服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating what you like, then give one or two specific reasons or an example. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and repetitive phrases. Keep response to 2–4 sentences and use linking words (for example, because) to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer wearing traditional Nepali clothes, such as the Dora Surwal, because they make me feel comfortable and confident. For example, when I wear it to family events, I receive many compliments and feel more at ease speaking with relatives.

建議: Answer directly then give a brief reason and an example. Use linking words (however, but, because) correctly and avoid repetition. Correct small grammar mistakes: “it depends,” “regular clothes,” and keep sentences compact.

範例: It depends on the situation, but generally I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for everyday wear because they are practical. However, for job interviews I choose smart attire to make a professional impression.

建議: Be concise and avoid repeating the same point. Give one clear reason and a short supporting detail. Remove duplicate phrases and say “in summer” rather than repeating “summer season.”

範例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable, especially in summer. For instance, I usually wear a cotton T-shirt when I go out on hot days because it keeps me cool.

建議: Give a clear direct answer (yes/no) then explain with one specific example. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect words. Use linking words such as ‘but’ or ‘however’ and correct grammar: “I don’t usually, but I take more time when I attend special occasions.”

範例: Not usually. However, I spend more time choosing clothes for special events; for example, before a wedding I plan my outfit a day ahead to make sure it matches the occasion.

建議: Give a clear, grammatical contrast between weekdays and weekends. Remove hesitations and correct vocabulary (weekday/weekend, formal/casual). Provide one specific example of each style and a short reason.

範例: Yes. On weekdays I wear formal clothes such as shirts and trousers because I go to the office. On weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts so I can relax and enjoy free time.

建議: Start with a simple statement of preference, then give specific reasons briefly. Avoid repeating the same idea and use clearer linking words (because, so). Mention one example of when you choose these colours.

範例: I usually prefer black and white for weekdays because they look professional and are easy to match. For example, I often wear a white shirt and black trousers for meetings since they give a neat, confident appearance.

× Thank you so much for asking me such kind of questions, which makes me more confident right now because some clothes, uh, clothes makes people more confident.

✓ Thank you so much for asking me such kinds of questions; that makes me more confident right now because some clothes make people more confident.

Use plural 'kinds of questions' or simply 'such questions' and use 'that' to refer to the situation. 'Clothes' is plural, so the verb must be 'make' not 'makes'. Also avoid repetition and use a semicolon or period to join related clauses.

× Like when I wear Dora Surwal, which is Nepal Nepali traditional, uh, clothes, which makes me more comfortable and confident.

✓ For example, when I wear a Dora Surwal, which is Nepali traditional clothing, it makes me feel more comfortable and confident.

Use 'a' before a singular garment (Dora Surwal), use 'Nepali' as the adjective, and 'clothing' is a better noun. Use 'it makes me feel' for natural English word order and verb usage.

× So I wear, I love to wear.

✓ So I like to wear it.

Combine phrases into a single clear sentence. Use 'it' to refer to the garment and 'like to wear' is the correct verb phrase.

× Oh, it's depends on the situation, by the way.

✓ Oh, it depends on the situation, by the way.

Use base verb 'depend' with third-person singular subject 'it': 'it depends', not 'it's depends'.

× So I prefer comfortable clothes to wear as a regular dresses, but to go somewhere else for interview or somewhere for the job in like a job interview where you can wear, uh, smart clothes to impress people.

✓ So I prefer comfortable clothes for everyday wear, but for job interviews or special occasions I wear smart clothes to impress people.

Use 'everyday wear' instead of 'a regular dresses'. Remove incorrect article 'a' before plural 'dresses'. Use plural 'job interviews' and 'special occasions' for clarity and correct noun forms.

× Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts because especially in summer season it it is so comfortable and it makes me more confident way while wearing T-shirts in summer season.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in summer, because they are comfortable and make me feel more confident when I wear them.

Avoid repetition ('it it' and repeated 'summer season'). Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to T-shirts and 'make me feel' is natural. Use 'in summer' rather than 'in summer season'.

× Basically not, but for if I have to go to the occasions.

✓ Basically no, but if I have to go to an occasion, I do think about what to wear.

Use 'no' rather than 'not' as a short answer. 'An occasion' is singular; use 'occasion' with an article. Rephrase to complete the sentence with a verb.

× So at that time I feel like, yeah, I do have to think some smart words so that at the time I I takes a little more time to choose the clothes Stevens on the parties or occasions or events.

✓ At those times I do have to think about smart outfits, so I take a little more time to choose clothes for parties, occasions, or events.

Use plural 'those times' to match 'parties'. 'Think about smart outfits' is correct; 'take' matches subject 'I' (not 'takes'). Remove unclear word 'Stevens'. Use parallel list with commas.

× Uh, yes, uh, in weekdays I usually wear, uh, formal dresses, uh, because, uh, in a wood days I should have to go to the, uh, office and all so that it is more better to wear, uh, formal words.

✓ Yes. On weekdays I usually wear formal clothes because I have to go to the office, so it is better to wear formal outfits.

Use 'on weekdays' not 'in weekdays'. 'Formal clothes' or 'formal outfits' is preferred to 'formal dresses' unless specifically dresses. Remove redundant 'should have to' and use 'have to'. 'More better' is incorrect; use 'better'.

× And besides of in, in a week, we dance week, weekends I can't wear anything even I love to wear.

✓ On weekends I can wear whatever I like.

Use 'on weekends' and simplify to natural expression. 'I can't wear anything even I love to wear' is unclear; likely meant free choice, so use 'can wear whatever I like.'

× I usually love to wear black and white on weekdays, because on weekdays I have to go to the markets, I have to go to the office, I have to meet many people, and white and black formal dress makes me more confident to communicate with the people, so that I usually love to wear black and white.

✓ I usually like to wear black and white on weekdays because I have to go to the market, go to the office, and meet many people, and black and white formal clothes make me more confident when communicating with people, so I usually wear black and white.

Use 'market' singular for general activity, 'black and white formal clothes' (plural) so verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Simplify repetition and use 'when communicating with people' for smoother phrasing.