服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn và chính xác hơn; tránh lặp từ và ngữ pháp sai. Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại áo, lý do).

範例: I usually wear smart-casual clothes to work, such as shirts (often white) and long pants. I choose this style because it looks professional while still being comfortable for daily tasks.

建議: Cần tránh diễn đạt lặp và câu dài khó theo dõi. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để nối lý do và một kết quả ngắn gọn. Sửa ngữ pháp như "I prefer" và tránh mệnh đề thừa.

範例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because my job involves a lot of movement. As a result, loose shirts and trousers help me stay relaxed and work more efficiently.

建議: Cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ “sweets” sai). Hãy nói rõ lý do bằng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., "sweat") và rút gọn thành 2-3 câu súc tích với liên từ hợp lý.

範例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially in Vietnam's hot climate. They keep me cool and allow me to move freely when I am sweating.

建議: Cần trả lời thẳng câu hỏi và tránh những từ thừa; sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ. Nên cung cấp con số cụ thể và lý do ngắn gọn hơn (ví dụ: thích thời trang, chăm chút hình thức).

範例: Yes, I spend about 15 minutes each morning choosing my outfit because I enjoy fashion and want to look presentable at work.

建議: Cần cấu trúc rõ ràng: bắt đầu bằng một câu khẳng định, sau đó so sánh ngắn gọn giữa hai thời điểm. Tránh ngắt quãng và lặp từ; dùng từ chính xác như "casual" và "relaxed".

範例: Yes. On weekdays I wear smart-casual clothes suitable for a professional environment, while at weekends I prefer relaxed, colorful outfits for comfort and leisure.

建議: Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rồi giải thích ngắn gọn. Tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Dùng từ chính xác như "dark skin" và "stand out" hoặc "look better" để mô tả lý do.

範例: I prefer bright colours like white or red because they contrast well with my dark skin and make me look more vibrant, unlike black which can make me appear darker.

× Because now I'm working at a company so I prefer wearing some casual clothes such as shirt, white shirt and the long pants to to work in my company.

✓ Because I now work at a company, I prefer to wear casual clothes such as shirts, white shirts, and long pants to work.

Câu dùng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen; 'I'm working' suggests temporary continuous but speaker means current employment so 'I now work' or 'I work' is better. Use infinitive 'prefer to wear' rather than 'prefer wearing' for preference statements. Fix plural nouns: 'shirts' and 'long pants' (or 'trousers'). Remove duplicate 'to'. Sắp xếp từ cho tự nhiên hơn.

× Because my work requires me to move every day, not sitting, not sitting only in a chair. So I prefer wearing the comfortable clothes which can make me feel relaxed and can work effectively, rather than wearing the smart clothes which can which I feel.

✓ Because my work requires me to move every day and not just sit in a chair, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes that help me feel relaxed and work effectively, rather than smart clothes which I don't find comfortable.

Use present simple 'requires' for routines (correct), simplify repeated phrases 'not sitting, not sitting only' to 'not just sit'. Use 'prefer to wear' and relative clause 'that help me' (not 'which can make me'). Remove redundant 'which can which I feel' and replace with clear negative 'which I don't find comfortable.' Ensure sentence flow and correct relative pronoun usage.

× I really like wearing the T-shirt, especially in the hot weather in Vietnam.

✓ I really like wearing T-shirts, especially in the hot weather in Vietnam.

When talking generally, use plural 'T-shirts' not 'the T-shirt'. 'The' suggests a specific T-shirt. Use plural to indicate the category of clothing.

× Wearing the T-shirt can make me feel so cool and because I am quite a lot of sweets in my body.

✓ Wearing T-shirts makes me feel cool because I sweat a lot.

Rewrite for clarity and correct collocation: 'sweat' (verb/noun) not 'sweets'. Use simple present 'makes' to state a general effect. Remove awkward 'can make me feel so cool and because' by combining cause and effect correctly.

× So the way of wearing T-shirts can have me move, move easily and feel comfortable when wearing.

✓ So wearing T-shirts allows me to move more easily and feel comfortable.

Avoid awkward passive-like 'can have me move'; use active structure 'allows me to move'. Reduce repetition and redundant 'when wearing'. Use 'more easily' for comparative movement.

× Because I'm the person that love watching the fashion show so.

✓ Because I'm a person who loves watching fashion shows.

Use present simple 'love' -> 'loves' to agree with 'I' is exception but structure 'I am a person who loves' requires 'loves' for third person singular 'who' refers to 'person'. Use plural 'fashion shows' for general statement. Remove trailing 'so'.

× So the ways of choosing clothes everyday for my work for go outside is very important to me.

✓ So choosing clothes every day for work or going out is very important to me.

Simplify 'the ways of choosing clothes' to 'choosing clothes'. Use 'every day' (two words) and correct parallelism 'for work or going out'. Use plural agreement and avoid 'is' vs plural subject by making subject a gerund phrase 'choosing clothes... is' which is singular and correct.

× That's why that that every day I spend around 15 minutes to choose the best outfit which can make me feel comfortable and fascinating.

✓ That's why every day I spend around 15 minutes choosing the best outfit that makes me feel comfortable and attractive.

Avoid redundant 'that that'. Use gerund 'spend... choosing' instead of 'spend... to choose'. 'Fascinating' is used for things; use 'attractive' or 'confident' to describe how the outfit makes you feel. Use 'that' for defining relative clause.

× On weekdays I prefer wearing some casual clothes which can fit to the business environment.

✓ On weekdays I prefer to wear casual clothes that fit the business environment.

Use 'prefer to wear' for preferences, 'casual clothes' without 'some' is more natural. Use 'fit' (not 'fit to') and 'that' for defining clause. Maintain simple present for habitual actions.

× However, on the weekends I I choose, I prefer choosing the normal clothes which can make me feel comfortable and out and and colorful when going outside.

✓ However, on weekends I prefer to wear normal clothes that make me feel comfortable and look colorful when I go out.

Remove duplicate 'I I' and unnecessary 'choose'. Use 'prefer to wear' and 'look colorful' to express appearance. Use 'on weekends' (no 'the') and 'when I go out' for clarity. Remove extra 'and and'.

× Because my skin is quite dark so I usually choose with the the the bright color like white or red with can make my skin is fascinating rather than using the the the black the black color which can make my skin a darker.

✓ Because my skin is quite dark, I usually choose bright colors like white or red that make my skin look more attractive, rather than black, which can make my skin look darker.

Remove unnecessary 'with' after 'choose'. Use 'bright colors' plural. Use relative clause 'that make my skin look more attractive'. Use 'look darker' not 'a darker'. Remove repeated 'the the the'. Ensure commas and relative pronouns are used correctly.