音乐— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your response natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Avoid incorrect word choices (e.g. “anesthetic”) and overlong phrases. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

範例: I prefer happy music. It improves my mood and helps me concentrate when I work, because upbeat rhythms keep me motivated. For example, I often play pop or electronic songs while studying to stay focused.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons with linking words and correct tense and word order. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Limit to 2–3 sentences and include an example or brief result.

範例: Yes, happy music definitely excites me. When I feel tired from work, listening to my favorite upbeat songs helps me relax and feel lighter, so I can continue working more energetically.

建議: Provide a concise, well-structured response: state your current situation, give a reason, and add a specific detail about the classes. Use correct tense and avoid repeating the same idea.

範例: Yes, I am currently taking music classes because I wanted to learn a new skill after my exams. I attend weekly lessons where I study basic guitar techniques and practice for about an hour each session.

建議: Answer directly then give specific activities and explain briefly how music helps, using linking words. Correct tense and phrasing (e.g. “while cooking” not “while when I was cooking”) and avoid awkward constructions.

範例: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other activities. For instance, I play upbeat playlists when I cook to make the task more enjoyable, and I listen to energetic tracks when I jog because they boost my pace and motivation.

× I love to listen happy music because it feels me more anesthetic and makes my mood better and I focus on my task with fully determination and potential.

✓ I love to listen to happy music because it makes me feel more relaxed, improves my mood, and helps me focus on my tasks with full determination and potential.

Errors: missing preposition 'to' after 'listen' (Grammar problem type 11), incorrect verb order 'feels me' should be 'makes me feel' (type 26/27), wrong word 'anesthetic' used instead of 'relaxed' (type 13), plural/task agreement and article use: 'task' should be plural 'tasks' or 'my task' with article, and adjective phrase order 'fully determination' is incorrect — should be 'full determination' (type 18/22). Suggestion: Use 'listen to', use 'makes me feel' for causative structure, choose correct adjective ('relaxed'), use plural 'tasks' if general, and use 'full determination'.

× Yes, music make me feel more excited because when I was busy in my work I feel so tired and I want to relax myself by listening music according to my taste and I love to feel lighter and I. I love it.

✓ Yes, music makes me feel more excited because when I am busy with my work I feel tired and want to relax by listening to music I enjoy; I love that lighter feeling.

Errors: 'music make' should be 'music makes' (third person singular — type 2 and 27). Inconsistent tenses: 'when I was busy' then 'I feel' — keep present 'when I am busy' (type 6). Preposition 'busy with my work' not 'in my work' (type 11). 'Relax myself by listening music' needs 'listen to music' and no reflexive 'myself' (types 11 and 15). Sentence fragment 'and I.' removed and wording simplified (type 26). Suggestion: Maintain consistent present tense, ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct prepositions and 'listen to'.

× Yes, absolutely. I am taking music classes these days because I had finished my exam, so I wanted to busy myself with new skill. I want to learn new skill. I attend music classes regularly.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I am taking music classes these days because I finished my exams, so I wanted to keep myself busy by learning a new skill. I want to learn a new skill and I attend music classes regularly.

Errors: Mixed tenses — 'I am taking' (present continuous) is fine, but 'I had finished' (past perfect) is unnecessary; use simple past 'I finished' (type 5/6). 'Busy myself with new skill' should be 'keep myself busy by learning a new skill' (verb+ing and preposition use — types 8 and 11). Missing articles: 'a new skill' (type 22). Repetition condensed. Suggestion: Use consistent tense, use 'keep myself busy by learning', and include articles before singular countable nouns.

× Yes I love to listen music while when I was cooking in the kitchen so I've been more enjoy myself and when I was jogging and doing exercise so I love to listen music makes me feel better.

✓ Yes, I love to listen to music while I am cooking in the kitchen because it helps me enjoy myself more, and when I am jogging or exercising, listening to music makes me feel better.

Errors: Missing 'to' after 'listen' (type 11). Unnecessary 'while when' — choose one; use present continuous 'while I am cooking' (type 6). 'I've been more enjoy myself' is ungrammatical — use 'it helps me enjoy myself more' (verb form and adverb placement — types 8 and 20). 'Doing exercise' better as 'exercising' (verb in present participle — type 10). 'Listen music makes me' needs correction to 'listening to music makes me' (preposition and gerund use — types 11 and 8). Suggestion: Use 'listen to', maintain consistent tense, use gerunds for activities, and place adverbs correctly.