office worker right?

✓ For example, in my city there are no flat plains, and with bike-sharing systems, many students and office workers use bikes instead, right?

The original has incorrect words and quantifier use: 'no pie plains' is nonsensical—I inferred 'no flat plains' (meaning hilly terrain) or 'no plain areas'. 'by sharing system no more student and office worker' lacks determiners and correct quantifiers; 'no more' is incorrect here. I changed it to 'with bike-sharing systems, many students and office workers use bikes instead' to convey the probable meaning. Also added commas and 'right?' at the end for the tag question. Suggestion: choose correct nouns ('plains'), use articles ('the' or 'no'), and use quantifiers like 'many' when appropriate.