教师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be more specific about why you liked them, and keep it concise (1-2 sentences). Use a clear topic sentence followed by one supporting detail with a linking word.

範例: Yes. My favorite teacher was my secondary school history teacher because she made lessons engaging and explained difficult events clearly. For example, she used stories and maps which helped me remember dates and causes.

建議: Answer directly and use correct tense and word order. State whether you want to be a teacher now, then briefly explain why your dream changed with one clear reason and a linking word (e.g., however, but, because).

範例: I used to want to be a teacher when I was a child, but I no longer want that because my interests have shifted toward technology and design. Therefore, I am now planning a career in software development.

建議: Combine ideas into a concise response, correct verb forms, and give one specific memory to make the answer more vivid. Use a linking word like "also" or "although."

範例: Yes, I still remember several teachers from primary and secondary school, especially my English teacher. Although I think they may have forgotten me, I remember her patience and the way she encouraged me to read more books.

建議: Answer directly, correct grammar, and be specific about how you interact (which platform, how often). Use linking words such as "but" or "however."

範例: No, I am not in direct contact with them, but I follow some teachers on Facebook and Instagram. Occasionally they like or comment on my posts, which is nice to see.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence and give one or two specific examples of help, using correct tense and linking words like "for example" or "for instance." Avoid repetition.

範例: My favorite teachers helped me academically and emotionally. For example, they gave extra tutoring when I struggled with topics and suggested useful study methods like making timelines and practice quizzes.

建議: Answer directly with a comparison, use comparative language (e.g., "more than", "as much as"), and provide a clear reason with one supporting detail and a linking word like "because" or "since."

範例: I don't like one group more than the other; I appreciate both equally because primary teachers helped build my basics while high school teachers prepared me for exams. As a result, I remember them both for different reasons.

× Yes, in my secondary school I have my favorite teacher who teach me the history.

✓ Yes, in my secondary school I had a favorite teacher who taught me history.

The student uses present tense verbs 'have' and 'teach' where past tense is needed because they refer to a past situation (secondary school). This is a third person singular subject ('teacher') so the past form 'taught' should be used; also 'had' matches the past time frame. Remove the unnecessary definite article before 'history'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past experiences and use 'teach' -> 'taught', and omit 'the' before school subjects unless specific.

× In my childhood dream, I wish I can become a teacher in the future, but nowadays when I growing up I have changed my dream.

✓ When I was a child I wished I could become a teacher, but as I grew up I changed my dream.

Several tense and modal errors: 'wish I can' is incorrect for past desire — use 'wished I could'. 'In my childhood dream' is awkward; use 'When I was a child' or 'In my childhood'. 'When I growing up' mixes forms; use past simple 'as I grew up'. 'I have changed my dream' should be simple past 'I changed my dream' to match the past narrative. Suggestion: maintain past tense when talking about childhood and use appropriate modal 'could' for ability/desire in the past.

× Yes, my teacher from my past who teach me in the secondary and primary school, I still remember.

✓ Yes, I still remember my teachers from my primary and secondary school who taught me.

The verb 'teach' is wrong for past reference; use past 'taught'. Also plural 'teachers' fits since both primary and secondary teachers are implied. The sentence structure was awkward — reorder to 'I still remember my teachers...' and use 'primary and secondary school' phrase. Suggestion: use past tense 'taught' and plural 'teachers' when referring to more than one.

× I still remember them, but I think they had forgotten me already.

✓ I still remember them, but I think they have already forgotten me.

Use of past perfect 'had forgotten' is unnecessary when comparing to present time; present perfect 'have forgotten' is appropriate to express that the forgetting may have already occurred with relevance to now. Also place 'already' before the main verb in this structure. Suggestion: use present perfect to describe an action completed at an unspecified time before now.

× No, but I will see their profile in the social media and sometimes they will leave some message or comment at my under my post.

✓ No, but I look at their profiles on social media and sometimes they leave messages or comments under my posts.

The original uses future 'will' incorrectly for habitual actions; use present simple for routines ('I look', 'they leave'). 'Their profile' should be plural 'profiles' if referring to multiple teachers. Use 'on social media' not 'in the social media'. 'Leave some message or comment at my under my post' has incorrect preposition and word order — use 'leave messages or comments under my posts'. Suggestion: use present simple for regular activities, correct pluralization and prepositions.

× They help me a lot. Sometimes that I remember they will help me in my studies.

✓ They helped me a lot. I remember that they used to help me with my studies.

Tense inconsistency and awkward structure: because this refers to past teachers, use past tense 'helped' and 'used to help'. The phrase 'Sometimes that I remember they will help me' is ungrammatical; 'I remember that they used to help me' is correct. Also 'in my studies' -> 'with my studies'. Suggestion: use 'used to' for repeated past actions and restructure the sentence as a clear statement.

× Sometimes they will give me some subject suggestion when I feel confused about the question or about the courses.

✓ Sometimes they gave me subject suggestions when I felt confused about a question or about a course.

Preposition and number issues: 'give me some subject suggestion' should be plural 'subject suggestions'. For past context, use 'gave' and 'felt'. 'Confused about the question or about the courses' is better as 'confused about a question or a course' or 'about the course'. Suggestion: match plural/singular and use correct prepositions 'about' with 'confused' and consistent past tense.

× I know my primary school teachers and my high school teachers that I like are similar because they help me a lot so I will remember them as long as the time.

✓ I know that the primary school teachers and the high school teachers I like are similar because they helped me a lot, so I will remember them for a long time.

Several problems: tense should be past 'helped' when referring to past assistance. Word order and relative clause needed: 'the teachers I like' is clearer. 'As long as the time' is unidiomatic; use 'for a long time'. Also include definite articles 'the' before school types. Suggestion: use clear relative clauses, correct tense for past actions, and idiomatic time expressions.