自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer repeated the examiner's question instead of responding. For a better response, start with a clear topic sentence answering the question (yes/no) and then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep your answer concise (no more than 5 sentences) and avoid filler words.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike with training wheels when I was about six, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house after school. Later, I learned to ride without the training wheels, which made me feel more independent.

建議: Your answer gives a direct opinion but is disfluent and vague. Improve by stating your opinion clearly, then provide two specific reasons or examples connected with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example', 'also'). Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'every kid' → 'many children').

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many children and adults use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in the provinces where I live, people often ride bikes to the market or to visit neighbors, and there are several safe bike paths in small towns.

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because I think every kids loves to hang around biking around especially I'm living, I'm living in province and it uh, it is uh, what's so-called as umm.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because I think every kid loves to hang around and ride bikes, especially where I live in the province.

Errors: 'every kids loves' mixes plural noun with 'every' and uses incorrect verb form. Use 'every' with a singular noun: 'every kid'. With a singular subject, the verb takes the third-person singular form, so 'loves' is correct with 'every kid'. The original also had redundant and awkward phrasing: 'hang around biking around' and repeated 'I'm living'. Use 'hang around and ride bikes' and 'where I live in the province' for clarity. Suggestion: keep subject-verb agreement by using singular noun after 'every', avoid repetition, and use concise verb phrases like 'ride bikes'.