服装— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and add one clear reason with a linking word. Avoid filler words like “uh” and repetition of “I prefer”. Aim for 2–3 sentences, using correct verb forms and a clearer connector.

範例: I prefer wearing casual, comfortable clothes because I spend a lot of time outdoors. For example, loose trousers and a light jacket let me move easily and stay comfortable all day.

建議: Correct tense and word choice, remove repetition, and give a concise reason with a linking word. Use past work experience briefly and connect it to current preference. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because my previous jobs as a barrister and assistant director involved long hours and active tasks. Therefore, comfort is more important to me than dressing formally.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words, correct grammar (use infinitive or gerund properly), and add one specific example of when you wear T-shirts. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word.

範例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable for long shifts. For example, I usually wear cotton T-shirts on busy days when I need to move around a lot.

建議: Answer directly with correct tense and clearer expressions. Avoid unclear phrases like “sitting close.” State how much time and when you choose clothes and give a brief reason using a linking word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I usually spend about an hour choosing my clothes the night before because I like to plan my outfits. This helps me avoid rushing in the morning and ensures my clothes are appropriate for the day.

× Uh, I prefer to wearing the casual dress or comfortable clothes.

✓ Uh, I prefer to wear casual dresses or comfortable clothes.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the base form 'to' + verb (to wear) or the gerund (wearing) without 'to', but not 'to wearing'. Also 'the casual dress' is unnatural; use plural 'casual dresses' or omit article. Suggestion: use 'prefer to wear' or 'prefer wearing'.

× I prefer because I usually spend the time outside, so yeah.

✓ I prefer that because I usually spend time outside, so yeah.

The original has an unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'time' and a missing connector 'that' to link the reason. Use 'usually spend time outside'. Also 'prefer' needs an object or reason: 'I prefer that because...'.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I work as a barrister and assistant director before so so that kind of job required kind of really comfortable dress.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because I worked as a barrister and assistant director before, and that kind of job required really comfortable clothes.

Tense mismatch and word choice issues: 'work ... before' should be past 'worked before'. 'Required' is past, matching 'worked'. Remove redundant 'so so' and 'kind of' repetitions. Use plural 'clothes' and place adjectives correctly. Keep consistent past reference to job experience.

× So that's why I'm prefer to wearing comfortable and casual clothes.

✓ So that's why I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes.

Same error as earlier: 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' + base verb (to wear) not 'to wearing'. Also 'I'm prefer' is incorrect; use simple present 'I prefer'.

× Yeah, of course, as I mentioned before, I work as a barrister and assistant director.

✓ Yeah, of course. As I mentioned before, I worked as a barrister and assistant director.

If the speaker refers to a past role with 'before' earlier, use past tense 'worked'. Keep tense consistent with previous statements about past job.

× That kind of things involve like the long hour shift.

✓ Those kinds of things involve long shifts with long hours.

'That kind of things' mixes singular and plural; use 'Those kinds of things' or 'That kind of thing'. 'Long hour shift' is awkward; use 'long shifts with long hours' or 'long-hour shifts'. Adjust quantifier and noun agreement.

× So I prefer to wearing T-shirts because it's really comfortable.

✓ So I prefer wearing T-shirts because they're really comfortable.

'Prefer' should be followed by 'wearing' without 'to' (prefer wearing) or 'to wear'. Also 'it's' for plural T-shirts should be 'they're'. Use consistent form: 'I prefer wearing' or 'I prefer to wear' and 'they are really comfortable'.

× I spent a lot of time sitting close, so usually I'm preferring the clothes day before, like previous days and night.

✓ I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, so usually I pick my clothes the day before, like in the evenings.

Tense and verb choice errors: 'spent' should be present 'spend' to match habitual action. 'Sitting close' is incorrect for choosing clothes; use 'choosing clothes'. 'I'm preferring' is incorrect; use simple present 'I pick' or 'I prefer'. 'Day before, like previous days and night' is unclear; 'the day before, usually in the evening' is clearer.

× I think I spend a lot of the one hour for choosing my clothes.

✓ I think I spend about an hour choosing my clothes.

Phrase 'a lot of the one hour' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'about an hour' or 'a lot of time'. Preposition 'for' is unnecessary; use the gerund 'choosing'.