视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatically complete. State your opinion clearly, avoid repetition, and give one or two concise reasons with a linking word. Keep responses natural and within 2–4 sentences.

範例: No, I don’t enjoy taking pictures of views. I prefer photographing people because I focus on capturing personal expressions and emotions. For example, I like portrait photography because it helps me connect with the subject.

建議: Give a clear preference or explain why you like both using clearer linking words and specific details. Avoid vague phrases like “their own things.” Use 2–3 sentences and one linking word such as “because” or “however.”

範例: I like both urban and rural views because they offer different qualities. Urban scenes are exciting with modern architecture and busy streets, while rural areas are peaceful and full of natural landscapes, so I enjoy photographing each for different reasons.

建議: Structure your answer: start with a clear statement (prefer both or one), then give specific reasons using linking words like “because” and “however.” Avoid filler words and repetitions. Keep it to 2–3 sentences with concrete examples.

範例: I prefer both local and foreign views. Visiting other countries gives me new perspectives and traditions, which is exciting, but I also appreciate familiar places at home because they’re comfortable and meaningful to me.

× No, I completely.

✓ No, I don't.

The original fragment 'No, I completely.' is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence structure error (ID 26). The student likely intended to disagree and needed the auxiliary do: 'No, I don't.' Suggestion: use a full negative clause with a verb (e.g., 'No, I don't.').

× I completely disliked it.

✓ I don't like it at all.

The original uses past tense 'disliked' though the conversation asks about a current preference, so tense is incorrect (ID 5). Replace with present simple 'don't like' to indicate current preference and add 'at all' for emphasis. Suggestion: match tense to the question and use present simple for habits or preferences.

× I like to focus more in personal adjustment.

✓ I like to focus more on personal adjustment.

The preposition should be 'on' not 'in' after 'focus' (ID 11). Use 'focus on' to indicate the target of attention. Also 'personal adjustment' might be better rephrased depending on intended meaning (e.g., 'personal development'). Suggestion: use verb + 'on' and choose precise nouns.

× I prefer both areas since both have respectively their own especially and also they specialize in their own things.

✓ I prefer both, since each has its own special features and they specialize in different things.

The original is wordy and ungrammatical with misplaced adverbs and pronouns, a sentence structure problem (ID 26). 'Respectively' and 'especially' are misused; 'each has its own special features' is clearer. Suggestion: simplify and use 'each' and 'its' for possession and 'special features' for clarity.

× Whatever it could be considered a foreigner, you know, we would like to see new views, new perspective, new traditions, new countries.

✓ Whether it is considered foreign or not, we like to see new views, new perspectives, new traditions, and new countries.

The phrase 'Whatever it could be considered a foreigner' misuses pronouns and forms and is unclear, an incorrect pronoun/phrase issue (ID 12). Use 'Whether it is considered foreign or not' to introduce contrast. Also pluralize 'perspectives'. Suggestion: start with 'Whether...' and ensure noun agreement.

× But I mean, we'll, we'll go back to, to our roots, you know, to, to what we know.

✓ But I mean, we'll go back to our roots, to what we know.

The sentence contains stuttering and repeated words and commas; this is an issue with conjunction/use of discourse markers and sentence structure (ID 16). Remove repetitions and extra commas to make a clear clause. Suggestion: avoid fillers and repetitions in responses.

× So both still, you know, but at the end roots.

✓ So we enjoy both, but in the end we return to our roots.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical, a sentence structure error (ID 26). 'Both still' and 'but at the end roots' are unclear. Rephrase to show contrast: 'we enjoy both, but in the end we return to our roots.' Suggestion: use clear subject and verb and proper connectors.