服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cần nói rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và đúng ngữ pháp. Tránh lặp từ và câu bị ngắt quãng; mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ khi nào bạn mặc, chất liệu hoặc lý do cụ thể). Sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu mạch lạc.

範例: I usually wear T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I often choose a cotton T-shirt and slim jeans when I go out with friends because they keep me cool and relaxed.

建議: Cần cấu trúc rõ: trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích nguyên nhân. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: prefer to wear; because they make me comfortable). Tránh dùng biểu thức không rõ nghĩa như “if I were now”.

範例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for daily life because they let me move freely. However, I usually wear smart clothes for formal events or when meeting new people because it looks polite and professional.

建議: Trả lời ngắn gọn, sửa ngữ pháp (it makes me; I can wear). Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể để câu thuyết phục hơn, ví dụ kể hoàn cảnh hoặc một loại T-shirt yêu thích.

範例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and casual. I usually wear a plain cotton T-shirt when I hang out with friends because it keeps me relaxed and cool.

建議: Cần nói mạch lạc, tránh tiếng ừm/ừh và sửa cấu trúc câu. Nói rõ lý do cụ thể (ví dụ muốn trông chuyên nghiệp hay phù hợp hoàn cảnh) và nêu hành động cụ thể bạn làm khi chọn đồ.

範例: Yes, I often spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look presentable. For example, I check different outfits and try them on to make sure the colours and styles match the occasion.

建議: Cần câu trả lời rõ ràng: chủ đề rồi giải thích khác biệt. Sửa lỗi về từ vựng (wear coats of clothes → wear casual clothes) và ngữ pháp. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về phong cách cuối tuần.

範例: Yes, I wear different styles. On weekdays I wear a school uniform, but at the weekend I prefer casual clothes like a hoodie and jeans because I want to be comfortable and relaxed at home.

建議: Trả lời trực tiếp và sửa ngữ pháp (are all black). Có thể mở rộng thêm lý do ngắn gọn vì sao thích màu đó và một ngoại lệ nếu có để làm câu phong phú hơn.

範例: I prefer black clothes because they are easy to match and look neat. In fact, most items in my wardrobe are black, although I sometimes choose a white shirt for special occasions.

× I like wearing T-shirt and jeans because they make me feel comfortable and cold so when I hang, when I hang out with friends.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts and jeans because they make me feel comfortable and relaxed when I hang out with friends.

The noun 'T-shirt' should be plural when speaking generally ('T-shirts'). 'Cold' is incorrect in meaning; 'relaxed' fits better. Remove the repeated fragment 'when I hang'. Use 'wearing' correctly with plural nouns.

× I refer to a comfortable and cozy clothes because make me comfortable. But for example, if I were now and I go out, I usually wear wear smart clothes because it's polite.

✓ I prefer comfortable and cozy clothes because they make me comfortable. But, for example, if I go out, I usually wear smart clothes because it is polite.

Use 'prefer' not 'refer'. 'Clothes' is plural so use 'they make'. Remove redundant 'wear'. Use simple present 'if I go out' for habitual actions. Use full form 'it is' for clarity.

× Of course I like wearing T-shirt because it's make me comfortable and also they make me feel relaxed. But I can wearing T-shirt when I hang out with friends.

✓ Of course I like wearing T-shirts because they make me comfortable and also make me feel relaxed. But I can wear T-shirts when I hang out with friends.

Use plural 'T-shirts' to speak generally. 'It's make' is incorrect; use 'they make' to agree with plural subject. 'Can wearing' is wrong; use modal + base verb 'can wear'.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want, uh, my appearance were uh, it's beautiful in a lot of people. So I need a lot when, uh, I spend a lot of time using clothes.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want my appearance to be attractive to many people. So I spend a lot of time selecting clothes.

Use infinitive 'to be' after 'want'. 'Were' is past and wrong here. 'It's beautiful in a lot of people' is ungrammatical; use 'attractive to many people'. 'Using clothes' is wrong; say 'selecting clothes' or 'choosing clothes'.

× Uh yes, because when in the weekdays I must go to school so I always wear uniforms but in the weekends I wear coats of clothes because I'm at home and I need to comfortable and it make me realize.

✓ Yes, on weekdays I must go to school so I always wear a uniform, but on weekends I wear casual clothes because I'm at home and I need to be comfortable.

Use 'on weekdays/on weekends' not 'in'. 'Wear uniforms' should be singular 'a uniform' if referring to one. 'Coats of clothes' is incorrect; use 'casual clothes'. Use 'need to be comfortable' for correct verb structure. Remove 'it make me realize' which is unclear.

× Actually, I like black, so in my closet all my clothes is all black.

✓ Actually, I like black, so all the clothes in my closet are black.

Subject-verb agreement: 'clothes' is plural so use 'are' not 'is'. Word order: 'all the clothes in my closet' is natural. Remove duplicate 'all'.