服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct grammar, and use one or two supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence, fix verb forms (feel -> feel), and avoid filler phrases like "you know." Use a linking word to connect the reason.

範例: I prefer comfortable clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed. For example, I often choose loose shirts and soft trousers for studying and walking, since tight clothes make me uncomfortable.

建議: Answer directly with the preferred option (comfortable/casual or smart) and give a clear reason. Correct word choice ("caravans" is wrong) and grammar; use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas. Keep to 1–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because I value freedom from strict routines. For instance, I usually wear loose tops and jeans at home and when I go out with friends.

建議: Combine short fragmented sentences into a fluent reply. Use correct verb phrases (wear a T-shirt, wear them) and add a brief example with a linking word (for example, when).

範例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and cool in summer. For example, I often wear a T-shirt and shorts when I hang out with friends.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and then one or two specific reasons. Fix grammar ("I am" -> "Yes, I do"), remove repetition, and use linking words (because, so) to clarify why you spend time choosing clothes.

範例: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I have a large wardrobe and many items seem suitable. So when I plan to go out I often try a few outfits before deciding.

建議: Answer directly and provide specific contrast with linking words (whereas, while). Correct word order and grammar ("school clothes" or "uniform"). Give an example of weekend style.

範例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear my school uniform, whereas on weekends I choose casual clothes like jeans and hoodies that reflect my personal taste.

建議: State your preference clearly, use appropriate vocabulary ("wear" not "swear"), and avoid vague or grandiose claims without explanation. Give a brief reason and an example of when you wear that color.

範例: I like blue because it feels calm and energetic to me. For example, I often wear a blue T-shirt when I go out with friends because it’s both comfortable and cheerful.

× they make me feels free

✓ they make me feel free

The verb after the causative verb 'make' should be in base form (infinitive without to). 'Feels' is third person singular present; here the object 'me' requires 'feel'. Change to 'feel' to fix verb form. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× I don't like to wear. Tight clothes, they make me feel uncomfortable.

✓ I don't like to wear tight clothes; they make me feel uncomfortable.

A full stop incorrectly separates clauses and creates a fragment. Combine clauses with appropriate punctuation and remove the unnecessary period. Also ensure spacing and capitalization are correct. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I prefer caravans because in my life I don't want to subject to many routines and I usually. Like to wear them?

✓ I prefer casual clothes because in my life I don't want to be subject to many routines and I usually like to wear them.

The word 'caravans' is incorrect here; context requires 'casual' (adjective). 'Subject to' needs the verb 'be' before it. A period splits the sentence incorrectly and 'Like' should be lowercase and part of the same sentence. Also remove the question mark at the end because it is a statement. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Yes, I like it. It's comfortable and casual in summer. I always dress it when I'm. Hang out.

✓ Yes, I like it. It's comfortable and casual in summer. I always wear it when I hang out.

Use 'wear' rather than 'dress' to talk about putting on clothing. 'I always wear it' is correct. The clause 'when I'm. Hang out.' is fragmented; correct to 'when I hang out' using base verb form after subject. Also maintain consistent present simple tense. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× Yes, I am. I have lots of clothes and when I'm when I plan to go out I have to choose one of them.

✓ Yes, I have lots of clothes, and when I plan to go out I have to choose one of them.

The phrase 'Yes, I am.' is inappropriate here; the intended meaning is affirmation about spending time choosing clothes, better expressed without 'am'. Also the repeated 'when I'm when I' is redundant; remove repetition and use a single clause. Keep present simple tense for habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I don't know what I like. They are all perfect and I spend a lot of time.

✓ I don't know which one I like; they are all nice, so I spend a lot of time deciding.

'What I like' is awkward when referring to items; 'which one I like' is clearer. 'They are all perfect' is acceptable but 'nice' or 'similar' may be more natural. Add 'deciding' to complete the verb phrase and explain the reason for spending time; use gerund after 'spend time'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Of course, on weekdays I have to wear school clothes instead. On weekends I wear. The style of I like.

✓ Of course, on weekdays I have to wear school clothes. On weekends I wear the style I like.

The sentence 'On weekends I wear. The style of I like.' is fragmented and has incorrect word order. Combine and reorder to 'I wear the style I like' with correct pronoun position. Keep tenses consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I like blue, the color of the sky.

✓ I like blue, the color of the sky.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It is a descriptive adjective use and correctly formed. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I think blue is a symbol of one person's strong energy.

✓ I think blue is a symbol of a person's strong energy.

Use the indefinite article 'a' rather than 'one' before 'person' in this general statement. 'One person's' is grammatically possible but sounds odd; 'a person's' is more natural for generalizations. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I usually swear my blue T-shirt to hang out.

✓ I usually wear my blue T-shirt when I hang out.

'Swear' is the wrong verb; the correct verb for clothing is 'wear'. Also use 'when I hang out' rather than 'to hang out' for habitual actions. Keep present simple tense for habitual routines. Grammar problem type ID: 26