服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid unclear phrases like "high striking 1", and add one or two specific details to support your preference. Use linking words to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 short sentences.

範例: I prefer wearing stylish clothes because I like an edgy, modern look. For example, I often choose leather jackets and bold accessories to make an outfit stand out. However, I also make sure items are wearable so I can be comfortable while looking fashionable.

建議: Give a direct answer first, then briefly explain why. Avoid filler words and unclear fragments like "dash, well, clothes." Use one linking phrase for clarity and provide a specific reason or example.

範例: I prefer smart clothes because they create a stronger impression. For instance, I usually wear a blazer and tailored trousers for presentations since they make me feel confident and professional.

建議: Answer directly and give a concise reason with a specific detail. Avoid awkward phrasing like "I'm still living by that." Use a linking word to show cause or habit.

範例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts for everyday use because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often pair a plain T-shirt with jeans for studying or running errands.

建議: This answer is detailed and specific; improve by tightening grammar and using clearer linking words. Make subject-verb agreement corrections and shorten slightly while keeping the key reasons.

範例: Yes, I do. I usually spend about two hours getting ready, and half of that is choosing an outfit because I worry about the event, the weather, and who I will be with.

建議: Give a direct answer and more precise supporting detail. Avoid vague terms like "side quests" and unnecessary repetition. Use a linking word to explain the reason and one specific example of your routine.

範例: No, I don't. Since I'm a student, my weekly routine is similar — I mostly study during weekdays and weekends, so I usually wear casual, comfortable clothes every day.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence, fix grammar, and explain briefly why those colors suit you with specific language. Remove repetition and use correct verb agreement.

範例: I prefer neutral and deep colors like black, brown, olive green, maroon, white, and blue because they suit my skin tone. For instance, olive green and maroon bring warmth to my complexion and make me look healthier.

× I like wearing stylish clothes, I want it edgy and appealing.

✓ I like wearing stylish clothes; I want them to be edgy and appealing.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because the antecedent 'clothes' is plural, so use 'them'. Also add 'to be' for correct verb structure: 'want them to be edgy and appealing'. Use a semicolon or conjunction to join clauses.

× Some people say that they like comfortable clothes, but for me it's really the high striking 1.

✓ Some people say that they like comfortable clothes, but for me it's really the striking, high-impact style.

'High striking 1' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use adjective order and appropriate noun: 'striking' and 'high-impact' describe 'style'. Ensure correct adjective placement before the noun.

× Oh, so as I've said earlier, I really like clothes that make strong impression.

✓ Oh, as I said earlier, I really like clothes that make a strong impression.

Missing article 'a' before 'strong impression' is needed for the countable noun. Also 'as I've said' is acceptable but 'as I said earlier' is more natural in spoken past reference.

× So when it comes to that I would choose smart clothes over dash, well, clothes.

✓ So when it comes to that, I would choose smart clothes over casual clothes.

'Dash, well, clothes' is filler and not grammatical. Replace with 'casual clothes'. Add a comma after the introductory clause.

× Yes I do, I prefer to wear it on a regular day than sleeveless clothes.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer to wear T-shirts on a regular day rather than sleeveless tops.

Pronoun 'it' is vague; use the noun 'T-shirts'. Use 'rather than' for comparisons and 'sleeveless tops' as a clearer noun phrase. Separate into two sentences for clarity.

× I became used to it so up until now I'm still living by that.

✓ I became used to them, so up until now I still follow that habit.

Pronoun agreement: 'it' should be 'them' referring to T-shirts. 'Living by that' is informal and awkward; 'follow that habit' better matches meaning. Maintain past tense 'became' with present result 'I still...'. Alternatively use 'I've become used to them'.

× Yes I do, whenever I go out I spend 2 hours getting ready and half of it is just choosing clothes because I overthink if the clothes that I'm wearing is appropriate to the event, weather and the people that I'm with.

✓ Yes, I do. Whenever I go out I spend two hours getting ready and half of that is just choosing clothes because I overthink whether the clothes I'm wearing are appropriate for the event, the weather, and the people I'm with.

Use 'that' to refer to 'two hours' not 'it'. Use 'whether' instead of 'if' for alternatives. Subject-verb agreement: 'clothes' is plural so use 'are'. Use preposition 'for' with 'appropriate'. Include commas in a list.

× No I don't because most of my routines are just the same for the whole week.

✓ No, I don't, because most of my routines are the same throughout the week.

Add commas for clarity and use 'throughout the week' or 'for the whole week'—avoid 'just the same' redundancy. This corrects flow and natural phrasing.

× I'm a student so I study the whole week and do some side quests when I'm not studying so.

✓ I'm a student, so I study during the week and do some side tasks when I'm not studying.

'Study the whole week' is unnatural; 'during the week' is better. 'Side quests' is inappropriate in this context; use 'side tasks' or 'side activities'. Remove redundant 'so' at the end.

× I like wearing black, brown, white, maybe blue, olive green and maroon because I'm a I'm an olive stone girl so those colors doesn't wash me out and compliments me.

✓ I like wearing black, brown, white, maybe blue, olive green, and maroon because I'm an olive-toned girl, so those colors don't wash me out and compliment me.

Fix repetition 'I'm a I'm an'. Use 'olive-toned' as adjective. Subject-verb agreement: 'colors' is plural so use 'don't' and 'compliment' (verb) rather than 'compliments' or use 'are complimentary' as alternative. Use commas in list.