自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: The answer does not address the question. You should respond directly with a brief topic sentence about whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 sentences. Use linking words if adding details (e.g., 'so', 'because', 'and').

範例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I rode it to school almost every day. Because it was lightweight and easy to handle, I learned to ride fast and confidently.

建議: The answer generally addresses the question but has grammatical errors, redundancy and unclear phrasing. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'therefore'). Keep it within 2–4 sentences and avoid repeating the same point.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because there is a lot of countryside and short-distance travel. For example, many people use bikes to commute to nearby markets or schools since cycling is inexpensive and does not require fuel. Therefore, cycling is both practical and common in rural areas.

× Please help me.

✓ I need help.

The student replied to a question about having a bike with 'Please help me,' which is inappropriate in this context and lacks relevance to the examiner's question. This is a sentence structure and pragmatic error: the response should directly answer the question. Use 'I had a bike' or 'I need help' if asking for assistance. For a direct answer to the question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' the correct response would be 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Yeah, I think so, because my country it does has lot of countryside.

✓ Yes, I think so because my country has a lot of countryside.

The sentence contains a redundant pronoun 'it' and incorrect auxiliary 'does has' plus missing article before 'lot.' Remove the extra pronoun, use the correct verb form 'has' (subject-verb agreement), and include the article 'a' before 'lot.' Also prefer 'Yes' in formal speech instead of 'Yeah.'

× So people used to ride bikes rather than some cars because it doesn't cost that much as it is not required fuel.

✓ So people tend to ride bikes rather than cars because it doesn't cost as much since bikes do not require fuel.

The original mixes past habitual 'used to' with a present explanation and has incorrect comparisons and wording. Use present simple 'tend to ride' to describe a general habit. Replace 'some cars' with 'cars.' 'It doesn't cost that much' is vague; 'it doesn't cost as much' is the correct comparative form. Finally, 'as it is not required fuel' is ungrammatical: use 'since bikes do not require fuel' to clarify the reason. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('bikes do not require').