音乐— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example of when you choose each type. Reduce repetition and correct grammar (e.g., "depends on", "how I feel").

範例: I like both sad and happy music. For example, I usually choose sad songs when I want to relax or reflect after a long day, but I play upbeat tracks in the morning to lift my mood and get ready for work.

建議: Fix grammar and be slightly more specific. Use a linking phrase to explain how happy music affects you and give a concrete example of an activity it helps. Avoid overgeneral phrases like "every day" unless accurate.

範例: Yes, happy music definitely makes me feel more energetic. For instance, listening to upbeat pop in the morning helps me wake up and stay motivated while I exercise and prepare for work.

建議: Use a single clear sentence followed by brief details. Correct tense and reduce redundancy (e.g., "I haven't taken any music classes"). Mention any informal learning or plans for classes to enrich the answer.

範例: No, I haven't taken any music classes. I usually learn informally by listening to playlists on Spotify and watching tutorial videos on YouTube, though I might take lessons in the future to learn an instrument.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence, then provide two specific examples with brief explanations and avoid awkward phrasing (e.g., "I think my cooking will be delicious" is odd). Use linking words like "for example" or "also".

範例: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other tasks. For example, I play upbeat playlists while cooking because it makes the process more fun, and I listen to podcasts or energetic songs while cleaning to keep my energy up.

× It depends on the situation that I'm feeling.

✓ It depends on the situation I'm in.

The phrase 'depends on' is correct but 'that I'm feeling' is an incorrect use of verb and preposition. Use 'I'm in' to indicate the situation or state you are experiencing. Suggestion: say 'It depends on the situation I'm in' or 'It depends on how I feel.'

× It depends of my emotions.

✓ It depends on my emotions.

The correct preposition after 'depends' is 'on', not 'of'. Replace 'of' with 'on'.

× So I prepare both music.

✓ So I prepare both kinds of music.

The noun 'music' is uncountable; to indicate two types use 'both kinds of music' or 'both types of music'. This fixes the structure and makes the meaning clear.

× Yes, happy music make me feel more excited every day because it can help me boost my energy to do everything I need to do the whole day.

✓ Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited every day because it can help me boost my energy to do everything I need to do throughout the day.

Subject-verb agreement: 'music' as a singular noun requires 'makes' (third person singular). Also improve wording: use 'throughout the day' instead of 'the whole day' for natural phrasing.

× Not yet, I didn't take any music classes, I'm just listening using Spotify, YouTube and that's the only way I have to listen music.

✓ Not yet, I haven't taken any music classes; I just listen using Spotify and YouTube, and that's the only way I have to listen to music.

Use present perfect 'haven't taken' for experiences up to now. 'I'm just listening' should be simple present 'I just listen' for habitual action, and add preposition 'to' after 'listen'. Also combine clauses with appropriate punctuation.

× Absolutely yes, especially when I'm cooking because when I listen music while I'm cooking I think my cooking will be delicious.

✓ Absolutely, especially when I'm cooking, because when I listen to music while I'm cooking I think my food will be more delicious.

Add comma for clarity. Use 'listen to music' with preposition 'to'. 'My cooking will be delicious' is awkward; 'my food will be more delicious' or 'what I cook will be tastier' is more natural. Also 'absolutely yes' is redundant—'absolutely' alone is fine.

× And also when I'm cleaning the house, it gives me more excitement when I do errands at home.

✓ Also, when I'm cleaning the house it makes me more excited while I do errands at home.

'Gives me more excitement' is awkward; use 'makes me more excited'. Remove redundant 'and' and place commas properly. 'Do errands at home' is acceptable but 'while I do chores at home' is more natural; either is fine.