教师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response repeats the examiner's question and does not answer. To improve, answer directly with a topic sentence stating whether you have a favorite teacher, then add one brief supporting detail (reason or specific trait). Keep it natural and under five sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

範例: Yes, I do have a favorite teacher. She was my English teacher because she made lessons fun and gave helpful feedback, which improved my confidence.

建議: Again you repeated the question instead of answering. State your intention clearly, then give a reason or brief explanation with a linking word (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Keep it concise and natural language.

範例: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I prefer working in technology, but I admire teachers for their patience and communication skills.

建議: This answer is unclear and does not provide information. Improve by answering directly (yes/no), then add a specific memory or reason why you remember that teacher. Use linking words like 'and' or 'because' to connect ideas. Keep it under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I remember my primary school math teacher because he used games to teach difficult concepts, and I still use his problem-solving tips.

建議: The phrasing is incorrect and you did not answer. Use the correct verb (be 'in touch with') and answer directly, then give a short detail about how often or by what means you keep contact (e.g., social media, occasional messages).

範例: No, I'm not in regular contact with them, but I occasionally follow one teacher on social media and send a message on special occasions.

建議: This repeats the question and has grammatical error. Answer directly with one or two specific ways the teacher helped you, using linking words like 'for example' or 'by'. Include a concrete result if possible.

範例: My favorite teacher helped me improve my writing by giving detailed feedback and suggesting reading materials, so my essays became clearer and more organized.

建議: The answer is confused and does not respond. State your preference clearly (which group you prefer or if you like them equally), then give a reason and a brief comparison using linking words like 'because' or 'whereas'.

範例: I prefer my primary school teachers because they were more patient and supportive, whereas my high school teachers focused more on exam results.

× Do you have favorite teacher?

✓ Do you have a favorite teacher?

Missing indefinite article 'a' before singular countable noun 'favorite teacher'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner. Add 'a' to form 'a favorite teacher'.

× Do you want to be a teacher in the future?

✓ Do you want to be a teacher in the future?

This sentence is already grammatically correct and matches the present simple for a general future intention. No changes needed.

× Do you have a? Do you have a teacher from your past as you still remember?

✓ Do you have a teacher from your past whom you still remember?

Redundant and awkward phrasing. Remove the extra 'Do you have a?' and replace 'as you still remember' with the relative pronoun 'whom you still remember' (or 'that you still remember') to correctly link the clause to 'teacher'. Use 'whom' when referring to the object of the verb 'remember' or use 'that' for informal speech.

× Are you still touching the primary school teacher?

✓ Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?

'Touching' is a literal verb meaning physical contact and is incorrect for meaning 'keeping contact'. Use the idiomatic expression 'in touch with'. Also match number/plural to 'teachers' if asking generally about multiple teachers.

× In what way has your favorite teacher have helped you?

✓ In what way has your favorite teacher helped you?

When using present perfect the correct structure is 'has' + past participle. The sentence incorrectly uses both 'has' and 'have'. Remove 'have' so it becomes 'has helped'.

× Do you like your primary teacher or your name? High school?

✓ Do you prefer your primary school teachers or your high school teachers?

The original is fragmented and unclear ('your name? High school?'). Rephrase to a clear comparison using 'prefer' or 'do you like ... more' and parallel noun phrases 'primary school teachers' and 'high school teachers'. Ensure parallel structure for clarity and grammatical correctness.