自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix repetition (e.g., "actually" twice) and verb/phrase forms ("couldn't reach the pedals", "rode on the back"), and finish the sentence. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I often rode on my sister's bike because I was too small to reach the pedals, so I sat on the back seat while she pedaled. Because I couldn’t control it myself, I remember feeling excited but a bit nervous whenever we cycled around the park.

建議: Answer directly and avoid vague phrases like "I don't know." Use clear linking words to compare past and present and give a specific reason or example. Correct odd phrasing ("twin 2000s" → "early 2000s") and maintain cohesion: topic sentence, contrast phrase, and supporting detail. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I think bicycles were more popular in the early 2000s, but their use has declined now. Today there are many more cars and improved public transport, so most people prefer taking buses or trains instead of cycling, especially in busy cities.

× Well I actually had a bike as a child to ride with, but it it wasn't actually mine, it was actually my sister's because I was quite young and short to ride the bike so I couldn't really reached the pedals or anything.

✓ Well, I actually had a bike as a child to ride with, but it wasn't actually mine; it was my sister's because I was quite young and too short to ride the bike, so I couldn't really reach the pedals or anything.

The sentence contains subject-verb agreement and verb form issues. 'It it' is a repetition error; remove the duplicate. 'Couldn't really reached' is incorrect because after 'could' the base form of the verb should be used, so use 'reach' instead of 'reached'. Also add 'too' before 'short' to convey inability. Punctuation is improved for clarity. Suggestion: after modal verbs like 'could' always use the base verb, and include 'too' with adjectives like 'short' when indicating inability.

× So I just rode along with my sister in the back seat of the.

✓ So I just rode along with my sister on the back of her bike.

The original sentence ends abruptly and uses 'back seat of the' which is incomplete and unnatural for bicycles. This is a sentence structure/content issue. Use a complete noun phrase: 'on the back of her bike' or 'on the back seat' (though 'back of her bike' is more natural). Suggestion: ensure noun phrases are complete and appropriate for the context.

× I definitely think they used to be popular because when the streets were safe back in the twin 2000s, but right now there's definitely way more cars than there was before.

✓ I definitely think they used to be popular when the streets were safer back in the early 2000s, but right now there are definitely way more cars than there were before.

There are tense and agreement issues. 'When the streets were safe back in the twin 2000s' is awkward; use 'safer' and 'early 2000s'. 'There's definitely way more cars than there was before' has subject-verb agreement: 'cars' is plural so use 'there are' and compare to plural 'there were'. Suggestion: match verb number to the subject and use comparative adjective 'safer' for contrast.

× So I think that people would rather just take, I don't know, public transportation rather than bicycles.

✓ So I think that people would rather just take, I don't know, public transportation rather than ride bicycles.

The phrase 'rather than bicycles' is awkward because 'take public transportation' contrasts with an action; use a verb for bicycles: 'ride bicycles'. This is a tense/structure choice to make the comparison parallel. Suggestion: keep parallel structure in comparisons (take public transportation vs ride bicycles).