服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cần trả lời rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ thừa. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể về kiểu trang phục và lý do. Tránh dùng từ mơ hồ như “some sort of” hoặc lặp từ.

範例: I prefer comfortable clothes, especially T-shirts and jeans. For example, I like soft cotton T-shirts because they are breathable and easy to move in.

建議: Cần cấu trúc câu rõ ràng và dùng liên từ phù hợp. Tránh những cụm từ không rõ nghĩa như “sunny or rainy waters” và “before that”. Nên giải thích ngắn gọn lý do (ví dụ: tiện lợi, giảm căng thẳng). Giữ tối đa 3 câu.

範例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they are more practical. For instance, casual clothes let me move freely and help me feel less stressed during a busy day.

建議: Cần sửa ngữ pháp (gerund/infinitive) và rút gọn câu để tự nhiên hơn. Nên nói 1 câu chủ đề rồi thêm 1 câu với ví dụ cụ thể (khi nào, tại sao). Tránh lặp từ và lỗi cấu trúc như “to it's been so cooler.”

範例: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts, especially in summer because they keep me cool and relaxed. I even wear soft T-shirts to sleep because they are comfortable at night.

建議: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chỉnh ngữ pháp và cấu trúc để tự nhiên hơn. Bắt đầu bằng câu trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với ví dụ. Tránh cấu trúc lộn xộn như “The clothes start all that.”

範例: No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes. I usually pick whatever is comfortable and looks fine, so I can get dressed quickly in the morning.

建議: Cần câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi thì. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề (Yes/No) và nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh lặp và lỗi thì như “went on a party.”

範例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekends because I often visit my grandparents or go to family gatherings. On those days I choose slightly smarter clothes compared with my weekday outfits.

建議: Cần trả lời trực tiếp về màu sắc thay vì nói lan man về cảm xúc và thời tiết. Nếu thời tiết là yếu tố quan trọng thì liên kết rõ ràng: màu bạn chọn theo tâm trạng hoặc theo mùa. Sử dụng ví dụ cụ thể và cấu trúc ngắn gọn tối đa 3 câu.

範例: I usually prefer neutral colours like blue and grey because they are versatile. When I'm happy I might choose brighter colours, but on cold or rainy days I tend to wear darker clothes and a warm jacket.

× Wow, wearing kinds of clothes that it is comfortable such as T-shirts or just some sort of.

✓ Wow, I like wearing kinds of clothes that are comfortable, such as T-shirts or similar items.

The original sentence misuses the -ing form 'wearing' without a subject and uses 'it is' incorrectly. Use 'I like wearing' to introduce the habit (verb + -ing as a noun phrase) and make the noun phrase plural agreement 'clothes that are comfortable'. Improve by adding a clear subject and correct verb 'are' to match plural 'clothes'.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes more than smart clothes.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes to smart clothes.

Preference is usually expressed with 'prefer doing A to B' or 'prefer A to B'. Using 'prefer to wear... more than' is awkward. Use the gerund form 'wearing' or 'prefer X to Y' for natural present-tense preference.

× Especially in sunny or rainy waters.

✓ Especially in sunny or rainy weather.

'Rainy waters' is unidiomatic and the fragment lacks connection to the previous sentence. Replace with 'rainy weather' and integrate it into the sentence to convey meaning clearly.

× I can still be comfortable and before that I can reduce my stress and emo and control my emotional.

✓ I can still be comfortable, and that helps me reduce my stress and control my emotions.

Mixed tenses and unclear words 'before that' and 'emo' cause confusion. Use present tense consistently and standard nouns 'stress' and 'emotions'. Use 'that helps me' to show cause.

× Yes, I really like to wearing T-shirt, like to wear T-shirts usually in summers or summer vacation in which it helps me to feel more relaxed and it is very comfortable.

✓ Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts, usually in summer or during summer vacation because they help me feel more relaxed and comfortable.

Do not combine 'to' with '-ing' (avoid 'to wearing'). Use 'wearing' as a gerund after 'like'. Use singular 'summer' not 'summers' for season reference and 'because' to show reason.

× Also I would like to wear it also when sleeping to it's been so cooler.

✓ Also, I like to wear them when sleeping because they are cooler.

Pronoun disagreement: 'T-shirts' is plural, so use 'them' and 'they are'. 'It's been so cooler' is incorrect; use 'they are cooler' or 'it is cooler' with correct subject. Simplify phrasing to be natural.

× The clothes start all that I think are comfortable and looks OK to me, so I didn't spend too much time on choosing clothes.

✓ I choose clothes that I think are comfortable and look OK, so I don't spend too much time choosing them.

Awkward word order 'The clothes start all that' and tense inconsistency ('didn't' vs present habit) are incorrect. Use present simple for habits and ensure subject-verb agreement 'look OK'.

× Yes I'm I usually wear different styles of clothes on weekend in weekdays and weekends because on that day I usually have special occasion to like visiting my grandparents or went on a party with my parents.

✓ Yes, I usually wear different styles of clothes on weekends because I often have special occasions, like visiting my grandparents or going to a party with my parents.

Remove extraneous 'I'm I'. Use plural 'weekends'. Match verb forms for list items ('visiting' and 'going' both gerunds) and keep tense consistent.

× So I usually wear different styles than normal days.

✓ So I usually wear different styles than on normal days.

Missing preposition 'on' before 'normal days' and slight awkwardness. Add 'on' to indicate comparison with typical days and keep present habitual tense.

× Well, it depends on my emotion and stress like in or.

✓ Well, it depends on my emotions and stress levels.

Fragmented phrase 'like in or' is meaningless. Use plural 'emotions' and add 'levels' for clarity.

× It also depends on whether when it is hot or sunny days actually wear short clothes and comfortable.

✓ It also depends on whether it is hot or sunny; on those days I actually wear short, comfortable clothes.

Incorrect combination 'whether when' and missing punctuation. Use 'whether it is hot or sunny' and clarify the result clause 'on those days I wear...'. Also adjust adjective order and plurality.

× But in rainy or some sort of cold days I usually wear long shirts and wear and usually they wear jackets.

✓ But on rainy or cold days I usually wear long shirts and jackets.

Awkward repetition 'wear and usually they wear'. Use 'on rainy or cold days' for preposition, combine items concisely, and avoid unnecessary pronoun repetition.