教师— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise, avoid repetition, use correct grammar and a clear structure: topic sentence + specific supporting detail. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct verb forms. Aim for 2–4 clear sentences.

範例: Yes. My favorite teacher is Sarah, who taught me English in high school. She encouraged me a lot and gave extra help after class because I wanted to improve my speaking. As a result, my confidence in English increased.

建議: Clarify your position (yes/no) in one sentence, then give 1–2 reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid contradictory statements. Use vocabulary like 'patient', 'caring', and 'require'.

範例: No, I don't plan to be a teacher in the future. Although I admire teachers because the job requires patience and care, I prefer a career in technology where I can use my technical skills.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific details (name, subject, example of help). Use past tense consistently and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'when' properly.

範例: Yes. Besides Sarah, I remember my primary school teacher Catherine, who taught science. She helped me understand difficult topics, for example by explaining experiments step by step when I didn't understand the lessons.

建議: Answer directly, then provide one or two specific examples of how you stay in touch. Use correct tense and smoother linking phrases like 'for example', 'if there are', and 'last year'. Keep it concise.

範例: Yes, I am still in touch with them. For example, when the school organizes alumni events they send me an invitation, and last year I returned for the graduation ceremony and met several teachers.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific ways the teacher helped you, with correct grammar. Use linking words such as 'for example' and proper verb forms ('spent', 'answered').

範例: She helped me by giving extra lessons after school and answering my questions by email. For example, she spent her free time correcting my essays and explained mistakes so I could improve.

建議: Be direct and concise. State your preference clearly, then give a specific reason with correct grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid filler words ('um', 'uh').

範例: I prefer my high school teachers because they provided guidance about university and career choices. For instance, my English teacher helped me find suitable degree programs and gave practical advice about applications.

× Yes, I do have the favorite teacher.

✓ Yes, I do have a favorite teacher.

Use of the definite article 'the' is incorrect because the speaker refers to any one favorite teacher, not a specific previously mentioned teacher. Use the indefinite article 'a' before a singular noun when mentioning it for the first time.

× She is the She is my English teacher when I'm in high school.

✓ She was my English teacher when I was in high school.

The sentence repeats and mixes present and past. Because the speaker refers to a past period (high school), use past tense 'was' and remove the duplicated phrase. Ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent tense.

× She always she always encourage me and teach me the English and sometimes when.

✓ She always encouraged me and taught me English.

Multiple issues: repetition, wrong verb tense and form. For a past habit during school, use past simple 'encouraged' and 'taught'. Omit the article 'the' before 'English'. Remove the incomplete fragment 'and sometimes when'.

× I'm not accepted this this option in the future, but right now for my opinion I don't think so.

✓ I would not choose that option for the future; right now, in my opinion, I don't think so.

Original uses incorrect verb phrase 'I'm not accepted this' and repetition. Use conditional 'would not choose' or simple 'I would not accept that option' to express future preference. Place 'in my opinion' in correct position.

× I will choose teacher in the future to be a teacher in the future because I think teacher is the job that need the patience, need the love, need the kind to.

✓ I will not choose to be a teacher in the future because I think teaching is a job that requires patience, love, and kindness.

Original repeats and mixes positive/negative and uses incorrect noun forms and verb agreement. Use 'teaching' or 'being a teacher' and 'requires' (singular subject 'job' needs singular verb). List qualities using parallel nouns 'patience, love, and kindness'.

× Yes, sure or umm, except Sarah. I got one more teacher from my primary school she called Catherine and she always helped me a lot when I'm don't understood the science knowledge she was having.

✓ Yes, besides Sarah, I had another teacher from primary school called Catherine, and she always helped me a lot when I didn't understand science.

Multiple problems: 'except Sarah' should be 'besides Sarah'; use past tense 'had' and 'didn't understand' for past events; 'science knowledge she was having' is ungrammatical—use 'science' or 'scientific concepts'. Combine clauses with correct punctuation.

× Umm, we still got to contact example like the primary school. Got any activities that can invite graduate student to come back? She will contact me and notice me.

✓ Umm, we still keep in contact. For example, if the primary school has activities that invite former students to come back, they contact and inform me.

Original uses incorrect and awkward prepositions and phrasing: 'got to contact' is informal and unclear. Use 'keep in contact' or 'we still stay in touch'. 'Graduate student' is wrong context; use 'former students' or 'alumni'. Use 'inform' instead of 'notice' for being notified.

× Sometimes I will come, I will go back to primary school. Example like last year, I do go back to my primary school.

✓ Sometimes I go back to my primary school. For example, last year I went back to my primary school.

Use habitual present 'go back' for repeated actions and past simple 'went back' for a specific event last year. Remove unnecessary future 'will' when describing habitual or past actions.

× They always help me and I don't understand the knowledge or I don't understand what they teach.

✓ They always helped me when I didn't understand the material or what they were teaching.

Maintain past tense consistency for past teachers: use 'helped', 'didn't understand', and 'were teaching'. Use 'material' instead of 'knowledge' for natural collocation.

× They will have they will spend their free time or their own time respond my question although at school or in.

✓ They would spend their free time to answer my questions, whether at school or elsewhere.

Fix repetition and verb form: use 'spend time to answer' or 'take time to answer'. 'Respond my question' should be 'answer my questions' or 'respond to my questions'. 'Although at school or in' is incomplete; use 'at school or elsewhere'.

× Umm, I think I like more high school teacher than my primary school teacher.

✓ I think I like my high school teachers more than my primary school teachers.

Word order for 'like...more' requires the object to follow; also plural 'teachers' matches general comparison. Place 'more' after the verb phrase. Maintain parallelism in comparing groups.

× After graduate, she still stand the uh degree information for me and the university information that then she will give me some suggestion.

✓ After I graduated, she still provided degree and university information for me and gave me some suggestions.

Use 'after I graduated' rather than 'after graduate'. Use past tense 'provided' and 'gave' for past help. 'Degree information' and 'university information' are awkward but acceptable; use plural 'suggestions'. Ensure subject 'she' refers to the teacher and verbs agree.