音乐— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Reduce hesitations and correct basic grammar (e.g., subject-verb agreement, countable nouns). Use linking words like “but” or “however” to contrast situations.

範例: I prefer both types depending on my mood. When I’m happy, I like upbeat, cheerful songs because they help me relax and celebrate; however, when I’m sad I choose slower, sad music to process my feelings and feel comforted.

建議: Start with a direct answer and then give specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetitive words like “so” and check sentence structure (e.g., tense and pronouns). Use linking words such as “because” and “for example” to make your points coherent.

範例: Yes, definitely. Happy music makes me feel more energetic because its lively rhythm and positive lyrics lift my mood; for example, listening to upbeat songs after work helps me unwind and remember fun moments with friends.

建議: Answer directly and use correct verb forms (e.g., “I haven’t taken”). Give a clear reason and one specific detail about future plans. Avoid irrelevant or unclear words and limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: No, I haven’t taken any music classes, but I want to learn guitar in the future because acoustic guitar creates a warm, relaxing atmosphere. I especially enjoy acoustic performances because they sound natural and intimate.

建議: Give a clear, natural answer and use specific vocabulary to describe the music (e.g., “soft acoustic” instead of unclear words). Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, gerunds after prepositions) and use linking words like “so” or “therefore” correctly.

範例: Yes, I often listen to soft acoustic music while I work or read because it creates a calm atmosphere. It helps me concentrate and clear my mind when I have to focus on tasks.

× So, well, it's depend on the situation.

✓ So, well, it depends on the situation.

The subject 'it' requires the third-person singular present tense form of the verb 'depend'. Use 'depends' to agree with the singular subject. Suggestion: use 'it depends' for correct subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing.

× I want to listen to happy musics to uh, relax and not to feel stressed

✓ I want to listen to happy music to relax and not feel stressed

'Music' is an uncountable noun and should not take the plural 'musics'. Also, infinitive form 'to relax' is sufficient; remove the extra 'to' before 'feel'. Suggestion: use uncountable noun forms and keep parallel infinitives.

× and about when I feel sad. So I.

✓ and when I feel sad, I prefer to listen to sad music.

The original fragment is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Provide a full clause that states the intended idea. Suggestion: complete the sentence with a clear subject and verb, e.g., 'I prefer to listen to sad music.'

× So it's helped me relax and improve my mood after a long day.

✓ So it helps me relax and improves my mood after a long day.

Using 'it's helped' (present perfect with contraction 'it has helped') conflicts with the general statement about habitual effect. Use simple present 'helps' and adjust verb to 'improves' for subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use simple present for general truths and ensure verbs agree with 'it'.

× And of course, so happy music has the powers to leave people's spirit and even bring back unforgettable memories.

✓ And of course, happy music has the power to lift people's spirits and even bring back unforgettable memories.

Use the uncountable noun 'power' not 'powers' in this context. The verb phrase should be 'lift people's spirits' (plural 'spirits') rather than 'leave people's spirit'. Suggestion: use idiomatic collocations: 'the power to lift people's spirits.'

× And meanwhile, so it's not make me feel when I feel stressed.

✓ And meanwhile, it doesn't make me feel worse when I'm stressed.

'It's not make' is ungrammatical; use 'it doesn't make' for negative simple present. Also specify what 'feel' means (e.g., 'feel worse') and use 'I'm stressed' for clarity. Suggestion: use auxiliary 'doesn't' with base verb and complete the idea.

× So I haven't take a music classes because for me but I like to learn how to play the guitars in the future because I think that Utah create a warm and relaxing feelings.

✓ So I haven't taken music classes, but I would like to learn how to play the guitar in the future because I think it creates warm and relaxing feelings.

Use past participle 'taken' with present perfect 'haven't taken'. 'Music classes' is fine without an article; 'the guitars' should be 'the guitar' or 'guitar' as a general activity. 'Utah' appears to be a typo; use 'it' as the subject. 'Create' must agree with singular 'it' -> 'creates', and 'feelings' can be 'a warm, relaxing feeling' or 'warm and relaxing feelings'. Suggestion: use correct past participle, correct noun forms for instruments, fix pronoun/reference and subject-verb agreement.

× I love acoustic guitar performance because they sound.

✓ I love acoustic guitar performances because they sound warm and natural.

The pronoun 'they' must refer to a plural noun; use plural 'performances' or rephrase to 'it sounds' if referring to the guitar. Also the predicate is incomplete; add an adjective like 'warm and natural' to finish the thought. Suggestion: ensure pronoun matches noun number and complete the adjective phrase.

× So yes, I often listen to soft Augusta music.

✓ So yes, I often listen to soft, acoustic music.

'Augusta' seems to be a mistaken word; likely 'acoustic' fits context. Use simple present 'listen' is correct for habitual action. Suggestion: use the correct adjective 'acoustic' and include a comma between adjectives.

× I love my playlist because it's create a very calm then shootings atmosphere and it's very helpful when I working, reading or when I need concentrate and clear my mind.

✓ I love my playlist because it creates a very calm, soothing atmosphere and it's very helpful when I'm working, reading, or when I need to concentrate and clear my mind.

Use 'creates' for third-person singular present. 'Then shootings' is incorrect; likely 'soothing' is intended. 'When I working' needs auxiliary 'I'm working'. Use infinitive 'to concentrate'. Suggestion: correct verb forms, choose correct adjectives ('soothing'), and use proper infinitives and contractions for progressive tense.