视图— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on grammar (verb forms, articles), reduce hesitations and redundant phrases, and organise the answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, when) and correct vocabulary (e.g., “sunsets,” place names). Keep the response to no more than four sentences.

範例: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel to Cox's Bazar I often photograph sunsets because the colours and reflections on the sea look amazing. I try to capture different angles and lighting so I can share vivid memories with my friends.

建議: Give a clear direct answer first, then add one or two specific reasons supported by examples. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (articles, word order). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas and make the answer coherent.

範例: I prefer views in rural areas because the landscapes often look more peaceful and natural. For example, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and quiet villages, which create striking images that urban scenes rarely offer.

建議: Answer directly and politely, then give clear, grammatically correct reasons without irrelevant or unclear phrasing. Avoid run-on sentences and clarify health concerns succinctly (e.g., pollution aggravates my asthma). Use linking words like "because" and keep to two or three sentences maximum.

範例: I prefer views in other countries because many places abroad are cleaner and less polluted. My asthma is often worse in polluted areas at home, so I enjoy travelling to cleaner locations where I can breathe easily and take better photos.

× I love to taking pictures of different views like I was uh, taking pictures sunset when I travel Cox budget.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views. For example, I was taking pictures of the sunset when I traveled to Cox's Bazar.

The verb pattern 'love to taking' is incorrect; after 'love' use either 'to' + base verb or verb+ -ing, but not both. Use 'love taking' or 'love to take'. Also 'travel Cox budget' is incorrect noun/place and tense: it should be 'traveled to Cox's Bazar' (past tense for a past action and proper place name). Separate into two sentences for clarity.

× The pictures is so beautiful.

✓ The pictures are so beautiful.

Plural subject 'pictures' requires plural verb 'are'. Using 'is' with a plural noun is a subject-verb agreement error. Use 'are' for plural subjects.

× I just love it and I want to take more pictures.

✓ I just love it, and I want to take more pictures.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; only punctuation needed for clarity. The present verbs 'love' and 'want' agree with the subject 'I'. Added a comma before the conjunction for readability.

× I prefer views in rural areas the I love rural areas cause the views the the pictures are look so unreal and there are so many places I visited.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas. I love rural areas because the views and the pictures look so unreal, and there are so many places I have visited.

The original sentence is run-on and contains filler words and repetitions ('the the'). 'Cause' is informal; use 'because'. 'Are look' is incorrect; use 'look' or 'are' but not both. Use present perfect 'have visited' to indicate experiences up to now. Break into two sentences and remove repetitions for clarity.

× I prefer views in other countries because of my countries is so much polluted.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because my country is very polluted.

'My countries is' mixes plural 'countries' with singular possessive; it should be 'my country is'. 'Because of' followed by a clause is awkward; use 'because' plus clause. 'So much polluted' is nonnative phrasing; use 'very polluted' or 'so polluted'. Subject-verb agreement corrected as well.

× I that's why I don't like the places because of that I want asthma problem.

✓ That's why I don't like those places; they can cause asthma problems for me.

The original has fragments and unclear meaning. 'I that's why' is ungrammatical; start with 'That's why'. 'Because of that I want asthma problem' is incorrect: 'want' is wrong verb and phrase; likely intended 'they cause asthma problems' or 'they give me asthma problems'. Rephrase to clearly express causation and use plural 'problems' when speaking generally.