音乐— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and organize your response: state your preference clearly, give one or two specific reasons, and avoid hesitations and repetitions. Use linking words (because, so) correctly and choose precise vocabulary (activities, work, cheer me up). Keep to 2–3 sentences and correct tense and word forms.

範例: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and motivates me to be productive. For example, when I listen to upbeat songs while working, I feel more energetic and focused.

建議: Clarify contrasting ideas and use correct adjectives: avoid saying both 'stressed' and 'relaxed' together. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific effect and an example. Use linking words (because, therefore) and correct grammar (makes, motivates).

範例: Yes, happy music definitely excites me because upbeat rhythms make me feel energetic and motivated. For instance, I often play cheerful songs before studying or exercising, which helps me concentrate and boosts my stamina.

建議: Give a direct answer about past or future plans, use correct sentence structure and reduce hesitation. If you haven’t taken classes, say so and then state a clear plan with specifics (what type of class, when, with whom, and why). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I haven’t taken formal music classes yet, but I plan to next year. I want to join a beginner singing course with a friend to improve my vocal technique and learn basic music theory.

建議: Answer directly and give specific examples of activities. Use correct grammar (while jogging, it helps me relax) and avoid contradictions. Provide one short example showing benefit and keep sentences coherent with linking words (for example, because, which).

範例: Yes, I often listen to music while exercising, especially when I go jogging in the mornings. For example, upbeat playlists help me keep a steady pace and make the run feel less tiring, so I feel more relaxed afterwards.

× I can uh, do many activity, do many work.

✓ I can do many activities and many kinds of work.

The noun 'activity' should be plural as 'activities' to match 'many'; 'work' when countable needs a qualifier like 'kinds of' or use 'a lot of work'. Use base verb 'do' once and connect items with 'and' for clarity.

× I prefer happy music because when I have a happy, when I feel happy, I, I can uh, do many activity, do many work.

✓ I prefer happy music because when I feel happy, I can do many activities and a lot of work.

The phrase 'have a happy' is incorrect; use 'feel happy'. Also 'do many work' should be 'a lot of work' or 'many kinds of work'. Prepositions and collocations must match 'feel' with emotions and 'do' with activities/work.

× So, uh, at the same time, when I feel sad, I can uh, hear music to set.

✓ At the same time, when I feel sad, I can listen to music to calm down.

Use 'listen to music' rather than 'hear music', and 'to calm down' or 'to feel better' instead of 'to set', which is incorrect here. 'Listen to' is the correct verb-preposition collocation for actively paying attention to music.

× So happy music make me a comfortable, make me get motivation for do, uh, some work, uh, in the future.

✓ So happy music makes me comfortable and motivates me to do some work in the future.

With third-person singular subject 'happy music', verbs must add -s: 'makes' and 'motivates'. Also 'a comfortable' is wrong; use the adjective 'comfortable' without an article. Use 'motivates me to do' for correct verb patterns.

× Because when I hear happy music, I feel straight, I feel really stressed. I feel relaxed in my own.

✓ When I hear happy music, I don't feel stressed; I feel relaxed and comfortable.

The original contradicts itself and uses 'straight' incorrectly (likely meant 'stressed' or 'straight' is wrong). Replace with a clear present-tense contrast and proper adjectives. 'In my own' is incorrect; use 'comfortable' or 'at ease'.

× Maybe in the future I will take some class for music because umm, music, uh, I like to hear, I like to song when I have a free time.

✓ Maybe in the future I will take some music classes because I like to listen to music and sing when I have free time.

Use 'music classes' (plural) and the verb 'listen to' instead of 'hear'. 'Sing' is the correct verb for 'song'. Omit 'a' before 'free time'. Pronouns and verbs should match: 'I like to listen' and 'I like to sing'.

× So I think in the future, uh, me and friend, I think I take 1A class for uh, improve music.

✓ So I think in the future my friend and I will take a Level 1A music class to improve my musical skills.

Use subject pronoun order 'my friend and I' and future form 'will take'. '1A class' should be clarified as 'Level 1A music class' and 'to improve my musical skills' is the correct infinitive purpose structure.

× I often listen to music when I do some activity, when I exercise, I'm jogging.

✓ I often listen to music when I do activities, when I exercise, or when I'm jogging.

Place adverbs and clauses for parallel structure and add conjunction 'or' for listing. Use plural 'activities' and consistent verb forms 'exercise' and 'I'm jogging'.

× So that's why I also make me relax when I jogging, I feel stressed.

✓ That's why music also helps me relax when I'm jogging and feeling stressed.

Reflexive 'make me relax' is awkward; use 'helps me relax'. Use 'when I'm jogging' (correct verb form) and connect clauses properly. 'I feel stressed' changed to 'feeling stressed' for continuity.

× So because when I listen to music, I feel uh, not straight, I feel relaxed.

✓ When I listen to music, I don't feel stressed; I feel relaxed.

'Not straight' is incorrect; likely meant 'not stressed'. Use negative contraction 'don't feel stressed' for present tense. Maintain subject-verb agreement and correct adjective choice.