音乐— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct grammar, state your preference directly, then give one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "uplifts my mood", "energises me").

範例: I prefer happy music because it uplifts my mood and energises me. For example, when I'm feeling down I put on upbeat pop songs which help me feel more positive and motivated.

建議: Answer directly, then explain briefly with specific details. Use correct vocabulary ("beats" not "beads") and grammar (subject-verb agreement). Avoid vague claims like "enhance my personality" without explanation.

範例: Yes. Happy music makes me feel more excited because the strong beats and fast rhythm lift my spirits. For instance, listening to dance music before an event helps me feel confident and energetic.

建議: Start with a clear direct response, then give concise supporting details with linking words. Use correct tense and natural phrasing ("I was always busy with my studies" not "academic subject"). Give a specific example of an app or how you learned.

範例: No, I haven't taken formal music classes because I was always busy with my studies as a child. However, I learned a lot using apps like YouTube and dedicated tutorials, for example I followed guitar lessons on YouTube to learn basic chords.

建議: Respond directly, then give a specific situation and concise reason using linking words. Correct grammar (use present tense for habits) and avoid unnecessary repetition.

範例: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things, especially when I travel for work. For example, on a two-hour bus ride I play podcasts and upbeat songs to pass the time and keep myself energetic.

× I really prefer to listen happy music because I feel that when we listen happy music it boosts our it boost energy and it also gives us positive points.

✓ I really prefer listening to happy music because I feel that when we listen to happy music it boosts our energy and also gives us positive feelings.

Use of verb + -ing after 'prefer' requires 'listening' (grammar type 8). Also 'listen happy music' needs the preposition 'to' (type 11). 'It boosts our it boost energy' has tense/form duplication; use singular 'boosts our energy'. 'Positive points' is unnatural; 'positive feelings' fits context. Suggestions: use 'prefer listening to', include 'to' after 'listen', use correct verb form 'boosts', and choose appropriate noun 'feelings'.

× So whenever I am feeling sad, I always try to listen loud music and happier music it makes my.

✓ So whenever I feel sad, I always try to listen to loud, happier music because it makes me feel better.

Use present simple 'feel' for habitual situations instead of progressive 'am feeling' (type 6 present tense vs 5 past tense confusion). 'Listen loud music' needs 'to' (type 11). Sentence fragment 'it makes my.' lacks object and verb; complete as 'it makes me feel better' (type 23 sentence without a verb/complete thought). Suggestions: use 'I feel' for habits, include 'to' after listen, and finish the clause with an object.

× Yes exactly when I listen happy music it make me more excited and joyful because the beads and the rhythm of these music uplift my mood.

✓ Yes, exactly. When I listen to happy music it makes me more excited and joyful because the beats and the rhythm of this music uplift my mood.

'Listen happy music' needs 'to' (type 11). 'It make' should be 'it makes' to agree with third person singular subject (type 2 and 27 subject-verb agreement). 'Beads' is wrong word; correct is 'beats' (vocabulary/adjective but treated as word choice). 'These music' should be 'this music' or 'this type of music' (type 11/22 article usage). Suggestions: add 'to' after listen, use 'makes' for third person singular, use 'beats' and 'this music'.

× Moreover it enhance my personality also.

✓ Moreover, it enhances my personality as well.

Missing third person singular verb agreement: 'it enhance' should be 'it enhances' (type 2/27). 'Also' is better placed as 'as well' at end for formality (type 13 adverb placement). Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement and place adverb appropriately.

× So I always listen music that are loud or.

✓ So I always listen to music that is loud or upbeat.

'Listen music' needs the preposition 'to' (type 11). 'Music' is uncountable and takes singular 'is' not 'are' (type 1 singular/plural and 27 subject-verb agreement). The sentence was incomplete; completed with 'upbeat' to finish thought. Suggestions: use 'listen to', treat 'music' as singular/uncountable, and complete the comparison.

× Well, I did not take any music classes because when I was a child I always busy with my academic subject, so I never get a chance to attend any music classes.

✓ Well, I did not take any music classes because when I was a child I was always busy with my academic subjects, so I never got a chance to attend any music classes.

Use past tense consistently: 'was always busy' is correct but 'always busy' needs 'was' (type 5). 'Academic subject' should be plural 'academic subjects' (type 1). 'I never get a chance' should be past 'I never got a chance' to match past context (type 5). Suggestions: keep past tense throughout, pluralize 'subjects'.

× But yes, definitely I learn music from my smartphone and there are so many musical platforms such as apps which gives us information about music sources.

✓ But yes, I definitely learn about music from my smartphone, and there are so many musical platforms, such as apps, which give us information about music resources.

'I learn music' is awkward; use 'learn about music' or 'learn music' with object; present simple for habit is acceptable (type 6). 'Which gives' should be 'which give' to agree with plural 'apps' or 'platforms' (type 27). 'Music sources' is better as 'music resources' (word choice). Suggestions: use 'learn about music', ensure subject-verb agreement with 'give', and use 'resources'.

× Yes, I like music when I do other things such as when I was traveling for my job and that time I was free.

✓ Yes, I like to listen to music when I do other things, such as when I am traveling for my job and I am free.

Tense consistency: 'was traveling' shifts past when context seems general/habitual; use present continuous 'am traveling' or present simple 'travel' for habitual (type 6/5). 'Like music' should be 'like to listen to music' (preposition 'to') (type 11). Suggestions: use 'like to listen to music' and keep tense consistent for habitual actions.

× And I always try to listen music because I reached at my destination and it takes 2 hours.

✓ And I always try to listen to music when I reach my destination, and it takes two hours.

Use 'listen to music' (type 11). 'Reached at my destination' is incorrect; use 'reach my destination' or 'arrive at my destination' (type 11). Tense should be present simple for habitual actions: 'reach' rather than 'reached' (type 6/5). Write numbers as words in formal speech 'two hours' optional. Suggestions: use 'listen to', 'reach/arrive at', and keep tense consistent.

× So that time I'm feeling bored in the bus. So I prefer to listen music.

✓ So at that time I feel bored on the bus, so I prefer to listen to music.

'I'm feeling bored' can be simplified to present simple 'I feel' for habitual situations (type 6). Use 'on the bus' not 'in the bus' in most English varieties (preposition issue type 11). 'Prefer to listen music' needs 'to' (type 11). Sentence structure improved for clarity (type 26). Suggestions: use 'at that time', 'on the bus', and 'listen to music'.

× It makes my mood very energetic and pleasant.

✓ It makes my mood very upbeat and pleasant.

'Energetic' describes a person, not typically 'mood'; 'upbeat' better describes mood (type 13). Suggestions: choose adjectives that collocate naturally with 'mood', e.g., 'upbeat', 'positive', 'better'.